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Posted: 12 years ago
thanks fr the pm its really so nice nd cnt soon i ll be waiting
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Posted: 12 years ago
PART-162
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J-mannu tujhe pata hai na ki time k saath tujhe kapde fit nahi honge phir itni saari shopping?..virat kuch kaheta nahi aura teri har jid puri karta hai iska ye matlab nahi ki paise aise waste karo..she scold her..
M-looking down nd tears slipping from her eyes-i m sorry..cries..she looks too cute..
J-take breath nd sit next to her-dekh mannu main sirf ye kahe rahu ki itni shopping ki jarurat nahi thi abhi..she said softly..
M-she didn't know why she felt like this bt she hug to jeevika-still tears slipping from her eyes-i m sorry Di..
J-hugged her back-chal koi baat nahi ab age se dhyan rakhna..ab rona bandh kar..bachchi lag rahi hai..ab ye sab noutanki tujhe suit nahi karti..mumma banne vali hai..
Nd she parted away..
Just then virat come out from wasroom after change in his kurta..he get worried to see maanvi crying..walked near to bed nd sit on other side of maanvi..
V-worriedly-maanvi kya hua?..tum thik ho?..hold her hand in his one hand nd placed one hand on her cheek-maanvi tum romentic kyu rahi ho?..bhabhi kya hua maanvi ko?..he throw questions on them worriedly..
J-virat relax...kuch nahi hua hai mannu ko..
Virat looked at jeevika nd remove his hand from maanvi's face..
J-woh bas Maine..
M-cute her-di plz..
J-smile at her-chinta mat kar..teri complain nahi kar rahi..
Virat looked at them with confusion..maanvi looked down..
J-woh bas main kuch jyada hyper ho gai aura mannu ko dat diya isiliye woh rona lagi..lekin ab thik hai..
V-confuse-dat diya?..lekin kyu?
J-stood up from bed nd point towards shopping bags-us k liye..itni sari shopping karne k liye..
V-looked at maanvi who looking down nd wiping her tears nd then looked at jeevika-lekin bhabhi ye saari shopping maanvi ne nahi lekin Maine ki hai..
J-shock-kya?..tumne?
V nodded in yes..
J-virat..tum bhi naa..khud mannu ko bigad rahe ho aur phir shikayat karoge..pata nahi apne bachche ko kitna bigado ge..kyu mannu?
M-looked at jeevika nd gve weak smile..
J-felt something wrong-kya hua shirf sir kyu hila rahi hai?
Virat looked at her..who trying to be normal in front of jeevika..
J-achchha to maine data isiliye?..lekin tujhe bhi to bata na chahiye tha na..bas lagi rone..
M-i m sorry Di..
J-sorry ki bachchi..chal ab aram kar me tarun ki help kar deti hu..
Nd she walked towards door..
M-di..she call her..
Jeevika stop nd turned towards her..
M-get off from bed with removing her hand from him which make him hurt-walked near her-di..main bhi aapke saath niche chalti hu..
V-abt to say bt stop as jeevika say..
J-lekin mannu tu thak gai hogi..tu rest karle dinner k time pr hi ana..
M-di..main thik hu..maine konse patthar tode hai..aur main koi kam karne nahi aa rahi..main mere pyare pyare kids se milne ja rahi hu..vahi se dinner k liye hum aa jayenge..smile..
J-achchha thik hai chal..to v-virat tum thodi Der me dinner k liye aa jana..aur tum bhi maanvi k saath..
Before she complete her sentence maanvi drag her out of room..
M-di..chalo naa..main apne cutties se pura din nahi mili..chalo..
Nd they walked out from room..jeevika felt something wrong between them bt she decided to talk with them later..
Here when maanvi told her that she also want to come with her he want to stop her bt she didn't gve chance nd also when jeevika abt to tell him to joint maanvi with kids..she again intrepted nd walked out from room..
He can clearly see her ignoring him nd his gaze..she totally ignore him nd refuse to talk to him..even she take all blame on her of shopping bt why?..he know she cries bcz of him not for jeevika scold her..she cries bcz he shouted on her..he cannot believe what happening in last few hours..where they r happy nd enjoying in mall to shopping nd fighting cutly nd cute romencing nd gesture for eachother nd in few minutes all vanish..his fear get over him nd he burst out on her..happy moments spoilled by that one moment nd that one guy..
He stood up from bed nd walk towards virika room..he need to short out all things..already jaiswaals entry in their life make him worried nd tense nd now maanvi..he cannot tolerate all this..
He cannot tolerate her ignorance..
He walked inside the room nd found maanvi playing with kids on bed..
He walked near the bed..
V-clear his throats-maanvi..woh..mujhe kuch baat karni hai..
Maanvi already notice him walking inside the room bt she ignore him nd playing with kids..
V-maanvi plz..
Kids looked at virat nd then maanvi..
Adi-aliey..chalo..chachu ko chhotimumma se baat kalni hai..he said cutly..
Aliey-ok..she nodded with cute smile..
They abt to get off from bed but maanvi stop them..
M-kaha ja rahe ho aap dono?
Kids looked at her nd then virat who looking to serious..nd then looked at eachother..
M-dinner k liye abhi 10 min hai..chalo apni paintings khtm karo..saying this with gveing them their drawing books nd colours..
V-to kids..making them get of from bed nd stood on floor-hey kido..jao aur apne gifts mere room se lelo lekin dusre bags ko kharab mat karna..
Both-gift?
V-nodded
Both ecxitly left the room..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Note-
sorry guys...
First for making u all long wait now days..
Nd
also for this both crap updates...
I know they r not good...
Bt
i don't know why but i m not feeling write anything now days...
Not in this story bt in my all...
I just write this two parts without thinking...
Plz try to like...
I try to make next my all updates good one...
Sorry again...
Edited by Niaksharma - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yaar both was a awesome update...
Already hate Jaiswal...

Pleasee continue soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its okay khushi! We understand ! Take your time! 😉 and ur two updates r awesome :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
feel bad for virat
continue soon
thanks for the pm manisha
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Posted: 12 years ago
double updates 😃 awesome yaar continue soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
wonder what jaiswal is upto now
please continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
both part was nice waiting how he will
make her happy update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely updates Khushi!!! :D :D Virat now has to pacify his sherni :p.. Loving this roothna- manana session.. Jeevika scolded her and Virat too shouted at Mannu.. Poor Manvi :(.. But I'm sure he will make her happy again.. Thank you for the double updates :D and Thanks Manisha for the pm :D.. Take care :)

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