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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sadiyaswaron

Awesome update
Lol shivam deserved that.:P
Waiting for next part
Update soon


Thanks
Sure he deserved that
Will try to update soon dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Soon ma'am 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ayesha_Hasan

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Super Awesome Chapter...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">OMG!! That Shirritating..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">He is a traitor...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Poor Taani..
She was so shocked and upset..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">But loved it so much to see how Rey consoled her..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Aww.. he hugged her to comfort her..
And she cries her heart out in his arms..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">And those sweet lines said by rey..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">The way he supported her..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">really loved that part so so so much..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">The best part of this update for me..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Loved to see how Swayam controlled Siren..😆</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">And then the way Rey and Swayam were pulling each others leg...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">That was really funny.</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Loved that scene too..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Hahahah!!! ReYam beat Shirritating Black and Blue...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">And then erased his memory..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Loved the plan..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">Cant wait for the coming updates..</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="4">me totally in love with this FF..</font>


Thank you so much dear for such a lovely and long comment 😃
I m so happy you liked taarey scene
And their reaction after finding shivam's truth
N swaron part too
Reyam are always funny and cute together 😳
Shivam ka toh yahi haal hona tha 😉
Will try to update soon 😊
Awe thanks for loving the FF dear it means a lot 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: --taareylove---

omg such a awesome update Tasha its too superb omg shivam.is traitor who cheat iA , sharing ka gussa bap re bap thank God swayam is there to Handel her and awe taarey scene are so cute, loved reyam scene so much , wahha kya dimmag h swayam ka


Thanks a lot yashi dear 😊
Yup Sharon toh Sharon hai aur swayam n kam nahi 😉
I m glad u liked taarey n reyam scene too 😃
Thanks once again dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

awesome update

sorry for being late
this chp was amazing
tarrey scene was cute
n rey beating shivam was epic n uksa dimag goom jana main kon hu😆
n the best part was swayam controlling sharon😳
update soon



Thanks dear
N it's ok
I m glad u like taarey scene
N shivam's dhulai 😆 the kon hu part 🤣
Yeah remember only swayam can control his Sharon 😉
Will try to update soon 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
sure will try our best to update soon 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

thank u ...

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Hey all our lovely readers,
finally we are here with the update.i know we are hell late but we were really busy so couldn't make it soon shorry for that..and guys we have not done any proof reading so ignore typos..

CH8: YUMMY MAGGIE AUR SWORD FIGHT

Rey's POV

I parked my car and got out; the cool breeze was so refreshing. I walked up to the door and was about to ring the bell when I realized it's too late and moti and Sharon must have slept by now. I opened the door with my pair of keys cautiously making no sound. I saw Sharon was sleeping on the couch with TV still on. I smiled at her and brought a blanket from her room and covered her up and closed the TV. My stomach growled and then I realized I was damn hungry. I decided to have a quick shower before I storm in kitchen for food. I walked passed by moti's bedroom and saw her room door slightly open. I went close to it to check on her and saw her sitting on her bed.

Her head was down and pieces of tore paper were surrounded her. I saw her moving her hand on her cheeks one by one and then I realized that she was crying. My heart ached seeing her crying like this. I so wanted to beat Shirritating again until he breathe his last breath but I couldn't. My stomach growled again and I thought to make something for moti and for me as seeing her in this state it was clear that she must have skipped her dinner. I hated her habit but she didn't care whenever she would be upset she would skip meals spending hours alone. I walked towards the kitchen with full determination but as soon as I stepped in reality strike me. I can't cook. Wow just wow I cursed myself for that and open fridge hoping to find food there but to my bad luck there wasn't anything in there.

I let out a groan and at the same moment my eyes fell on something, Maggie. Yaay I cheered when I found something for us to eat. I did as directed on the packet but still screwed up. Ugh I am only good at fighting, cooking is not my thing. I took the bowl in my hand with less liquid/soup and think noodles and walked towards her room. I knocked wow I just knocked her door. I was surprised with my behavior and she was too. No she was taken by shock. She got stiff as she wasn't expecting anyone that late at her door. She quickly moved all the pieces under her bed sheet or should I say hid it from me. She wiped her tears and placed a fake smile on her face. I ignored her shock expressions and sit in front of her on her bed. "umm I got us, Maggie" I smiled nervously looking at weird looking Maggie I cooked.

She giggled at something I looked up and she had that naughty teasing smile at her face. Gosh she looked them cute like this. I smiled at her idiotically until I realize her reason of smile. She was smiling at my noodles no she was mocking at my noodle. I cutely pouted and she let out an awe. She held her ears with her hands and said "sowwy". I smiled at her action and ate the first bite. Her mouth went wide open I love to see her and this reaction that's why I ate first instead of being a gentle man I acted like an idiot and shameless person. She snatched the bowl from my hand leaving me shock this time and started eating it. She loves Maggie and well me naaah I like pasta more. She was eating and enjoy my idiotic Maggie like a child. I took a chance to see what she was hiding and I saw pieces of tore pictures. I could see shivam's face ripped off from her body I wish it wasn't his picture but real. I felt her gaze on me and I lifted my head towards her. she had pain in her eyes she was at the urge of crying again. No ways she cant she have cried enough already for some creep. I snatched the bowl and started eating like a hungry I don't know but like someone. I offered her some but she refused as I didn't gave her a few minutes ago when she asked for it. I sighed and tried to feed her myself but she pushed my hand I got furious. "what the hell taani? I made this stupid Maggie for you so you don't stay hungry. A person who never stepped in kitchen, cooked for you and you are..." I shut my mouth as soon as I realized what I said. I bit my lips and moved my hand in my hairs. I saw her smile at me and my words before she snatched the bowl and at all that was left. She placed the bowl on the side table and out of nowhere she hugged me. "ladu" she said pain apparent in her voice. I hugged her back protectively and as soon as I heard her sobbing "shhh, moti don't you can't cry for a traitor. Please don't." I broke the hug and cupped her face and wiped her tears with my thumb and said "you can cry over the awful Maggie I made" as soon as I suggested that she giggled and said "it wasn't that bad in fact it was yuummmy" she said yummy like a small child and I smiled at her. I was happy that she was smiling. Soon she fell asleep while talking to me. I threw all the pieces of pics and covered her with blanket. I gave a peck on her forehead before leaving the room. I have no idea why I did that but I did it and felt awesome about it. I smiled like an idiot, went in my room and took a shower and went to bed still thinking about her childish actions.

End of Rey's POV

Next mrng shatarey got call frm swayam and the trio rushed into the gadget section of IA.where swayam was waiting for them swayam was wearing the gadget suit ."where the gadget dude?and whats is this u r wearing ?"asked rey disappointedly on not seeing any gadget in swayam's hand as he was expecting one and shani also gve the same expression."ansh this suit is the gadget "swayam trying to explain them."what this suit is a gadget?"the trio said together ."yup let me elaborate it to you people .first u guys settle down"swayam said showing them the sofa there and all of them seat down ."so guys this is not an ordinary suit ,this suit can make an ordinary person into superhero"swayam proudly said abt his gadget ."how come is this?how can an ordinary person turn into superhero?"questioned sharon ."well siren i didn't complete my words so u people don't ask me question in between i will totally explain abt this and then u can ask ur question .is that okay guys?"swayam said looking at the trio ."okay"the trio said said in unicon."so as i said before this gadget of mine can turn any body into superhero,it done by this keys present on gadget near my hand. look i will explain u people how to use this one ."there were some about ten to elevn keys on it swayam pressed the top most key on the gadget on this hand "stunt mode"and swayam was doing some amazing stunts.then he pressed the second key "invisible mode"and swayam went invisible to them and the trio were like this is awsum one.then he pressed the third one and said "capture mode "and he point his hand toward his phone which was lying on the table and there came an green substance from his gadget and lock the cell on to the table..and it was unbreakable.then he pressed the next key and said"anti gravity" and swayam was floating in the air.without any support.and then he press the next one "support mode "and he strtd walking on the wall of that room.he the next one "bullet proof"and throw a gun to rey and said him to shoot and rey did it and the bullet didn't harm swayam .he went on explain the the specialty of the key and the trio were amazed by it. "so guys am done..hows this?did u people like it"swayam waiting for the answer of them."super duper awsum"said the trio."well if we use this gadget no one can defeat us."said rey givng a wide smile."but remember if this part of this gadget (he said showing the gadget part which was to his hand) is lost the power of gadget is lost "said swayam."okay"the trio said in unicon.

"okay ,so i think its my trun to work ,i will find out the place where the devil had hide our chief"said taani standing up from the sofa."titili,but how are you going to get it?"ask swayam. marshal, am gng to check shivam's call list and the last dialed number will be the devil's one so we would track them by the mobile number"taani said looking at swayam."okay cool. we all help u out "said swayam."hey u people do it i will join u guys later"said sharon and she left the place without hearing to the remaining people."fine i think she want to be alone if want so let her be guys lets continue with our work "swayam said looking at taarey and they nodded in yes..and the trio started wrk and swayam was getting bored and said"guys it high time and we didnt track it till now","marshal ,we will find him ..jst wait patiently "said taani keeping her hand on his shldr."yup sherlocks ... jst wait patiently"rey said looking at them ."well u guys wait patiently meanwhile am gng to practice my fencing ."okay marshal be careful..as ur wound is not yet cured "said taani."okay i will"said swayam and marched out the room and went to the place there will be fencing (sword fighting) will took place .and he was abt to enter when he saw sharon already practicing it .her hairs were tied into pony tail and she was wear her unifrm and she was jst aswum in it..he was amazed with her moves"she knows kunfu ,gun shooting and now fencing too?.god knw what all else she knows"he thought to himself and was lost in her .sharon was practicing totally frustrated abt her dad been kidnapped and shivam ditching them, their mission getting failed all these thing were flashing in her mind. .swayam smiled and moved towards her and she jst turned back pointing her sword toward swayam.seeing him there sharon lowered her sword and swayam said"so how about a practice fight?"."sure"she rpld.they both took their shields and they were looking like fighter in a war. so our fighters parted their legs and covered themselves shield aptly. They both walked on the path with arc-form.They grasp on their sword tightened and the rivalry starts. Sharon begins, the brandish she presented was straight and fast. Swayam skillfully defended it by shield, simultaneously attacked her with his blade. Her shield too came in her defense and his sword was diverted.they back off and stood apart, again with 3 steps distance.. sharon concluded that he is certainly is powerful and sharp in his skills.swayam conceived his 1st experimental combat to realize that she is great player, may be equivalent to him. So the only thing he could take advantage of was his masculine physique. Here sharon was planned to exploit her flexibility which any girl has more than a boy.Next stage of face off was initiated by swayam. He waved his sword horizontally, parallel to earth. Sharon performed a reverse bent to escape it. Before she could stand straight swayam again attacked aiming her stomach. But she again eludes by twisting herself sidewards. Without giving him one more chance, she shields herself and used her blade to divert his swor,before swayam could bring them in action again, sharon spinned and bent her level of attack to his legs. He jumped high to save himself from her sword. She didn't even stand high and straight again, but she faced his next attack, pushing her more down to earth. Tackling it will be an onerous task, as he is more muscular. Escaping it is a good choice. She went askance sidewards, and shoved his shield with hers, more far side wards. She rotates her blade again to make him away.Now they stood in the distance gap of two steps. Not a moment gap, their swords collides again. Fire sparks were literally generated on the edges of sword, Their shield smashed each other with sounds of heavy metals thuds.they pushed each other backward again. Their breaths deep and frequent and their attacks more powerful and sharp. They both were impressed with each other, none of them was less then the other

Sharon attacked him with all possible sword's techniques, one after other, with no interval and from all directions. Swayam nicely engaged his sword and shield both to tackle them.sharon took advantage of his unawareness about her shield. She played an a muck of her mighty shield to shove him backward,Swayam was pushed back behind , he was damn surprised but more then that he was impressed by her skills."sharon rai prakash -1,loser-0"she affirmed proudly. and swayam smirked.he moved briskly and performed his techniques. He moved his swords to attack her in all forms, again on all levels of her body- upper middle and lower. She shielded her upper body mainly but tackled his lower his lower level attacks with swords. .

At last she was so much involved in defending her legs, that she almost went careless about her body above abdomen. Swayam succeeded in his intention. He spinned himself, simultaneously revolving a half circle around sharon . He performed a brandish on her head level. Without hurting he got separated from her, far away, standing still. Next moment sharon realized her hairs are open, which earlier were tied with a hair band. She immediately faced him, her jaw dropped as she saw her black hair band which humg on his sword- tip, encircling it. She was surprised- when the hell he do that?
she was fuming with angry ."Swayam Shekhawat-10 ,siren-1"he said it with a smirk ''how dare he play with my hairs?'' she could not tolerate it. she give Back to back attacks, swayam enjoyed them dealing and defending. Their swords collided and smashed each other, fire sparks were again ignited.now that was it she was hell angry with him and she spinned her body thrice to give her blade the toughest torque and fastest flux, simultaneously moving towards him. in the first spin she attacked his chest but he manage to turn and her sword made an wound on the same place where the bullet went in .This all happened in just 5 seconds. Her attack terminates. she was successful in mis balancing him. he was not given a single spaced to use his word in b/w these.She stood finally with her back facing him and he laying on ground, all astound about how wild a gal can go for her just for hairs. Next time he would never touch them again, by any means too.he felt pain near his shldr ..he was unaware that her sword had wounded him and he place his hand on his shldrs and saw that he was bleeding .sharon turn to swayam lying on the floor unconsciously.she rushed to him ,she has taken him into her arms and found his shoulder bleeding .

The End.

Author's Note:
hope you people liked it..please give ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment..yeah avoid writing only " NICE UPDATE & UPDATE SOON".please at least two ..three lines comment karo yaar because your comments are our energy drinks aur ah ab si update thodey late ayengey because tasha ki collage suruhogihey and am also busy so u people will get a update once in 2 weeks aur wo update Sunday ko milengey..and criticism and suggestn are always welcome..
luv,

renu and tasha
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Posted: 12 years ago
omg omg
1st aai
yepee
hay
wt an updat
kiler
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update...
Rey cooked maggie...great...😆
Loved TaaRey part a lot...
SwaRon fighting was mindblowing..
torque and flux🤓 physics ki yaad aa gayi...
Ouch
Swayam unconcious..
will she find out that he was shot earlier...😕

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