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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi I unreserved on pg 59




Edited by melonie - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ahh man i missed you! and the wait was worth it!!
the past was saddening!
please do continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Khushi's past is really distressing.. Buaji is indeed a very good human being to adopt Khushi even though she is not well- off herself to support..

So she finds her parents in his warmth ; no wonder she considers Arnav more than her friend and may be because of that she stayed back to work at Raizada manor when she could have explored many options to get back to her prevoius life style when her parents were alive ..She had gone through life time of miseries at a very tender age of 5 ..
Wonderful description of her past and her reasons for being close to Arnav emotionally..
Their kiss was just enchanting and it became even more beautiful with Khushi's perception.. For a moment, she left behind all her qualms, all their status barriers and gave her 100% to their bond by kissing him from the bottom of her heart .. It seemed like Arnav wanted to demonstrate and assure her in every way via that kiss..
The best part of this update is - Khushi addressing him by his name .. Arnav had been longing for that and it indeed spoke volumes of Khushi's heart even though she is not vocal whatsoever ..

My heart went to both Arnav and Khushi in the end when she dispersed herself in the rain and Arnav feeling vulnerable for getting all the attention when Khushi was left on her own..
If not anyone else , Dadi is definetely going to help them in reaching their destination :)
But one thing confuses me though - I thought Khushi wanted to end this by kissing him good bye but this udpate changed the equations which I am happy about though.. Not sure if I'm going wrong anywhere in interpreting things . In any case , that was one fabulous udpates and I loved all the contents ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
Good to have you back and continuing this story.

Arnav realizing the vast difference in his and Khushi's worlds
and the journey he has ahead of him ...very well written.
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey...its good to see u back rachel...
and the chapter was simply wonderfully...it was too heartening to read about khushis past...it must have been too difficult to adjust like that at such a young age...
and well , the scenes in the rain was beautiful...i hope arnav will cross all these barriers and reach to his kukkoo...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Glad you are back with the next chapter.. have been stalking for a while...
Hope you had a wonderful time off...
Khushi has a very sad past... hope all will heal soon for her... i could imagine the scenes in the rain... so beautiful... you are amazing...
waiting for the next chapter
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Posted: 12 years ago
Khushi's life could have been so much different if her dad hadn't been made a scapegoat. You write angst very well. That part where he realizes that she really has no one to care for her, just broke my heart. Hope to see more frequent updates, now that you've returned from intergalactic traveling. Hope you had a good time :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
welcome back sweetie pie...
the update was just great...
the past... it was...errrmmm... what shd i say... am speechless molten... that's so so heart breaking... so beautifully written... i cried with khushi... i actually did... the way she hold Arnav... the way he understood her need for him... it just melt my heart... you always need a person in ur life who hold you like that... who made you feel special despite all his faults...

i expected some scene when they returned to Raizada mansion but guess you have planned sth else...

n dadi... what a cool lady she is... she never came in ur update without bringing a smile on my face...

keep up the good work... muuuahhh baby... love you 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
First of all welcome back dear writter , v miss u a lot , u can't imagine how happy Iam today. , after reading ur update , now about update , Khushi 's past is so Tragic , poor thing , she lost her parents home evevery thing so quickly , it's sad , so sad , must say Buaji is a good humenbeing she adopt her , although she is poor ,now I understand why Khushi waited for Arnav , why she is so attached to him , cuz basically he is her world , she simply can't live without him , plz dear writter don't break my khushis heart one more time , plz give strength to Arnav so he can standup for his love for his Khushi , I know there r a lot of barriers , like his parents , lavanya , this stupid society , and I think buaji two , but true love can cross all of these hurdles very easily , so. Plz dear writter , it's a humble req , don't prove me wrong



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Posted: 12 years ago
we all missed dis FF like u...nd we were all waiting for d aftermath of d kiss...

but d unexpected tale u strted earlier...blew away mah fude...it was heart wrenchin to c d plight of d 5 yr old kukko...

nd how arnav's entry brought a hope for her nd how it bcome d reason of her existence...

but d wait of so mny years has made both of dem separated by a gap of so society, feelings family nd dere emotions as well...

again i wud say i love d way u represent d diffrence in dere world...

d last line said it all bout d FF...nd wat it will b all bout now...

but yaar i'm missin RK!!!! kab ayege RK nd dadi k patnership...

nd d evilwa...wen will he make an entry...:O

HEY WATS WRNG BTW...AAJKAL U DNT GIVE D SCHEDULE FOR D NXT UPDATE ALONG WID UPDATE...u now i alwys free myself accordibgly to read d update...

plz batana nxt tym se...

GLAD TO HAVE U FULL TYM BCK!!!

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