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Ah!...So sheethal has finally started showing her colours..She wants khushi all to herself...

loved the update but my hatred for Shyam and Sheetal

This is a really good ff!!
I really liked it.
And although each chapter is not centred around Khushi and Mr Mudcake as such, you weave them in artfully.
You write really well and I want to thank you because I have enjoyed reading the chapters so far.
Hope to read more soon!

Also I got negative vibes from Sheetal since the beginning and suspected it was she who spread things about Khushi..
And Shyam is just a creepo..
Amazing story.
Thanks

Originally posted by: Arshix144

RES :D

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Yet again I am so pleased with my stalking and reserving skills, because it has given me the pleasure of being the first one to post after the update. Honestly I never manage to do this with any other FICS I read...ok ok now that I am done congratulating myself with securing the first post let us move one to what I thought about the chapter!

And we finally get a glimpse of the first negative sign of friendship with Sheetal's behaviour. This was so real Shikha, how many times we have seen people gossip then go back to the person and claim that it was the other person doing the deed when they had began the whole process all by themselves. A classic example of this was wonderfully penned down by you here. Though it was nothing serious and could very well be taken as a joke, it is still the first sign of a completely unacceptable behaviour. Let us see what you unravel next for us in this regard!

On to Khushi and Mr Mudcake's encounter, it is always my favourite part of this FF. Their encounters are always heartwarming. This time Mr Mudcake openly flirted with her. It was adorable how he made the reference about the lack of books falling yet ended up apologizing again for scaring her. That first sign of concern when he discovered about her being anemic and then assuring her how she was indirectly helping anyway was too damn cute . Can he get any sweeter? *sighs without even exchanging names they share this sweet connection. Then there is Shyamuu who is best at being the Creepuu😆 Just his one look is enough to creep all of us out again all credit to you for the portrayal of his character.

I better wrap up my rambling with saying how much I adored all the outfits you picked for Khushi once again, thank you for the effort you put into including all the pictures. Loved the chapter and I shall look forward to more of your WONDERFUL WONDERFUL work! xo

Originally posted by: amri123

hey

great update

loved it

obviously my favorite part was Khushi's chat with her Mr. Mudcake

very nice

so cute and he's so sweet, they don't even know each other's names and they have that connection

and look, there were absolutely no books this time😲

i guess you really are keeping them safe from the falling objects...haha😆

and this Sheetal chick is getting on my nerves😡

what is she trying to do?? i mean seriously i hate when people do stuff like that

its so immature

and it was freaky reading about Khushi, what i mean is that i'm also aneamic, i also study medicine and i hate needles😳

anyways continue soon and thanks of the email😊

Originally posted by: cheesemad

great update...

I was wondering when will I get email from u Shikha...I was missing all the stories...n today when my phone pinged I was grinning like an idoit...

coming to the update...

as usual awesome...

but what happened at the last, why would Sheetal do this??

m wondering whats wrong??

I just loved Khushi's and Mr. Mudcake's encounter...

continue soon:)

Originally posted by: JCJS

Arshi were too cute. Ha sheetal is being evil I think the truth Will come out soon and I wish that it Will b not due to shyam by any mean. The three muskateers are cute. Waiting for the next update. Thks for the mail dear.

Originally posted by: fatima2603

Hate sheetal and hate shyaam!

love mr. mudcake eyes!


and I much prefer khushis new friends!

Originally posted by: sana11

sheetal and shyam dont seem to be in the right page...

love the conversation between her and mr.mudcake...

amazing update 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

update the next soon dear😃