Pyaar Ka Ehsaas(Sujal&Kashish)Part5-Pg.12

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Introduction:

We see the doors of a house opening (Bajaj house from KZK) and we see the back of a lady doing pooja. The camera turns and it is Prerna (Swetha Tiwari) and slowly the rest of house members come along and join the morning pooja. On the other hand we see a girl waking up, looking at the clock, jumping out of bed and running to the shower realizing she was late. She comes out drying her wet hair, goes to her closet and selects a white churidaar and goes back in to change. She again comes out wearing that suit and starts getting ready, she puts on some lip gloss, kajal, her chudiyaan, long silver dangling earrings and her payals. She is all ready and is running down the stairs and enters the mandir, and closes her eyes and pretends she has been there since the beginning. But be it her tough luck, someone pulls on her ear, and still with her eyes closed but with guilty look she said "Sorry Papa" and we see that it is Anurag (Cezanne Khan) and he lets go of her ear. The pooja is finished and Prerna is handing out the prasad and she comes to the last person who has her hands out waiting for the prasad.

Prerna: Phirse late, ab tuhje prasad nahi milegi.

Finally we see the face of the girl and its is none other than Kashish (Aamna Shariff)

Kashish: Arre Mama aap nahi samaj payegi, mere aur bhagwangi ka ek special rishta hai.
Prerna: Iska matlab tho nahi hai ke tu hamesha late aao, haina?
Kashish: Mama, abhi aap yah sab choro aur bataye ke aap muhje prasad derahi ya nahi?

Prerna shakes her head and gives her the prasad and Kashish bows in front of the idols and takes blessings.

Kashish: Bhagwanji aaj mere finals hai, please aap meri madat kijeye aur pass karade, please.
Prerna: Bhagwan ke samna sharam nahi aati?
Kashish: Mama, inke samna kya sharam? Agar hum inhe nahi kahenge ke hum kya chahte hai tho kisse kahenge hmm?
Prena: Tu kabhi nahi suhdrahegi.
Kashish: Sudrana bhi nahi chathi.
Anurag: Arre ab aap dono ka tu tu main main khatam hogaya ho tho breakfast ke liya chalein?

Now everyone is sitting on the breakfast table.

Anurag: Kashish beta aaj tuhje mein drop kardoonga.
Kashish: Nahi Papa, its okay muhje uni se pehle kahi aur jana hai, app office chale jaye.
Kripa (Neha Bamb): Papa, agar aap Di ko nahi drop karenge tho kya aap muhje drop karsakthe hain?
Anurag: Sure beta.
Prerna: Arre apka do ladle bete kahan rehgaya? Pooja mein tho the
Kripa: Ek important meeting thi, issi liye who pooja ke foran baad chale gaye.
Prerna: Yeh larke bhi naa.
Anurag: Rehne do Prerna.
Prerna: Kya rehne do, aap hi ne tho in saab ko bigaar kar rak diya hai.
Kashish: Acha ab mein chalti hoon, wish me luck!
Prerna: Best of luck beta,
Anurag: Good luck.
Kripa: All the best Di, I'll be waiting for a treat!
Prerna: Arre results tho chor usne tho abhi paper hi nahi diya aur tuhje treat ki pari hai.
Kripa: Mama, aap hi nahi, balke hum sab jaanthe hain ke Di acha marks tho kya balke class mein top hongi kyun Papa?
Anurag: Bilkul!

All share a warm laugh,

Kashish: Bye everybody.
Prerna: Arre sun…
Kashish: Haan Mama, uni jane se pehle mandir ho ana, I know I know.
Prerna: Good.

Well this is the life of one of the two main families in this story. This is the Basu family, it may look like there are a lot of people but they all are considered as one. Yeh ghar ek ghar nahi, balke ek mandir ke tara hai. Yeh parivaar ek dusre ke liya jeethe aur marthe bhi hain. They are all there for one another in happy times and sad times. Anurag and Prerna have been married for over 20 years and they have a happy and a loving family consisting four kids: Kavya (Eijaz Khan), Prem (Manoj Bohra), Kashish and Kripa. More character description as the story goes along.

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Now we move on to the second house (Garewal house from KTH), the doors open and we see another lady doing pooja and she is Veena (no idea what her real name is). After completing the pooja she turns around and is upset to find no one from her family present. With a disappointed look she moves on upstairs and goes to a room. She goes inside and we see a man sleeping on his stomach she we cant see his face.

Veena: ANGAD (Iqbal Khan) beta itho, warna tum studio late pohoncho ge.
Angad: Maa, sone do naa, please bus do minute aur.
Veena: Tu bhi naa.

Fustrated, she leaves Angad's room and she goes to another room. There we see a girl sleeping in front of the computer on her chair, and it is none other than Sneha (Jennifer Winget).

Veena: (to herself) Phirse late soyi hogi… Sneha beta utho.
Sneha: (wakes up with a jerk) Mama, time kya huwa?
Veena: Saare saath (7:30).
Sneha: Kya! Itna late hogaya, aur aap muhje abhi utha rahi hain, muhje college jana hai. (she gets fustrated and leaves)

Veena goes to the last room and sees no one in bed and figures that the person has woken up and she leaves and moves on to the last room, her room. She sees her husband Lalit (no idea what his name is either) getting ready for office.

Lalit: (rudely) Aise kya dekh rahi ho, jao jake mera nashta taiyaar karo.

Veena moves downstairs and she and the servant are setting up the table. First Lalit comes and sits at the head of the table and starts eating and later Sneha joins him.

Veena: Arre Angad kaha hain?
Sneha: Soh rah hoga
Lalit: Is nikamme ladke se aur kya umeed ho sakti hai.
Veena: Woh apka beta hai.
Lalit: Sharam athi muhje usse apna beta kahene mein.
Angad: Itna sharam hai tho muhje is ghar se nikal kyo nahin dete?
Veena: ANGAD!
Angad: Rehne dijiye Mom! Inse (Lalit) aur kya umeed rakh sakta hoon mein?
Sneha: Kya aap sab please ek second ke liya bhi chen se nahi reh sakthe kya?
Veena: Aap sab naashta kijiye.

Now we see the back of a man coming out of the bathroom drying his wet hair, he grabs his black suit and goes back in to change. Comes back out and he wears his Rolex watch, black shoes and gelled hair and he heads out the door. All this time he has his back to us (but you all know who this is). Well he comes to the dining table and takes his mother's blessings and comes back up and we see that it is Sujal (Rajeev Khanelwal).

Veena: Jeethe raho.
Sujal: Good morning everybody.
Everyone: Good morning.
Sujal: Mama mein chalta hoon, aaj office mein ek important meeting hain.
Veena: Lekin naashta?
Sujal: Office mein kahloonga.
Veena: Par…
Sujal: Bye Mama, bye everybody.
Veena: Yeh larka bhi naa.
Lalit: Tumhara ladla jo hain.
Angad: Okay mein bhi chalta hoon, chal Sneha mein tuhje drop kardoonga.
Sneha: Thanks bro
Lalit: Goodbye.
Veena: Lekin aap ne tho naashta nahi kiya.
Lalit: I'm getting late, aur waise bhi time is money.

Well this is the Garewal family, I bet all of you could sense how different this family from the Basu family hmm? Even though the statuses of the two families are equal but their lifestyle is as different as chalk and cheese. This family too has a lot of people but unlike the Basu family, this family may be living in the same house but they act like strangers to one another. Lalit and Veena too have been married for over 20 years and they have three kids: Sujal, Angad and Sneha. Since the beginning Lalit has been a business oriented man and he has never had time for the family. For him business comes first then everything else. Therefore the kids aren't very close to him, they are very close to Veena however especially Sujal. You could say that Veena is the one thing that is keeping the family together. If it weren't for her then the family would have been torn apart long time ago. More character description on the kids coming later.

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Wow that was a big introduction, please comment and tell me how you all like and on that basis I will continue. You all know that this story will revolve around Sujal and Kashish, but you just read how different they are. How do their paths meet? How do they realize that they are made for each other? Well to find out you have to comment in order for me to write the next part.
With love,
Jaanvi <3

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Recap: Well… you all got introduced to the families and characters… that's about it… nothing special…

*Note: Sorry guys, forgot to tell you that the Garewal family are originally from London and it has been about 3 or 4 months since they have shifted to Mumbai to expand their business. Also the Basu family is from Shimla and has also come to expand their business and good education for the youngsters.

Part 1:

Kashish has come to the mandir, aur Bhagwan ke samne, haath jor kar, aur ankhein band huwe prathna kar rahi thi.

Kashish: (to herself) Aap tho jaanthe hain ke mein yahaan kyun aayi hoon par mein jaanthi hoon ke ghar mein Mama aapke samne mere liye aab bhi prathna har rahi hain tho mein apne liye kuch maangne nahi aayi hoon balke meri sirf yahi duwa hai ki aap hamesha mere parivar ko khush rakhe, unka har dukh mera, aur meri saari khushiyan unke naam kardein, is parivaar ne mere liye bohut kuch kiya hai aur mein unse bohut bohut pyaar karthi hoon, please unhe har taqleef se dur rakhna aur unke aankhon mein kabhi aansoo nahi aane chahiyen.

While she was praying, a person comes up and stands beside her. As you all might have guessed, it is none other than Sujal! Now let's see what he is praying for…

Sujal: (to himself) Hai Bhagwan, pata nahi mein yahaan kyun aya hoon, par hamesha jab ata hoon tho bas ek hi kwahish lekar, aur who hai Angad, Sneha aur Mama ki khushi aur who hamesha bana rahe, mein in theeno se bohut bohut pyar katha aur yeh log hi meri jeene ki waja hai, agar in mein se ek ko bhi aanch aayi tho mera aap par barosa uth jayega, par patha nahi kyun, aaj apse ek aur cheez maangne aya hoon, ek farishte (angel) ki, ek aisa farishta jo us ghar ko ek mandir ki tarha bana de, ek aisa farishta jo us ghar mein itni khushiyan bar de ki gham ki koi jaga hi na rahe, jaantha hoon, mein apse bohut kuch maang raha hoon, par kya karun? apse nahin maangu ga tho kisse maangu? sirf apke samne mera asli roop samne hain, sirf apse hi tho main apni dil ki baat keh saktha hoon. Please Bhagwan, mere sirf yehi iksha poori kar do aur muhje aur kuch mahi chahiye.

Dono apni apni prathna kar rahe the aur dono ki aankhein baand thi, ke jaise Kashish ne apna haath upar kiya ghanti (bell) bajane ki aur Sujal ne bhi apna haath upar kiya for the same reason. Kashish ke haath pehle tha aur Sujal ka haath uske piche tha. Just as Kashish was about to ring the bell she felt a hand touch hers from the back. With a jerk she opened her eyes and look towards her right and Sujal did the same (well he had to look towards the left). Since their hands were up the only saw each other's eyes. Dono ek dusre ki aankhon mein kho gaye the aur dono ke aankhon mein ek hi sawal tha…pehle Kashish ne apne aap ko kaboo mein kiya and broke the trance and Sujal followed. They both looked up and Sujal kept his hand down gesturing Kashish to go ahead. Kashish ne ghanti bajayi aur Sujal aur Kashish ne ek dusre ko dekha aur phirse done ek dusre ke aankhon mein kho gaye the…ke jaise Pandit ji agaye…

Pandit: Yeh lo prasad

Kashish and Sujal take the prasad…

Pandit: Bhagwan tum dono ki jodi ko khush rakhe
Sujal: Jee woh…
Kashish: (to Sujal) Bhagwanji ka ashirwaad kabhi talte nahi hai, (Sujal raises his eyebrows at her)
Kashish: (towards the Pandit) Shukriya Panditji

Sujal ek baar aur haath jortha hai aur piche mur kar dektha hain ki Kashish waha se chali gayi thi and Sujal just shook his head and left from there too…

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Okay we are now at Kashish's uni, Kashish has just entered and she sees someone reading a book and walks up to her…

Kashish: Madam yeh aap kya kar rahi hai?
Girl: Kashish, dekh nahi sakthi mein parhayi kar rahi hoon, God aaj finals hai aur muhje bohut dar lag raha hai
Kashish: (bends down towards the girl) Acha apko dar kis baat ka hai, aap tho itni der se parhayi kar rahi hongi, tho aap tho zarur pass hongi kyon?
Girl: You really think so?
Kashish: Hmm, acha muhje ek batao…kitab… ULTI KAISE PAR TE HAI? (she pulls the book from the girl and a photo falls down, Kashish picks it up and starts yapping again) … ahaha yeh lo, muhje laga tum parhayi kar rahi thi par nahi yeh tho mere pyare Kavya bhaiya ke sapne dekh rahi hai

Time out, as you all might have guessed the girl is Anjali (Anita Hassnandani) … Anjali is Kashish's childhood friend and she is madly in love with Kavya but he doesn't seem to be bothered about her at all. Anjali is sort of a tom boy, she always wears her long hair in a ponytail, wears glasses and you will always find her in jeans, pants and t-shirts. Okay back to the story…

Anjali (whining): Kashish, please yaar, mein kya karoon, tere bhai hai hi aisa (with dreamy eyes) kitna handsome hai woh, itni meethi smile, aur uska attitude…wow…
Kashish: Bas bas, woh mera bhai hai, kuch tho sharam karo
Anjali: Kya karoon?
Kashish: Acha muhje ek baat bathao, aaj tak usne tere saath koi baat nahi ki, I mean conversation like, tum dono kabhi akele bahar nahi gaye, phir bhi tum usse itna pasand karthi ho?
Anjali: Pasand nahi pyaar…pyaar karthi hoon mein Kavya se
Kashish: Forget it, tuhjse baat karna faltoo hain

Anjali is about to say something, but the bell rings…

Kashish: Chal, exams ka waqt agaya
Anjali: Kashish! Ab mein kya karoongi, meine tho parhayi bhi nahi ki
Kashish: Acha, jao aur kuch der ke liye Kavya bhaiya ki tasveer ko dekh le
Anjali: Kashish!
Kashish: Anjali! Chal!

Both the girls reach the exam hall, they are about to enter when their professor stops them…

Professor: Good Morning Ladies
Kashish/Anjali: Good Morning Sir
Professor: Maine tum dono ko is liye rokha taki tum dono ko bata doon ki maine ek seating arrangement banaya hai…

Kashish and Anjali look at each other…

Professor: Kashish I would you to take a seat in the back and Anjali I would like you to sit in the front on the left… Is that fine with the both of you?
Kashish: Yes Sir
Anjali: Par hum waha kyun nahi beth sakthe jahaan hum bethna chaathe hain?
Professor: Taki aaj koi cheating na kare, is that clear?
Anjali: Yes sir

Kashish looks at Anjali with a big smile…

Kashish: Best of luck Anjali

Anjali gives Kashish an angry look…

Anjali: Same to you,

The girls sit at their respected seats, and the papers are handed out, Anjali gives Kashish a scared look, and Kashish gives her an assuring smile… Time goes by, and the bell rings, everyone leaves their papers where they are and leave…

Anjali: I don't believe this
Kashish: Kya?
Anjali: Yehi ki Professor ne aaj seating arrangements banayi thi, aaj tak unhone aisa kuch kiya nahi
Kashish (smirks): Unhone hi tho bataya tha, taki koi cheating na kare (referring to Anjali)
Anjali (sarcastically): Very funny

Kashish laughs at her,

Anjali: Acha chal tere ghar chalte hai
Kashish: Mere ghar kyun?
Anjali: Arre, itni bolhi mat ban
Kashish (getting what Anjali meant): No, no way, Anjali!
Anjali (sweetly): Kashish… aur waise bhi, kitne din hogaye uncle, aunty, Prem, Kripa, aur (more sweetly) Kavya se mile…
Kashish: Tu kabhi apni harkatho se baaz nahi aogi naa
Anjali (nodding her head in a no): Nope
Kashish (gives in): Chal…
Anjali: Yes!

In the car…

Anjali: Acha Kashish...
Kashish: Hmm?
Anjali: Ek baat batao, tum tho jaanthi ho ki main Kavya se pyaar karthi hoon
Kashish: Obviously
Anjali: Kashish, I'm serious
Kashish: Okay okay, I'm sorry, go on
Anjali: Par tune kabhi nahi bataya ke tuhje kaise larka chahiye
Kashish: Anjali!
Anjali: C'mon yaar, tell me, I'm your best friend…aur muhje nahi batao go tho kisse batao go?
Kashish: Tu bhi naa, (looks elsewhere) muhje ek aisa saathi chahiye jo thoda mere jaisa ho, or thoda alag… (as Kashish is saying this we see a back of a man standing by the window in his office looking at a file)…Ek aisa insaan jiski ankhon ko dekh kar mein bata sakoon ki uski dil mein kya hain…(flashes back to the same man, but now we see his eyes)…Jiski ek muskaan se, mere zindagi ko haseen bana de…(now we see him smirk)… Jiski ek jalak se mein dil yeh kahega, ke yahi hai woh insaan jiske saath mein apni poori zindagi bitana chathi hoon… (the man turns around and it is…guess guess…SUJAL)
Anjali: Aisa insaan India mein tho kya pure duniya mein nahi milega
Kashish: Tu kaise jaanthi hain?
Anjali: Kashish, aise insaan tho sirf kitabo mein milthe hain, real life mein nahi
Kashish: Tuhje kya maloom
Anjali: Muhje sab patha hain
Kashish: Very funny
Anjali: But seriously, tere sapno ka raja tere sapne mein hi rahega
Kashish: I don't care, mein bas yehi jaanthi hoon ki uss upar wale ne mere liya koi na koi tho banaya hain, aur mein use miloongi bhi, kyunki Bhagwan ne hum sab ke liya koi na koi tho banaya hai, tere liya shayad Kavya bhaiya hi wohi hi hai, par mein, abhi uske intezaar mein hoon, aur tab muhje pyaar ka ehsaas hoga…
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Okay sorry guys for the late update, and I owe an even bigger apology to Sara because I promised her I would post last week, but honestly I couldn't. My computer crashed and I lost everything, so I had to rewrite this part all over again. So yeah…

Well how did u like the first meeting of Sujal and Kashish… Kya Sujal ko uska farishta milega? Kya Kashish usse milegi jiske ke liye woh bani? Aur kya Kavya aur Anjali ek dusre ky liye bane hai yah nahi? Well for that you have to wait for the next part…

And one more thing, I am very sorry but I won't be able to post the next part till the 13th of August as I am going out of town. So tab tak ke liya yahi part. Enjoy!
Jaanvi<3

p.s: Please overlook any spelling and grammer mistakes, love you all and dont forget to comment!


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Recap: Well… What happened? Oh right, first meeting of Sujal and Kashish and introduction to Kashish's childhood friend Anjali who is madly in love with her older brother Kavya…

Part 2:

About 2 weeks later … Nothing much has changed, everyone is living a normal life hehe … and Sujal and Kashish have forgotten each other since their first meeting … And Kashish is waiting for her results and she has a job interview in a week … Where? Well you all shall find out soon …

Okay we are at Basu farmhouse (they have gone there for a short trip…it's in… umm…some place out of Mumbai) and it is morning time … Sunday hai tho sab log apne apne kamo mein busy hai aur Prerna nashtha bana rahi thi … Ke jaisi Anurag uske peeche se aake usse hug kartha hai …

Prerna: Yeh aap kya kar rahe hai?
Anurag: Aapko dikhayi nahi detha? Mein apse gale mil raha hoon...
Prerna: Woh tho mujhe bhi dikhayi detha ha i… Par aaj apko muhjpe itne pyar kyun araha hai?
Anurag: Bas yunhi
Prerna: Acha, tho kya aap muhjpe thoda sa reham karenge aur mujhe nashtha bana ne dengi ki nahi?
Anurag: Arre meine aapko kab roka?
Prerna: Ohh … Tho yeh sab kya hai (referring to him hugging her)
Anurag: Kya hai? Yeh tho pyaar
Prerna: Kuch tho sharam kijiye… Aap chaar bacho ke baap hai aur unki bhi shaadi ki umar bhi hogayi hai
Anurag: Tho kya hua? Hamari tho hogayi hai… Haina? (looking at her very cutely)
Prerna: Acha aab bohut hogaya … Choriye mujhe …
Anurag: Chorne ke liya tumhara haath nahi thama tha maine

Prerna just stares at Anurag…

Voices: Ahem

Prerna and Anurag turn around to find Kashish and Kripa standing at the doorway smiling widely … Anurag instantly lets Prerna go and she goes back to making the breakfast…

Anurag: Woh Prerna mere liye chai lana …
Prerna: Jii … Abhi lekar athi hoon
Kashish: Arre Papa aap hi ne tho kaha tha ki "chorne ke liya tumhara haath nahi thama tha maine"…Par aap ne tho itni jaldi haath chordiya … Kyun?
Kripa: Hmm Di is absolutely right … Arre romance ke liye aap dono abhi jawan hai
Prerna: (gives a stern look) Kripa …
Kripa: Maine kya kaha?
Kashish: Aur waise bhi jo bhi usne kaha sach hi tho kaha… Kyun Papa?
Anurag: Of course…
Prerna: Acha abhi tum dono ko bathati ho … Idhar aao
Kashish: Woh … ummm
Kripa: Di, kahin Kavya bhaiya humko bula nahi rahe?
Kashish: Tumne bhi suna? … Chalo chal ke dekthe hain ki unko kya chaiye … hmm
Kripa: Yeah let's go

They turn around to leave, when Prerna calls them…

Prerna: Arre sun tho…

Kashish and Kripa turn around…

Kashish: Don't worry Mumma, hum baad mein nashtha kar lenge… Sab bhai behen saath saath … Aap dono akele nashtha kar lijiye … And don't worry is baar apko koi disturb nahi karega… Chal Kripa …

They both walk away giggling to themselves…

Prerna: Yeh dono bhi naa…
Anurag: (puts his arm around her) Kabhi nahi sudrahegi (finishing off her sentence) Haina?

They both laugh … Okay a little later … Everyone is there chatting amongst themselves … When Prem comes along …

Prem: Hello everybody
Everyone (except Prerna): Hi

Prem notices that Prerna is frowning and looking the other way … He looks at everyone else and the gesture him that her mood is very off because of him … Prem gulps down his saliva and walks up to Prerna and bends down in front of her …

Prem: Mom?

Prerna just frowns and looks the way…

Prem: Mom please … I am really sorry … Ainda mein aisa kabhi nahi karoonga promise…
Prerna: Kyun tujhe aab teri girlfriend se fursath mil gayi ke tu yahan aya hain?
Prem: Aap tho jaanthi hai ke meri koi girlfriend nahi hai tho phir?
Prerna: Tho phir kya… Mere liye ek bahu lekar aya hai?

Everyone burst in giggles … and they at once become quiet when Prerna gives them a hard look… And she turns back to Prem…

Prerna: Aur tu… Pichle do din se tu kahan mar gaya tha?
Prem: Woh mein… Mein…
Prerna: Lo tumhare paas koi jawab nahi hai dene ke liye kyun?
Prem: Par Mom…
Prerna: Kyun? Tu nahi tho kaha tha … Chalo kuch dino ke liya farmhouse chalthe hain, aur jab hum yahan aaye tho tu yahan se gayab hogaye

Prem looks at everyone looking for support…

Kavya: Arre Mom … Usne kaha naa … Ki woh ab aisi galthi nahi karega … Aap usse maaf kyun nahi kardethi?
Prerna: Tu chup kar … Jaanthi hoon, tu bhi uske saath uski harkatho main shamil hai…
Kripa: Lekin Mumma, Bhaiya sach hi tho keh rahe hain, maaf kar dijiye naa Prem bhaiya ko…
Kashish: Ha Mumma…
Prem: (to Kashish) You shutup …
Kashish: Me? Par meine kya kia hain (giving him an innocent look)
Prem: Yeh saab teri waja se hua hai
Kashish: Arre mein yahan Mumma se keh rahi hoon ke tumhe maaf karde aur ulta tum mujhe gunegaar man rahe ho?
Prerna: Haan, isne tho kuch kiya hi nahi
Prem: Yeh apki ladli beti haina isliye
Anurag: Par Kashish ne kiya kya hain?
Prem: Mein batatha hoon … (he looks at Kashish and she gives a guilty look) … Aap jana chathe ki mein do din se kahan tha, tho suniye … Mein do din se Mumbai mein tha
Kavya: Kya?
Prem: Yes Bro, aur mein wahan kyun tha … Woh iski waja se (pointing at Kashish) … Iski university se ek e-mail aya tha, aur usme likha tha ki uski results agayi hai… Aur usne muhje bataya ki main waha jaon aur le aao…
Prerna: (hold Kashish's ears) Aur tune mujhe bataya ki woh ek meeting ke liya gaya hai
Kashish: Aaaah Mumma… Dard horaha hai
Prerna: Tune muhjse jhoot kyun bola?
Kashish: Who isliye kyunki aap tho mujhe akele jaane nahi dethi, aur agar Prem Bhaiya apko saach kaha hota tho aap samaj thi ki woh ek bahana bana raha hai…
Anurag: Hmm … Kashish you have a point
Prerna: Aap chup rahiye…
Prem: Aur mein chala gaya, kyunki Mumbai yaha se 6 ghanta (hours) door hai, tho maine socha ki main jald hi subha nikal jaounga aur raat ko wapas bhi ajounga, par muhje kya pata ki roads usi raat tho baand hojaye gi … Isiliye muhje ek raat beech mein rukna paraa
Prerna: Par tu ek phone tho kar saktha na?
Prem: Network nahi tha
Kashish: (holds her ears) Sorry Bhaiya
Prem: (holds her hand) Its okay sis
Kashish: (to Prerna) Sorry Mumma
Prerna: (smiles) Come here

Prerna gives Kashish a big hug…

Prem: Lo, do din baad mein aya hoon aur pyar sirf Kashish ko mil raha hai
Kripa: Bhaiya aap hi nahi, hum saab jaanthe hain, Kashish, Mumma aur Papa, dono ki ladli hai,
Kavya: Baad mein hum saab athe hain, kyun?
Prem/Kripa: Right
Anurag: Shutup, and come here

All have a family hug…

Kashish: Acha aap mujhe apna results do (brings out her hand towards Prem)
Prem: Arre mein tho woh bhool hi gaya
Kashish: WHAT???
Prem: Oh no, shayad maine hotel mein hi rakh diya tha
Kashish: You… Mein tumhe choroongi nahi…

Kashish runs after Prem, and Prem is time to time hiding behind everyone and everyone is having a good laugh … When Kashish gives up and sits on the couch in a huff…

Prem: Arre mere sweet sis muhjse naraaz hain?

Kashish turns her face away like Prerna did earlier…

Prem: Arre baap re … Ek hi din mein do do madams naraaz hogaye muhjse … That is definitely not very good…
Kavya: Hmm, ab tujhe Kashish ko manana parega
Prem: And I know just what to do … Because I am the best!
Kripa: Whatever
Prem: Tujhe main baad mein dekh loonga … (bends down in front of Kashish) Yeh le (handing over the results)
Kashish: (looks at him with a big smile and grabs the paper) Thank you so much, I love you bhaiya (gives him a big hug)
Prem: I love you too sis … Acha ab jaldi se dekh le, warna mujhe khud sab ko batana parega ke tere results kya hai…
Kashish: Tumne already par liya?
Prem: Haan, isme heran hone wali ki kya baat hai?
Kashish: You!!!
Prem: Mere naam "You" nahi, "Prem" hai … understand? Aab jaldi se khol

Kashish opens the paper … reads them through and looks at everyone who all are waiting for her to tell them what she got …

Kashish: I passed!!!!
Prem: Uthna hi nahi, balki isne class mein top kiya hai
Kripa: I knew it!!! Congratz Dii, now I want my treat soon okay?
Kashish: Thank you

Everyone congratulates her, and Kashish is very happy … Just like this the whole family enjoys their trip in full masti and fun … And now they are back home … and don't worry Anjal wasn't left behind … She also passed!

Okay they are back at home now and it is the day of Kashish's interview… She is really nervous … She comes and sits at the breakfast table and everyone is wishing her luck and giving her encouraging words …

Anurag: Kashish I am telling you one more time, you can always join our publication house with Kavya and Prem
Kashish: Jaanthi hoon Papa, aur aap bhi yehi jaanthe hain ke main kahin aur kyun kaam karna chathi hoon
Anurag: Jaantha hoon, but I want you to know I am always there for you
Kashish: Thanks Papa
Prerna: Yeh le prasad
Kashish: Thank you Mumma (she looks at her watch) Acha aab mujhe chalna chaiye… Bye everybody
Everyone: Bye and good luck…

Kashish is in her car when her cell phone rings … its Anjali

Anjali: Hi Kashish
Kashish: Mein tumse baat nahi karna chathi
Anjali: Arre meine kya kiya hai?
Kashish: Mein apni interview ke liya jar rahi hoon aur tu mujhe aab phone kar rahi hai
Anjali: Sorry baba, woh mein thodi busy thi
Kashish: Tu aur tere bahane
Anjali: Kashish please … Acha … All the very best for your interview aur mujhe yakeen hai ki tumhe yeh job zaroor milegi
Kashish: Thank you very much, acha mein rakthi hoon,
Anjali: Bye

Kashish enters the building (by the way it was called "Vogue Fashions") and she walks over to the receptionist…

Kashish: Excuse me, main yaha interview ke liye aayi hoon
Receptionist: Your name?
Kashish: Kashish Basu
Receptionist: You may have a seat
Kashish: Thank you

Kashish sits down and it has been about 15 minutes since she has been waiting … Well lets see what's happening inside…

Man: Kya yaar … koi bhi sahi candidate nahi mil rahi
Man 2: Kitne aur baki hai?
Man: Oh no, another 5
Man 2: Hopefully isme se hume koi mil jaye
Man: I am in no mood to see anyone else, tum akele interviews le lo, tihk hai? Mein chala
Man 2: Arre tu kahan ka raha hai?
Man: Anywhere but here, bye
Man 2: Sun tho, (but too late he was gone and he became even more fustrated) … Send the next candidate in please…

Receptionist: Miss Kashish, apko andar bulaya hain
Kashish: Thank you,

Knock Knock

Kashish: May I come in Sir?

The man is sitting on his chair and he has his back to Kashish

Man: Come in

Kashish comes in and walks up to the desk…

Man: You may have a seat
Kashish: Thank you Sir
Man: So Miss Kashish Basu, is that right?
Kashish: Yes Sir

The Man turns around and both are shocked to see each other…

Both: AAP?

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Well … Who is Kashish's boss? And how does she know this person? Will Kashish get this job? Keep a lookout for the next part …

Thank you all once again for your wonderful comments … thank you all … I had a fantastic trip and I really enjoyed … And now I am waiting for the comments …

Jaanvi <3

P.S: Sorry for the fact that this part was focused on Kashish's family … It was really important to bring out how close this family is for what it to come up in the story … Please bear with me … Next part hopefully will be up soon … Take care and once again please look over any spelling or grammar errors ….


Edited by - --jaan.vi* - 18 years ago
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great YAAR pplzzz post next part 👏
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thank you soooo much kash1988_0108 ....... im flattered 😳
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wow that was just too awesome plz contuine soon good job keep it up cant wait to see the boss hopefully its sujal.
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Originally posted by: Simiran

wow that was just too awesome plz contuine soon good job keep it up cant wait to see the boss hopefully its sujal.

Thank you soo much Simiran... glad you like the story!!!! hmm so u want the boss to be Sujal...well lets see...will try to continue soon😛

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great jaanvi ...yaar this rocks...acha kiya alag link banali..mein ne sirf iska begning pari thi lolx...ab sakoon se par sakti hon....yaaar very well tied up story..love it...i know sujal boss hai heheheehhee....fit jee fit......write soon.... 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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jaanvi dear a totally fantastic part..i liked it very very very very very very very very very very much...... 👏
i like kashish's family very much..they are soo much attached to each other..i like the relationship the family members share among each other.. they are so bonded together.. i hope is pariwaar ko kissi ki buri nazar na lage.. 😃 dear i think i know who the aap is ?? par me will not tell..... 😉 ab please jaldi continue karna kyunke i want to know who that aap is aur me also want to know ki kya meri soch sahi hain about woh aap kaun hain..... 😃

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geaaaaaat story jaanvi pls continue soon

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