ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread Four*

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heavenspirit

@heavenspirit

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#621

reserve

okay lots of things happened...
lots of thing you recreated..
and also with perfection...

the way Khushi felt suffocated and her need for her own identity...
its a change for woman...
but at the same time what Arnav did was just typical...
but both of them were at fault...
this is was i loved in this...
none of the less than the other...

the communication gap...
the need to be independent...
the need to be yourself...
but still being with the same person...
this is such a shade of love...which is reciprocated by almost every other couple...this is real...
the love hate part...you defined it in a new way...

you showed the death scene...
his fear of losing Khushi...and the way he forgot his lines...describes lots of things..
the teri Meri sequence...well water sequence always comes out to be sensual...
i was remembering the river scene from "Suraj hua madham.."

wonderful update...everything feelings portrayed just perfectly...👏

Edited by heavenspirit - 12 years ago

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Hot_Chocolate

@Hot_Chocolate

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#622

ohh...this was amazing juhi di...really a great ending to such an awesome tale...!!!👏

arnav-khushi...these names are always taken together and in each and every tale their understanding, love, passion, chemistry, connection and all other things which they share is out of this world...!!! they are always been treated as characters of fairy tales...!!!😛

but you give them reality of lives...where are heart breaks and misunderstandings and insecurities...!!! 👏

arnav is a superstar and khushi is his wife...!!!

they saw each other somewhere and then love at first sight...!!!

which leads to a hasty marriage night...!!!😆

so khushi thinks that arnav underestimates her, her talent, and her dreams and the only thing he wants from her is the physical intimacy they share...!!

arnav never realizes that khushi really wanted something from her life...she also aspires to be something..to acheive something...!! but things are not exactly same from the arnav's side...he thought that khushi is unsure and she really dont know what she wants to do,,but he is listening to her always...!!!

they have flaws...they both have...miscommunication and lack of understanding...which eat up their marital life...!!! hell..!! their is no telepathy sort of thing existed between them..!!!😉

so after deciding to stay away from each other and to live their own successful lives,,,they still cant resist each other...the scene of the movie make 'em realize that they really love each other...the pull exists...and when arnav decided to woo back khushi..khushi came back on her own and decided to make a fresh start...!!!

the beginning...

i like the way you justify the value of daily soaps/t.v in front of movies...its awesome...!!!👏

and the aura great canyon bound me..i really want to see this palce now...!!!

the hot TERI MERI sequnce is just mindblowing...!!!

u are a fab writer...!!!👍🏼

Edited by avantisharma - 12 years ago

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

RES 5EVA

Teri Meri prem kahani hai adhoori?

J THAT WAS FREAKING BRILLIANT!!! I really dont know how u do it..just when you convince us that this chemistry is almost worth it all, you pull the rug and show us even that has flaws..and a relationship requires much more! And the scenes all of them so so well done, especially khushi acting dying!! this reminds me of a condensed LLATW. Well-worth the wait!

obviously i am coming back for a detailed comment. Do not like this, dammit!!

Edited by LooneyLuna - 12 years ago

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

Juhi read ur note earlier...sorry to hear abt it but good to hear that the issue has been taken care of...really hope that these people stop doing this & taking fame over others' efforts & creativity

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

This made me cry!

How do you manage to write such beautiful stories?

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

beautiful...same feeling like in ipkknd they can not be apart from each other they can be separated some time but not apart if you can understand but i mean