KR OS: My Lucky Charm

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@Black_Stone

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Amazing one 👏

Rey Singer and Kriya fashion designer Wow !!

Relle loved how u took twists and turns in the story 😃

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Neha

@Pumpkinn

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

Amazing os ...
Loved it ...
Specially the ending 😉
Great work ...

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-spongy-

@-spongy-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

lovely os

loved it

it was really well written...

thank you for the pm...

specially for the ending...

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Mruganka and Anushka

@Arshalicious

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Really cute os

Loved it 😃

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Riya Kapoor

@RiyaArShaKapoor

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awie..this was such an amazing one..love it

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Manu its ur 3rd OS... How many challenges u've got haan..??? 😲
Nywaz if talking abt this one...so i toh just simoly loveddd it... 😃

2 bechare...bina sahare...takraaye ek dusre se...dost bane...phr hua pyaar...phir ikraar...phir izhaar... 😳

arey waah waah kya baat hai akku... *pats my back* ... 🤣 🤣

nywaz...i simply loved it...der meet...der confession...catching thise siblings...evrything ws just awesome...
Keep it up re... 😃

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Mehek Asaria

@Sweet.Sarcastic

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

okk...
i really dnt know how 2 start...
u can be palki for kriyanshians lol...
i mean tht was beautifull!!
i luved the way u showed similarity between kriyansh by the means of shergills...
then the beautifully portrayed list of co-incidences..
car, coffee, house, opportunities... SO WELL WRITEN!!
then the date...
OMG!!! the dress was so nice..
then u see the whisper that rey made in kriya's ears..
even i blushed then...
then the long drive and gonna be kiss..
then the shergill thieves...
then the cops..
then the impatient rey.. kabhi bhi start ho jata hai yaar...despo lol..
then finally the embarassed cop...
OMG the romance was hot!!

in all.. loved it...
thnks fr the pm...