ARSHI FF: HOPE IN RAIN-A STORY OF PASSION, LINK TO THREAD 2{page 138}

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vittoriA Giardano

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

Sounds interesting. Please PM me as you continue. Kushi sounds like a happy go lucky girl But your prologue was a bit scary. I hope it's not Kushi who loses her spirit to live. Thanks for the PM.

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nilanjana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

oooh it seems interesting

loving it

thanks for the pm :)

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KBS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna
wow...its really nice dear...Khushi is so cute...I am loving it...thanks for the pm dear...

thnx nishu😛

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KBS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: kbtr
Sounds interesting. Please PM me as you continue. Kushi sounds like a happy go lucky girl But your prologue was a bit scary. I hope it's not Kushi who loses her spirit to live. Thanks for the PM.

off course will PM u😆

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KBS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: nilu_sarunholic
oooh it seems interesting
loving it
thanks for the pm :)

thnx yaar😳

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KBS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: Kareena1994
Nice
Loved it

glad u liked it😳

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pooja

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

interesting start.
kushi is purely sankadevi in this part.loved their family bonding.
thanks for pm

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Aruni.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Intro was reeealy cute. But felt like you are rushing it. Just stop, take a breath and write more slowly.

First time effort 👏

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jisa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

khushi is really cute n bubbly..

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KBS

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: aruni50218
Intro was reeealy cute. But felt like you are rushing it. Just stop, take a breath and write more slowly.
First time effort 👏

thnx