Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15 - Page 42

really cute n loving update :)

wonderful update...

Without shirt u r very very distracting... Oh he isss!!!!!! *blush blush*****
Hai Wat a cute update... Loved it to the coreee! If bad mood can do this thn Wat will good mood do???? U Knwo I sud demand moreee stuff n expect more cuz when I do I have it.. U r kind enough to give meee!!!!!! I want a scene where virat kisses her... Not out of romance but put of frustration or be it anger!!! Make her shut her mouth... Lol she talk tooo much... Let her go speechlesss!!!! Then I want all her Indian cloths to disappear... Do the makeover n make her more sexyyy ! Western attire I want... Seduce virat in evey shape or form.. But keeping the distance.. He will be seduced but won't show.. :p Wat else... Ha I want a scne where manvi is playing with a babyyy scene not preggy one but she or he is pampering one ... Then want a jealousy one... All wanted in this honeymoon trip... Make it wild.. Larger thn lifeee go above n beyound.. Break the rule n bann the rule maker!!! If u know Wat I mean...

Coming back to critic I wanna Knwo Wat virat heard on th plane seat lol mumbling while sleeping is Very dangerous so do us a favorXxx make this odd play agaisnt manvi's will... I want manvi to say I want a kiss virat Ji.. Drunk or conscious or in sleep doesn't matter DO It... Well for the romance n all my expectations r way high cuz u have given sexy ones in alll of ur stories so this one wud be the highest oneee!!!
I'm sooo happy that u r making the boring virat interesting... Don't u dare to enter simmi in honey moon lol u can .. Evil hint :p
The kisss awww how cuteee! The suit seemed sexy so explore it!!!!
Aww my boy was in painnn n they way she took care of her was haiii!!! N tears of worry it was good n tie part tooo I felt the last line of virat a Kushalious touch ^__^

Oh yesss make manvi lost somewhere not lost in mind but like lost lost..kidnapping will do better bit for now it's ok..
Lol too much demand better fulfill all :$ update ASAp!

Bilu again... 😃 😃
Anu u r d first writer who writes awesome updates in bad mood also.. in my knwldge.. Loved it.. Virat is changing.. awww loving it.. and Mannu nd shirtless Virat.. quite distracting hun.. 😉 Cant wait for next update.. muahhhazz nd thank u.. ❤️

Both updates are awesome...

Wow you wrote this in a bad mood, love to read your updates after a good mood.

Anu !!! itni jaldi next update !!! thank u !! turn out to be bad is Far away Anu coz this is damn awesome !!!👍🏼 i really really loved it ❤️ the first thing i saw after getting up is the update of this !!! it bring a big smile on face !!! din ko suriwaat with a smile :D😃 superb naa😉 staring from virat carrying manvi to the room eeks 😳😳 n blushing blushing manvi is soo cute ❤️😛 now i m damn curious aakir wat did manvi have said in sleep in the flight !!???😉 the way virat was teasing her !!! aww such a cute scene :D the way manvi get emotional seeing virat in this state wow !! manvi is really such a sweetheart !!!❤️ kya !! manvi was saying she can't resist seeing virat shirtless juz can't stop smiling after reading this line :D caring manvi is Fab😳 n the way virat is getting effected n slowly noticing small small things of manvi !! i feel it is really adorable !! this is really amazing !!! have read it twice ⭐️⭐️ really looking forward for next update !!! thanks for the pm in advance :D
p.s thanx for the tip Anu !! now i get the lesson wat to do when suffering from food poisoning :D thank u ❤️ take care :D

it was awesome update

Wow is an understatement for this update. I loved it to the core. Every bit of it was awesome. I am enjoying how Virman are coming close ti each other. Just loved the caring n concerned Mannu. She is so adorable.. And Virat is to die for. Awesome update. I am being selfish enough to say that I am waiting for your next update. Muah Anu.