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Posted: 12 years ago
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CS and teaser is interesting plz update soon n do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sry sry sry for late cmmnt but was out of town... loved d concept as well as teaser... plzz continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Very nice
plzz plzzz plzzz
continue it⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing concept...
looking forward to this...
update soon =)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1

Her dark hair fell like a curtain of silk to the top of her waist, the sunlight catching the stray strands of hair that blew across her face. In a way this made her more beautiful, as the deep brown complimented her eyes which were of a similar shade. Her eyes were without doubt the most captivating aspect of her appearance, reflecting a look of wisdom far beyond her age that could not help but draw people in. She did not care much for wearing makeup, instead favoring a neutral look to compliment her natural beauty. Her soft and beautiful skin and tall, slender build was like that of a model's, coupled with the latest trends she wore gave the impression that she surely the most beautiful girl. she stepped down the stairs and sat on the dinner table where her parents were waiting for her already. She was no other then our princess taani


Taani : good morning mom, good morning dad.
And she gave a side hug to her parents and then proceeded to sit on her seat.
Taani's parents: good morning beta.
Taani's step mom : so ur princess is gonna be 20 by today.
Taani : yes mom I am really excited. And dad do u remember u promised me that wt ever I wil ask u will give me on my 20th birthday.
Taani's dad: yes sweet heart I do remember that.
Taani: (thought) so finally today my wish will come true. I know dad might get hurt but I really want to see the real world .i want to live outside this beautiful mansion, in a small flat. i really want to live on my own. I want to earn for my living. Am so happy my dream is gonna come true tomorrow.

Taani is the child of a rich business man who loves her that much that even if she puts a finger on something he makes sure that she get that thing even if this thing costs him millions

She has never ever asked for anything she got her own car which she changed every month
Ok so everyone want to be like her she tries to be really proud and mean to some people but she is not that person from heart she hates it have to do it because her friends the other rich kids have fun while doing it
She cried for two days when she broke the chain of a girls that belonged to her mother and when she told taani that it was the only thing she had of her mother taani was hurt because her mother is also dead when she was 6 months and yes taani has no mother in this story

Taani got ready for the college

she took her new car which she got recently 2 days ago

she reached the college the guys were drooling over her but her best friend came Raj

Raj: hi taani

Taani: hi raj

Raj: how r u

Taani: good what about u

Raj: good

Raj image


Meanwhile A young man stood, incredibly tall and muscular. His face was incredibly beautiful, his hair were black and glossy and cropped neatly. His smile was beautiful and revealed two rows of shiny, white, straight teeth. His eyes were the most dazzling of all, they were bright emerald and sparkled magnificently, dragging every girl into a pleasant daze and the girls couldn't take off their eyes from him. and that person was no other than rey.


And then a girl said to other.
Girl1: oh God he is soo hottt.
Girl2: I know I heard that he is an amazing dancer and he is gonna hv an academy here.
Girl1: really I will surely join that. just look at him, his perfect eyes'.his angelic face.
Girl2:his muscular body'..he is an example of perfection.
Girl1: agree

Rey r he is fun loving but has lost her mom
He hides his real emotions from everyone
Every one think of him as a person who is full of life
But no one knows how much broken he is from inside
He has no family
He is all alone and that loneliness is taking his life
But has a friend how tries to be there for him but he is waiting for someone his heart always tell him that someone is coming for him

please comment and hit like

Edited by flicka - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Res/Unres...
Mindblowing concept..Loved it a lot... Taani from rich class and Rey from middle class...Hmm...Very interesting!!!
@Chapt 1-
Finally, Taani's wish is going to be complete.
Well, I am looking forward to read this story...
Update soon! Pm me! 😳
Edited by Ish_taarey - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Firstly taani's pic is superb and then the way u show all her accesories are awe.Loved to see taani and Rey's introduction as rich and hot guys.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
great one .. nicely described taani n rey'scharacter amajing..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
Wow wat a wonderful beginning
update soon :-)

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