#2.:VIVAAH:. ArSh Short Story THE END Page:121 and Epilogue 125 :D

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nilusoni

@nilusoni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#651

wow just awesome part arman is mind blowing in this part love him

plzzz pm me for next part

continue soon

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naureen

@Norz

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+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#652

Glad aisa kuch nahi howa
Armaan n shilpa ko kahin durr bej dey

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Mannat Shonaholic Royal KaShian (Mannat SRK)

@.Mannat.

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#653

Huhhh great filmy part ;) but ek point weak h, when summit is such an all time kamina , to phir it is not digestable that he just clicked pics n didn't rape her qki esa to hero karta h yar, k bas heroine ko sabak sikhane k lie , darane k lie pictures leke chod de; but sumit is full-to villain . U should have supported this thing with some incident or reason that why he had to leave her --- like he (sumit) heard somebody coming or something else... u know... so if u feel like then incorporate it in ur next update, when he(armaan) will explain everybody and shilpa the truth n reality or her PURITY ;)

Another thing, yar I really like padma (shilpa tulaskar) why r u showing her so narrow minded?? Anjali ko dikha dete doubting her :( :/ ...

Anyways it was good, I expected such a behavior from armaan of course n bas... waiting for the next part :D

Update soon :*

Edited by .Mannat. - 11 years ago

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unnati_gupta

@unnati_gupta

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#654

hey awesome update. ..
shilpa is pure wow great..
but climax matlab??
plzzz write the next part soon...

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blessed4

@blessed4

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#655

Great part please continue soon

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jasmine

@Reyansh23

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#656

Wow 2 good news in one part
First dat nothing happened to Shilpa
N second dat Armaan found dat Sumit n had punched him...n thn d police...deserved it well
Nw waitng fr hw Armaan brings back d old confidence in Shilpa...

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Priya kashian

@LoveArsh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#657

Amazing part anu diii,poor shona have to go so much pain,n that bas***d sumit,thank god armaan ko vo mil gya n achi khasi prtayi ki uski,n i understand but padma ko itna kuch nhi karna chahiye tha,do cont soon diii...take care :)