MY STORY : KR & SS *ON HOLD* - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow interesting concept update soon :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Here I am with the Prologue of this SS

Hope you all will enjoy it

Meet you at the end of the update

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PROLOGUE

Everything was perfect, as perfect as it could be. I had a little family which consisted of me, my dad and my mom. We were a happy little family and were contended with what life had given us. But I guess everything was ought to be changed.

First of all let me tell you who am I.

I am Kria Ghai a girl of 7. My dad, Mr. Rajeev Ghai owns a Dance Institue and my Mom, Mrs. Smriti Ghai is a Stay at Home Mum.

Like every girl in this world even I too had dreams and wishes. As we used to read in the fairy tales that at the end the evil is vanished and the prince takes his princess and rides off to his castle. Even I had a dream to get such a prince.

But one unfortunate day of my life ruined everything.

It was the day when my Mom left me and my Dad forever.

From then on my Dad was my best friend.

I used to share each and every thing with him.

We still remembered Mom on many occasions but life means moving on.

A year later on one fine day a fat lady came in my dad's dance institue with her two daughters who were pretty much ugly and were fighting with each other over a petty toffee. Behind the two came a boy older than me with a big grin on his face. But wait his teeth OMG. I wanted to puke that very moment.

She was walking towards my dad but unfortunately or for my Dad fortunately she slipped. How I wish my dad had not saved her at the right moment.

That fat fellow must have fallen on her butt and made a fool of herself.

After that day my life again took a new turn.

I got a Step Mom and a two not so cute step sisters and a very very rude elder step brother. But only I was the one with whom he behaved rudely.

This time I had a family but no love.

But as far as my dad was happy so was I.

But life still had something more in store for me.

I guess I was born with a bad luck.

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So I'll update the first chapter soon.

Hope you all liked it.

Please hit the like tab and comment.

Thankxx everyone

Bye Bye and TC.

( For SwaRon fans : Sharon and Swayam's Entry will be done later on )


Edited by Anjori - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Awesum prologue... 👏
It reminds me of Cinderella...

Wid an additional elder bro... 🤣
Do cont soon...

N Thnks 4 d pm...

Do pm me 4 d further updates...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
sounds soo intresting!!!!!
awsomely written!!

doing gr8 work!

looking for update ! plz dont keep waiting for long!
Edited by llyrics - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
sounds really interesting
cinderalla was my fav disney princess and here kriya -the cinderalla and rey - the prince...quite cute
please please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 12 years ago
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great prologue and good quite different... continue soon and pm me...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Nyc proluge
Sad one
Update fast upate
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
Hey ...
Nice prologue ...
Interesting indeed ...
Continue soon ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
Really interesting concept dear 👏
Sort of like Hillary Duff's 'A Cinderella Story'
Really looking forward to read it
Plz pm me when u update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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reminds me of cindrella story...loved it...update soon...

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