Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15 - Page 21

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Posted: 12 years ago
Omg omg i m have a big big grin on face😃😃😃Kamaal kaa update Anueeks i juz loved each n every bit of it❤️❤️❤️...this was some nasha in the update i juz don't wanna stop...kahaan rok dalaa...😛i really wanna read more*pouts*~~~i noe i m being greedy par kya karuu...it was soo soo good naa:)))man hi nahi hai rok ne kaa.😛Manvi n the Secretary 😆😆kya pakaayaa😉awwn i love u mannu❤️outburst of virat.loved it alot..❤️😃😃Virat hit tat pevert...eeks😳😳 "MY WIFE"thing is soo nice...hayyethe ending...wow...so sweet...soo damn cute ⭐️⭐️U always rock Anu...n once again a rocking update👍🏼BANG ON⭐️⭐️⭐️looking forward for next update...really excited to read more...plz continue this one also if possible!!!plz:)))thanks for the pm in advance :D
Edited by yaminnthida - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow the update was superb loved every bit of it ADORABLE
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG OMG OMG this is freakinggg!!!!!!!!!!!
dii dis is adorable, lovely, bubbly, sweet, cute, super awesome!!!!
oh my,,, i loveee dis mannu,, can she get any adorable?? ofcoz she can she's more adorable in this chap than previous now she wud be even more in the next for sure, afterall the author is Anu, the queen of every beautiful things..

now mannu's cuteness, there's no boundary for it.. in each dialogue & thought of hers dere's a kid, an innocent soul & a pure angel..
''God! Why did she have to pick the same profession as me''
now here, she & we know dat simmi is elder, so obviously its mannu d one who picked d same profession as her sister.. she's complaining to god about her sis?? wow!!
''Nobody knows anymore than you do! Haww!''
an update back she had the same 'haww' expression wen he complemented about her saree,, now here again the same adorable thought.. she's really really cute.. she's yearning for his complements isnt she?? she just wants him to love her beyond limits & throw away simmi's thoughts.
again to prove my view, ''MY WIFE!!!''
she doesnt wants or forgets watever he says once she is complemented or made happy by him & dats exactly y she got late to recover the fact dat virat teased her saying she annoys by talking & she didnt hear anything except 'my wife' from virat... OMG isnt she a sweeetheart???

the two interviews,, they rocked!! i expected something veryyy opposite but u nailed it by giving two different concepts in the two interviews.. the first one u dealt with her increasing annoyance & hatred towards simmi the second one, u made her temper to rise & showed us she's not a cry baby but a tigress brave enough to handle a disgusting situation...
"She is not Simmi 'Vadhera' anymore" dere she is, annoyed beyond limits..
''He shakes my hand a little longer than necessary. I eye him suspiciously.''
''They are right in front of your gigantic nose, you freak!''
her thoughts are interesting, funny & beautiful..

her conversation vt virat's secretary... am i to rofl at her thought ''I need someone to chat with.'' or adore her kiddish nature in doing so??
"Ma'm" Priety stammers.
I shake my head. I just told her that the most important quality of a secretary is to be strong and in control.
oh honey,, she's cute cute cute.. i can see her shaking her head neagatively.. she gave dat poor priety to listen to her unasked lecture just becoz she needs a diversion & now she's shaking her head at priety's lack of control?? she is tooo cute diii..
its all becoz of u!!! u must be poured with kisses for making her this sweet.. i loveee u!!

then comes the most sweeett part vch i badly wanted to know, 'a list of things dat make manvi happy' that was lovely..
the first one ''Do not call/refer/think of Manvi as a kid.'' that is AWESOMEEE & virat's "You want me to not to call you a kid, after reading this list?" and most interestingly,, Manvi's
"Matlab?" goddd she didnt get him?? she's such a kid!! lovely di lovely!

her companion to get rid of some tension is talk about random things?? wow.. & i noticed she's carefree isnt she? she doesnt allow watever dat happend to effect her, she tries to erase it by focusing on som other thing, she doesnt complain it or cries at the thought,, adorable character!!
& so brilliant of u to make virat get to watever happend by observing her wounded hand.. i mean u didnt make manvi to complain him, rather mesmerised mannu's character by showing her completely different antics to such an incident,, by doing so we got an interesting phone convo & her nonstop nonrelated chats hence her cuteness was perfectly delivered.

& the last part
''Oh no!
Somebody kill me!!!
He is standing behind us, looking at me, with a small smile playing on his face. He must have heard us. I look away. What happens to me when he is looking at me like this?
My face flushes. I just wanted to disappear from there.''
for the third time,, very bad place to stop di!! wat an adorable, romantic, freaking moment??? u killed it!!! i vl kill u if u didnt update dis asap!!
(wat are u planning soon to be Mrs.?? virat is half concious in addicted, manvi is heving an evil smirk in TLF, Virat comes to know about manvi's mom's cancer in Umbrella & now here???)

have to tell something about virat nah.. mmm.. he's too good, loveble, caring, protective, falling for my mannu & forgetting the nonworthy simmi.. i love hi alot.. his small gestures & CARE for manvi are so sweet, romantic & brilliant..

BILU is driving me maddd plsss update as soon..
& as usual get my hugggs, kisses & love & love only!!! ❤️
hats off to u for this mindblowing creation!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
I sooo cannot say hw much I loved this update from the very first to the very last line line- loved it all her list of wat makes her happy- started laughin lyk mad jus readin the no.1 thing she wrote n yh virat is right after reading the list dnt call her a kid 🤣n then in the end wne she sed virat likes it - oh hw much I loved that part wen he was behind her smiling !!! I sooo love ur update- cnt wait for the next part continue quickly plzzz😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Finally I m commenting here ...I read it 4 hours Back ..but could not comment then..So finally I m here ..and again I exactly got what I wanted from this story an Extremely Sweet Maanvi who can make anyone fall in love with an Awesome Viraat ...with a golden Heart...Maanvi's Demand List ...😆 ..and Viraat's response "You still want me to Not Call you a Kid??" ...I feel sad for Viraat at these lines cause once Viraat was as jovial as her ..but his past changed him .and he is not locked up but even then he will rise against any one who touches his loved ones... as of now Maanvi is mistaking his care for her as increasing love .but ..in future I pray LOVE bug hits Viraat and they both fall for eachother ...It is going to be a memorable journey to them and as well as us ...You write so well It has to be ...Maanvi has an inner fight of different kind ..since childhood she has been compared to her Elder Sister ...and now this competition has entered to her Love life too ..she has a fight to prove that She is an Individual of Her Own Type ..and Make Her Own Identity ...Make Place in Hearts of People As Maanvi Not as Simmi's Sister Maanvi both in Personal and Professional life. But most Importantly She needs to Make Place in Viraat's Heart. The Place which is still having debris of Simmi and ..Clean it and make it her own ..A tough road is ahead of her

Love
Sumana
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was one cute update!!⭐️⭐️ Loved it Anu! ❤️❤️ Manvi is so so adorable 😛😛.. Her thoughts and antics are very well portrayed 👏👏.. She can win anyone's heart with her innocence and loving nature.. I hope Virat can see the difference between Manvi and that selfish Simmi!! Loved the car scene.. Virat called her annoying but she didn't get it at first 😆.. Its really nice to see that she has a lot of confidence in her merit and abilities and loved the way she refused to take any recommendation from outside.. That perv interviewer was so irritating 😡.. Glad that she gave him one tight slap! Manvi was chatting with Virat's secretary 😆.. She is just impossible.. Loved that "A list of things that make Manvi happy" thing.. She is crazy 😆.. Virat actually cares a lot about her and he is one protective hubby!!😃 He thrashed that perv!! Wow :D.. Loved the last scene.. Virat heard her.. Ekks!! I guess he is actually enjoying her craziness for him 😉.. Beautifully written Anu as usual 👏👏.. Eagerly waiting for the next part.. Thank you for the pm in advance.. Take care 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
*res

Edit

I never thought that Maanvi has so much retort... first the slap after coming up for her due.
Then the lunch with Virat ... her non stop talking ... so much fun...
Then we get possessive Virat and trashing that doctor! 😃

Thanks for the pm 😊
Edited by Kiekeboe - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superbbb update...
Reallyy luved it..
Omggg virat is being possessive...
Nd last scene was awwsum...her blush..
Amazingg update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
u know what anu it feels amazing to read ur upadte a night before my exam rofl i cnt imagine i hv an exam at eight and im reading bilu at two in the night hahahaha but it was amazinggg urghhh hate tht moron prof. grrr whtevaaa i loved how virat noticed manvi's cuts
and got to that bas*** hayeee MY WIFE!!! how adorable... so he feels her to be his dignity anyways loved that and the last part was soo dammm cute virat liked it!! rolf and he heard it
ekkksss thnx for the pm
i wont say update soon coz ur nt gona untill u come back so i would say come back soon after wrapping up whtever came
till then byeee
lots of love
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Posted: 12 years ago
really cute update...da list thing ws way too funny :)

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