Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15

First Previous

Page

105

Next Last

Frequent Posters

pink1

@pink1

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#341

awesome update finally he destroy his first wife thing
but what about ring he still kept with him and nursery part
nice update soon

Quote

Anaida

@iamanaida

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#342

Another awesome update...well written...glad to c Virat trying to erase Simmi's thots. i enjoyed the hospital scene...the baby thing was so cute...wat a way to bring back Virat's mood...btw ...r u planning to be a doctor Anu? or r u one? just felt so...

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

deepika03

@deepika03

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#343

i am literally in love with ur writing style 😊
hats off to u for writing such cute ideas of getting out of depression 😉

Quote

NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#344

Oh my God it was such an awesome update. I really felt for Virat, its always hard to let go of someone that you've loved so much.

Loved the part where Virat says

"I hate you"

and then Manvi says "But I love you."

she will be the one to get him out of his misery, I know I could never choose a favourite among all your stories but right now this is my favourite. Of course that will probably change when I read another update of Addicted or TLF.

Lol I love all your stories they are so different that its a treat to read.

Waiting for the next update, hope that Manvi will buy lacy stuff 🤣

love Nush

Quote

itsfate

@itsfate

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#345

awesome update

manvi is so cute

love virman with babies scene

waiting for their trip

continue soon

thanks for the pm

Quote

virmanhus

@virmanhus

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#346

will never stop bugging u

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Quote

saathana

@saathana

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#347

Hey sorry for not commenting.update is as usual fabulous.

The most touching thing i liked in this part is the hospital scene.

Loved manvi's character very much.Loved the way how she was caring for virat and her definition to live the life by illustrating using examples with the new born babies.😊😊😊

i think virat is slowly falling for manvi.hated sumi's ego and arrogant nature.😉😉

please unite both virat and manvi soon.

awesome update waiting eagerly for the next part too.continue soon.

Quote

Tejeswy

@kushal90

Explorer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#348

A hugeee sorry for sch late reply *making puppy face* 😆

You really want me to tell you smthn abt ur updates.!?

As usual they are amazingly amazing..!! 😉

Just hope that this business trip brings in Viratji nd Manvi more closer 😉

Update this one as soon as possible nd do pm me 😃 🤗

Quote

Nivedita

@NivFemirist

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#349

Part 4: U noe this FF gets cuter and cuter day by day!!! 😆ViratJI does noe how to pull leg of my mannu. I loved it!😉 at the same time he praised her too 😃
and the interview part pheeeww bad luck that simmi was good in her job 😡😆 well as if it matters to me i like how manvi thinks: If they don't want such an awesome person in their hospital, it is seriously their loss. Now really the girl is just awesome and cute,nai?! ⭐️
the 2nd professor was really 😡 good he deserved slap from manvi and after that she is wondering why she got so much angry?! ofcourse she would and she should!
And that phone convo with preity 😆 I liked how virat is tough with his staff but bears manvi's nautanki at home 😃
And their lunch part virat is so caring and 😆"God, this is so embarrassing. Somebody please remind him that I am the doctor!"
Virat is possessive abt manvi good sign i guess and 🤣

"That bas***d! I should have warned you about him. He is like that, a big leech. You don't know how many female medicos would be laughing their asses off happily for how Virat trashed him." She laughed.

"I slapped him too. Everyone keeps forgetting about that. I can take care of myself."
so true!!! u write so perfectly adding all elements properly in the update 👏

Part 5: oh so Simmi is still not over with it!
Why the hell she cares abt what happens in virat's or manvi's life?!
"You think Virat will ever even think about sharing his life with you? Share his bed with you? Forget that, do you think he will even notice you? He must have just married you because mom and dad tortured him to. He is full of puppy love sweetheart - for me - that will never change. That's the affect Simmi has. His clinging on to me like a doorbell used to freak the hell out of me and now will stay with you for the rest of your life. So, have a happy married life little sister. By the way, you never get tired of using my hand-me-downs, do you?" she starts laughing. My blood boils and I haven't felt this angry in a long time, I cut her call and fling the phone away at the wall breaking it into three different pieces."
^^ This shows that she knew virat can go to any extent for her but still she didnt want to stay with him! stupid woman. Well good she left him so that he can marry someone else who is better for him and he can be happy with!
Later the evening, I was sitting on the couch hugging my mom while she was grading some papers for her class. "You are so mean? Only 5 points for that answer?" I commented for the 100^th time in the last one hour.
^^ Even I do that!! 😆 & what a perfect family combo-virman+ manvi's parents ❤️
and so virat is now not in love with simmi and he comes to noe everything abt what happened to manvi without her telling him & so cute that hug and the ending of this part was also cute!!!

Part 6:There is a mad rush - a rush to get rid of this stuff - throw it out of my life, just like she threw me out of hers. Within a few minutes, I pulled all her stuff out and I dumped in out in the dumpster outside the house.
According to me Manvi's entry in Virat's life did wonders to his heart it healed him! glad that he acknowledges the fact that simmi was never into him! but then why did she marry him in the first place?😕
Manvi is sharing a good rapport with priya they became friends❤️
Par Mannu, I haven't frosted the cake yet. You said you will die if you don't eat chocolate cake in the next 30 minutes."

"That's ok. I like plain cake more. I will take a big piece home, please drop me."

"You are unbelievable!!"

"I know. Pleaaase"

Manvi took virat in pediatrics section for healing! best place heard alot abt cute babies from my frnd and seniors!! hope to visit soon and i ll remember ur update then 😃

and lol she scared that nurse 😆 and this Rahul- Priya duo are sweet same as in TLF 😃

Thanks for writing such beautiful FFs 😃

- Niv

Edited by NivluvsNishal - 12 years ago