ArHi Tales:Dhadkanein *Thread Four*

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Anjani Patel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1051

Expell's A Tale of Dancing on the Edge

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5ea03091

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hey you guys!! I am a big fan of both of ur work...
Its a great concept...
The scene where Arnav blames khushi for everything after the kidnapping...the scene when Arnav puts silver coins etc...

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IamSwapnali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1053

loved all the tales 😊
all three stories had unique concepts..

Khushi not being that epitome of beauty and Arnav loving her for inner beauty

Dancing... probably is the first story I read where it was Khushi to took a wrong decision and walked out (otherwise it's mostly Arnav who is the bad one 😉 )

And Arnav - a murderer? tauba tauba 🤔 What if Khushi really had informed the police? One could write another story based on that making Khushi villain.. 😃

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inspiringstars

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Constants and Variables - Its funny how her habbit was to recite prime numbers. I am so so happy, I read a less than perfect Khushi, appearance wise. Not because I dont love her perfectly, but imperfections are beautiful too, and its just refreshing to read an insecure Khushi despite of being a successful respected professional. And most of all, the tale was beautiful because Arnav never cared about all of it.

The un-fairy tale - I almost felt sorry for Khushi for being married to Arnav, but a good twist in tale, that was! I love strong Khushi, and I am glad you brought that out in her, sooner. Despite of being cast in Lavanya's shadows, she emerged a winner. Yes morally we might feel she did wrong by standing with a murderer but who are we to judge, when the case is of a wife protecting and comforting her husband, in times when he needs it most. Plus the woman Lavanya did nearly destroy him, she was a cunning manipulative bitch, but did she deserve to die? Who knows, but all that goes around, does come around, at some point in time.

Very unique tales, both of them refreshing in their own way.

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inspiringstars

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Dancing on the Edge -

Oh damn, this tale created such a stunning picture to imagine, it was just beautiful. And you're right, a song and dance, with chemistry as good as theirs, it ought to be in a dramatic breathtaking location. I loved how you weaved the acting part around the real feelings - the heer ranjha episode was so so good in that way, because it brought out the real them, and also made them realize internally what they feel esp Arnav. Of course he acted like an a**hole after that. But thats ASR. Your Arnav was awesome, he did not let his anger ruin what he had for her, and I am glad for that. Life doesnt give us second chances often, and if they have found that chance, they shouldnt leave it.

The best scene has to be - the shooting in water one. I shudder to imagine both Barun and Sanaya doing that with each other. As cheesy as it sounds - they would make the water turn into fire with the intensity and passion of their chemistry.

Loved it.