|Fear, Torment and Loathing|Virman Story Ch6 Pg 38 - Page 26

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Posted: 12 years ago
hey I read the all chapters in one go
Its very interesting story and really looking for how will virman end up together
and what will virat do when he knows about manvi's condition and her cruel step father

the story is loosely similar to lolita for the story line I thought 😕

hey PM me plz when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter-6❤️
Oh Boy!

|Manvi's POV|

Welcome back! Currently I am in my room with Virat who is taking almost all the possible time to solve problems. Dork. It's 7:00 now and I need to go get ready for my date. And this Geek seems to waste all my time. Maybe I should tell him to leave now. "Virat?" he turned towards me and I felt my cheeks heat up. Oh Boy! The effect he has on me. Shutup Manvi you can't just like two guys at once and definitely not Virat. "I am excusing you for today. You may leave now." I said. He looked confused. "Why Manvi? I mean we have more like 45 minutes left, why do you want me to go now?" He asked. I sighed. "Virat actually I have to go out I have some important work to do." I lied. "Oh, what is it?" He asked. Can't you just drop this matter already? "I am going on a date" I said. After he broke up with Shellby he don't move on to any other girl and the weird fact is that he has become very protective of me. Even if I mention a guy's name he would blow up. "What?" He asked shocked. I could see him clenching and unclenching his fists. His jaw tightened and his eyes become red as blood. I just shrugged my shoulders. "I am going on a date." I said again being more confident. "With whom?" He asked venom dripping his voice. What is his problem? "Whoever it is I don't need to explain you now if you'll please then I can go get ready." I said. He looked more angrier than before. "Where?" he asked. "To RedWood restaurant." Oh shit! Why did I just tell him the name? He huffed, took his books and slammed the door. I sighed and went into the bathroom to get ready.

~After few minutes~
I came out looking like this. Woo you like sexy Mans. Yeah whatever. I heard a car honk go and looked out of my window to see Jande sitting in his car looking hot. I blushed a little before running down the stairs. I checked myself one last time in the mirror before exiting. I got into the passenger seat and straightened my outfit. "Hey Manvi" Jande said hugging me slightly. I hugged him back and kissed his cheek. We buckled our seats and he drove us. He apologized a million number of times just for being 10 minutes late. Actually him being 10 minutes late proved beneficial to me because I wasn't done with my makeup. We reached the restaurant. He came out and opened the door for me like a gentleman. Sweet. We got in and took our seats. It was so sweet and romantic here. No disturbance no noise no bitches nothing. So cute. Perfect date. But all good things come to end and this beautiful date also had an early end and by that I mean this. "Hey Manvi" someone called out to me from a distance. I diverted my attention from the menu to the person who called out my name. It was him. Dayummm!
~

So whom do you think manvi saw? Her ex-boyfriend in her old school? Maybe!
Sorry for the world's most shortest update. I apologize like Jande. I am sorry. You guys were requesting for an update and I did it. But you never mentioned for a long update. LOL. Kidding. Reason why it was short is cause I wanted to keep a cliffhanger at the end. I promise the next one is gonna be a looong one. Only if time permits. Since this was short I might update sooner. and by soon I mean very soon. Not like this time. I have so much to tell you guys. I am Pregnant. Kheehahahahahaha. Kidding. I kid around so much that I am sure one day it's gonna be true. My hands ache a lot. In my school we have an investiture ceremony coming up and teachers and students are all busy with it. I refused to take part in any dances cause I am not doing well. So I stayed back in my classroom when all others went for practices and games. My Biology teacher came in and asked me to write notes on the blackboard for 7th graders and monitor their class as well. Trust me it was The Hell! I am having so much headache and my hands hurt from all the writing but still I updated so please appreciate my efforts to some extent. I am not understanding how many if you are actually reading my updates carefully and properly so here's a question from updates till now.


Q) What does Jeevika call Manvi? 10 marks question!



It would be nice if you people answered to the question without referring to the updates.
Love you all

Bye<3

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Edited by Eleanor.Audrey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome..!!! yes was eager for the update but hey not fair this is very short n Cliffhanger...I want to read how this date turns out to be..actually more than that...very imp Virat's official entry in her life n her secrets out..that would bring in the over protective freak..which I love reading...Thanks for the PM..:)!
Edited by Syed695 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wooow...a jealous virat coming up...
Amazinggg update..
I no that person is virat to ruin dere date..
Update asap
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb !!~~ yes i was really waiting for the update :D loved the update although it was short !!! ahaan jealous n possessive virat :D i m loving it ❤️ omg u stop at the wrong place ~~~ plz continue soon Audrey as it is really difficult to wait !! waiting for the update ~~~ tc :D n thanx for the pm :D
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Posted: 12 years ago
lovely update
was waiting since a long time
i think the person who came was virat
waiting eagerly for next part
please continue soon
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
its super short... but awesome!!!
i think its virat, i hope it to be him...
ad jeevika calls manvi 'manvi' i dont know.. or 'sweety'.. well cant remember..
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow!! nice chapter!!
A jealous and possessive virat!! Luving it!!
Thanks for the pm and update soon!!
I have no idea watjeevika calls maanvi!!😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was tooo short just a para 😭
anywayz forgiving you coz epecting the next one to be real long one 😃
i like this overpossessive virat and he didnt date anyone after shellby thats coz he loves manvi and she also knows that he is protective about her ...😉😃
omg i am guessing that should be virat with jeevika ...😆😆
update net part real sooon plzz cant wait for soo long again ...
and thanx alott for the pm 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update he get jealous whe she mention she going date
but one thing member u tell he hate her there is reason and u r disclose
that reason update but u not mention update soon next update should be
very much long

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