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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Thanks a lot dr frs ...
first part posted soon ...
hop u enjoys...
piya...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Concept dassu hai de

Cs Mai gayal krnay walay suspanse dal dia

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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PART=1
"Love faded onces... but never die..."

SCENCE-OUSIDE Moon night club..
TIME:-11PM..
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His face expression told that,
He looks very angry ,
yes he is..
his hand is bleeding heavly n blood drops continusly fall on the ground,
but he didnt care that blady blood..
first time may be he is angry on himself..
..N one young lady tried to controled his blood..
he snached his hand away from her n give her angerly glare..
DONT U INTERFEAR IN MY LIFE SHAKHI..Just stay away from me..
"Samjhe yaa samjhayon"
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He used his famous dialog..
But Arjun..She said but stoped to see his angers thats rised up n up..
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mere rasteee...(Steching the word) se hato.. (He yelled)
(Shakhi imediatly step back n give him way)..
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Arjun open his suv..N sit the driving sits,
before left he again yelled..or haan etf se keh dena ,mera picha kerne or mujhe track kerne ke koshish mat kerna..
Samjheee...*
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he drive his suv panicly as he wanna to run himself or...???
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SCENCE SHIFT:-
All etf members comes outside the moon night club..
Rathore-Dammm...!!! shakhi rawte ne kuch bataya ke vo kahan jaa raha hai,
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Ek to ye case abhi tak solve nahi huya or upper se ye rawte..
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Choree wishper-
Sh-yr ye arjun sir ko kya huya..shubhaya tak to ek dam thik the,
or es case ko bahoot achhe se solve ker rahe the,
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Ch-haa shree baat to tu thik bol raha hai,
Es club main akhir ehsa kya huya..
sh-Tune dekha kaihase ghur ghure ker dekh rahe the us dancer ko..
Ch-haa shree lagta hai arjun sir ko pasand aa gaye..
per item the badi mast..
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Sh-haan jab tak usne arjun sir ko thapad nahi mara hai,
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Ch-i shupat mujhe to ek pal ke liye apni ankhun per yakeen nahi huya..
usane arjun sur ko..hilaaa..
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Rathore yelled..
Shut up u both kya laga rakha hai tuk dono ne..
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Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Shreee rathor yelled,
Sh-yes sir..
Ra-arjun ka mobile track karo or pata karo vo kahan hai.
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Sh-sir mujhe nahi lagta koe phayada hoga..arjun sir ne apna mobile pehale he switch off ker rakha haii..
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Ra-Dammm...Ittt he banged his fist.. Sudenly his mobile phone start ringing..
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(It was from commisioner sir) .
Rathore picked the call Yaa sir ji ..ji thik hai haan
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N cut the call.. Sir every think ok.. ayesha comes near n asked .. Rathore just nodded his head,
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Its to Late officers..So ab hum sab ko gher jana chahiye,
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choree left together n sameer drop first shakshi to her house,
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He diving car but he was in deep thought,
As he was connecting somthing,
Ayesha sits next to him,she noticed that n put her hand on his shoulder (sam is driving)
Sab thik to hai naa sam,(She asked)
He just passed smiled n nodded his head in positive,
Yaa i m fine but u dont warry, She continusly looking him,
sudenly He stoped SUV,
Ab kya huya sam she asked,
Sameer smiled..Kahan kho gaye ho jaan..Samne dekho apna gher aa gaya,
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She shly turned her face away n comes out the SUV,
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SCENCE SHIFT:- Arjun didnt know where he was going,
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(But uske dill main ek badi se uljhan or kashmakash chal rahi he)
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He stoped his car outside one old house..
accutaly its not old..its totaly damage,
(Or arjun he itsself did that) (He stil inside the SUV)
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He looks Towards the house ,he closed his eyes,one long tears comes out his eyes..
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Few flashes comes out in front of his eyes...
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1-He lift one beautiful girls in his hand..n moved inside the house..
2-They sleeping peace full in each others arms.. He woke up n stairing her..she looks so beautifulll...Just fresh doop of Morning Ose..
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He couldnt stoped himself for kissing her..
3-Nooo plz trust me..(she crying)

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

He slaped hard...She fall on the floor..
her cornner of lips bleeding hardly..
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Arjun tightly closed his eyes...
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what happened few days before---
Etf got one case..
its realated to drag mafiya..or humman tracking,
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SCENCE:-conferance room:-

RATHORE-officers hamen information mile hai..pool side party ke name per party main drugs ke hera pheri hone vali hai..
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Ar-hamen imediatly es party main jana hoga..der kis baat ke hai..
Ra-haan shree jaldy se patry main jaane ke liye passes arenge karo,
or hum sab vahan as a undercover jayenge..
Ar-whattt..??
to phir mujhe es main koe interest nahi,
Ra-damm rawte dont forget ..i m the cheif not u so just follow my order,
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(on the other uncover naame sun ker girl over excited ho jaati hain)
Per ye parti hoo kahan rahi hai..girl asked in excitement
(ayesha, shakhi n liza)
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Arjun just give his glare its enough to shut all mouth..
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Ra- lagbhag teen parties hone vali hai,
1-HOtal sunsine
2-Night club
3-moon night hotal
vo bhi alag alag din,
hum nahi jante ke vo drug dealing kab hone vali hai..
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Bus hamen one by one kerke en sab parties main jaa ker check kerna hoga..
or ager galti se bhi en logon ko hamare move ke bhanag lag gaye to sare kiye karaye per paani phir jayega..
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ab tum samjhe rawte ke maine undercover ke baat kyun kiii..
(both looks each other with dadly glares)
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Sameer continue:-
Ye ek couple party hai..
so only couple r allowed..
So main or ayesha..
looking toward arjun,
Arjun n shakshi,Party main ander jayege..
or choree n liza recording or baki ka kaam
is that clear..
Yes sir..
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Hotal SUNSINE:-
One man dressup in waiter roaming here n there or serving drink to all..
Sudenly he bang with one tall n handsome man..
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He wears black suits looking so dashing..N hot..
he dressed up like as wanna to kill

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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The waiter looks nervously to him..
he tried to avoiding his graze..
He looked lower n say sorry to him n turned imediatly..
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he man was non other then arjun..
Ar to waiter-Rokuuu...
Waiter stoped in mid,
Arjun comes in front of him n took one glass of drink..
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Waiter took a long breath as he felt relaif..
Arjun feel somthink abnormal..
Befor he clear his dout..
somone called his from behind...
he turned toward the voice..
it was shakshii..
She looks gog in his sleevless short dress upto knees..
but arjun was not interested in her..he ignored again n turned back toward the waiter..
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n the very next instant waiter diseaper like a thin air..
But arjun was thinking somthink..
kuch to ajeeb tha per kya...
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yesss yes he used lady perfumes meens..???
TBC--
Who is the waiter..???
is he realy girl but who..??
Lot of mistry waiting for nexr part...
MAST YA BORE..
hop u like..
if u wanna i will conti this one..
dont forget to like or drop ur comments..
piya..
PS:-Riya is not the part of etf before but about future dont know...N all other charackter hav sam post or work..

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Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago