Virman-SS-but I love you!!! part 15

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Ankita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Anu di its me ur anky 😃 and here starts a lilttle review of mine 😆

this ss of yours is just mindblowing,superb,fantastic and the third part is just freaking awesome... 👏👏👍🏼

loved it to the core ❤️❤️❤️

this manvi is a little brat who has just become my favourite for her shaitanis and nautankis 😆😃

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"Mom didn't feed me!!!!!!!" he mimicked my voice in a a funny way "bacchi ho kya? Go eat something from the kitchen." this was amazingg... 😃 mimicked her hehe 😆

"arey, par I don't know how to cook. Make me something."

"Make you something??? Very nice! Menu bhi lao? Boliye, what will you have madamji?" menu ki baat cracked me up 😆🤣madam ji 😆

"I don't know, nothing spicy." she is ordering gosh!! lol 😆 🤣

this part was just mindblowing di aww there cute nok jhok ❤️❤️ 😊

"We have magggie.." I hold the packet up like it is a prize. i too love maggiee ❤️ 😃

I cannot believe I am eating Maggie at this hour. This girl will be the death of me! manvi will be for sure 😉 😃

and manvi's pouting and arguing like a little child is just so cutee... 😃 just love it!❤️

di and that room , bed and couch part OMG i was laughinh my heads off 😆😆🤣

she is such a brat! 😈

she can do anything god i love this mannu 😃

and in 2nd part when she was told to sit in the bed she was standing in the balcony 😆

i hate this simi 😡 she left virat who loves her a lot till now 😔

virat was so sad thinking about simi and his marriage bt no more sadness in his life when manvi has entered in his life 😊❤️❤️

the 1st part was amazing and awesomeee.. too 😃 ❤️

and u r seriously a flawless writer di 👏👏👏

love u a lot ❤️❤️

muahh... 😊😉

and here comes the end of my pachar pachar 😆😆🤣🤣

thank you for reading my nonsense 😆

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rasp_berry

@rasp_berry

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Awww so lovely shovely couple...muwhh...all thnxs to that gr8 simmi...lolzzz...1st wedding night with maggi...superb...cont soon

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Amu

@Mannat_n

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Manvi is so sweeet...i loved her in ur story...thanks 4 pm...continue soon!

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Anaida

@iamanaida

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Read this story for the first time today...loved it...another awesome FF...cant wait for your next update..hope next chap Virat expresses himself to her...dis Maanvi is so much like Nia...love her😛 thanq ...its lovely..

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

loved it
awesome update again
manvi is really so adorable
loving her a lot
thanks a lot for the pm

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itsfate

@itsfate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

awesome update

manvi irritating virat

continue soon

thanks for the pm

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Syed695

@Syed695

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

Awesome..~!!! u Updated..Yay..~!!! I was right at 1 thing, she wouldn't give up on him...n Viratji is so cute...actually Maanvi is all cute...1 flashback cleared the entire difference between sisters...but Virat is really hurt and he some where wanted to marry her..which is nice..Eager for next wht he wants to discuss Thnks for the PM Anu..~!!!

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virmanfan013

@virmanfan013

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

wow anu another ss. Ok just read both three parts nd was just speechless nd donno how to explain that how much i like ur new work. Awesome writing dear nd luved it to the core. When i started reading the first part i was like 😲 i mean virat is married that too with manvi's elder sis simmi bt she left him so feeling bad for him. Bt now virat had been forced to marry with manvi. Aww manvi was so cute in it nd i was rofling after reading her dialogues. It's a very different concept dear plz cont soon nd thanks for the pm

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#109

nice update she is so funny and Maggi part was nice poor guy he was not get any happy life for his first marriage looking forward to start there love story update soon