Imagine a beautiful night,,, u are sitting in a swing in a beautiful terrace all alone (experiencing the fragrance of flowers), sipping ur hot chocolate while getting lost in the fullmoon & at the shining stars... its beauty ryt?? in the meantime if ur skin experiences a chill due to a pleasant breeze how wud u feel at that moment???
u wud feel it out of the world, calm, quiet, soothing, tension free, protected, dreamy, u wud feel it like taking a fresh breath,,,, exactly the same thing did i experience thru this update...
it was so soothing, it didnt carry a tension filled environment,, it carried peace & alot of silence, it carried LOVE... ā¤ļø
this plot is so amazing, the characters are giving life to this plot...
manvi is definitely a sweetheart while virat is a heartthrob..
i am clueless at the exact point to start.. let me try..
as i told u earlier, manvi doesnt love him, she likes him & likes to have him as hers,, its now the mission starts,,
''It was only then I realized that I have been staring at him, holding his kurta in my fist and when he looks down at me, I move away flustered. Shit! What was that? My heart was racing and I am suddenly extremely nervous.''
she's falling for him,, i hope she'll soon discover her love for him..
so for the first time the talkative mannu is speechless,, she's gonna fall in love with her hubby,, WOW!!!
u are MINDBLOWING in creating this manvi & making her smart in her answers & thoughts... its just pouring this story with life.. i really want to meet such a person & huggg her tight...
she captured me thru her dialogues & thoughts, here are my favourites
-''Tume patha hai na tum kitni stupid ho?"
"Yeah, that's a part of my charm!''
-"You will make a list?" He raises his eye-brows.
"Yeah. I am very organized."
-"You can add this to your list, I am a hugger, and on bad days, I would need one or maybe two."
-"He looks at me, trying to read and understand what I was made of, I get this look a lot - from people, in general."
-''No Manvi, you cannot think like that ā Virat and Simmi go way back, he cannot just forget all about her so fast. The rational part of my brain argues.
SIMMI DID!!!!! Screams another outraged part of my brain''
now these are enough to fall for her,, virat,, u are so dead!!!
Virat is no less,, he keeps calm & is making us to drool over him... this vadhera is so lovable,, i just want to killl simmi.. but i love her too, if not, manvi wudnt have stepped in his life..
y is dis guy so undestanding & caring?? still loving a girl who left him?? i think, as he lost his family, he knows the value of love & care so he's showering whoever around him with what he lost; love, no matter if dat whoever around him is giving him back the love or not.. I am so falling for him,, he's adorable... i want him to soon let manvi to make him comeout of his turmoil..
I was confused how exactly this mannu shud be described, there u go, u beautifully told it in two words, she's 'magical & a maniac' very true..
i admired mannu being annoyed with everything dat reminds her of simmi,, she becomes a jealousy wife for a minute, she hates her for leaving THE BEST husband on earth,, but remind her, she must be thankful to dat character, for she got him becoz of her..
mannu was acting like a 'kid excited at receiving presents' wen virat complemented her...
''His compliment just woke me out of my sulk and my heart was beaming. I was wearing red and golden color saree that my mom bought for me and I suddenly fall in love with my saree. He said I look nice! Haww!''
she's different, she loves the saree becoz he told her she look nice in it??? wow!! she possess this breath taking beauty in character!!
now all appreciation goes to the mastermind, my Anu dii... u are THE BEST!!! i will never forget dat u are this mannu, u are this virat & u are the mindblowing person behind this heart throbbing concept...
the last part.. wow,, romantic & i was lost... i became a maniac by recalling the incident & smiling like an idiot...
''There is a small sign of smile even on his face. What does that mean?''
IT MEANS HE'S FALLING FOR HER!!!!! hurrayyy!!! i put a somersault in my head at this... y am i so crazy for these couple??? becoz they are of love & life..
i still feel dat um not done, i'll never be done till i meet u & give u a tight hug,, till den get my warm hugs, wet kisses from someone very close to u.. love u loads dii,, u & ur art means alot to me...
Hats off for the person u are!!! ā¤ļø
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