MANVEER FF/Chahun Mai Ya Na update chapter 12 pg 93 (new update) - Page 61

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome but hell confusing update yr
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hey pari the update was fab
but quite confusing one
i hope u would clear the confusion
thanks for pm
update soon
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hey tis is superb...
amazing...
totally amazing...
thx fr the pm n do pm me for the next part...
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dear...😛
4 PMing Me..😊..
ur updates r just ... n
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heyy,gr8 update,mnyata gettng jealous,rahul being devar!!!!! uday dscrbing mnyata,lovely!!!!! mnyata ka dreamm,wooww dat was the bestt part of the update!!!!!!! bt i am cnfsed wit dat unknwn perosn who was misbehving wit her!!!!!!😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 12 was amazing loved manveer scene please update next part soon really cant wait and thanks for the pm
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superb update...who is this person..? who want to harm manyata...?thanks for pm...
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thanx guyz for such a beautiful comments 😳😳 res update


Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey, how you? 😊
Sorry for the late reply
Amazing update ⭐️
Beautifully written 👏
Loved both updates a lot ❤️
Love Unnati, Rohan and obliviously Shreya
Yaar, second update confused me
Was it just a dream
Wheather it was or not, who was Manyata scared of
Who was trying to harm her?
Thanks for the pms 😊
Please update soon 😃
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NOTE

yo wats up guyz ... thanx for such a beautiful

comments n likes i noe chapter 12 is more confusing

than others chapter thanx for liking it ...i told u

something about chapter 12 after 10 days wat

happened with manyta/aarohi its about chapter

12 now this story became past n present both in this

chapter some new charectors come out ... now read

the chapter n enjoy it ...


chahu mai ya na

chapter 13.1

past ...


manyta got up in few second ...she sit on her bed she

looked left n right but none there in her room


manyta(its just a dream ? wat the hell i m dreaming

about uday )


she rember his words


R U FALL IN LOVE WID ME PRINCESS ..😳😳😳


manyta:how can i fall in love with u?

...

in breakfast table

brijraj : good morning maa shab !!


ds: good morning ... brijraj !!!


ds looked at the servent n asked ... where is manyta n j servent looked

at her n said they both r not wake up ...


suddenly one voice come


good morning ds ... !!!


ds: aap ithni jaldi uth gayi ?


j huged ds n said ha aaj ke K ka b'day so ...


ds: its kk beta ... !!


j: vese ds jiji kha hai ?


ds wid shocking expression


ds: hume khushi hai j kal ki ladai ke badh apne fir

bhi aapne manyta ke baare pucha!!!


j thought( puchu gi kyu nhi akhir jo uski life jo hell

bnani hai )


j: ds vo humari baadi bhen HAI so hume respect deni chaiye ... jo ek

badI bhen milni chaiye ...


afcouse j tumhe manyta ko respect deni chaiye akir vo

tumhari badi bhen hai


every one looked at who was saying this ...


he was none other than uday


brijraj: UDAY !!!


uday: gani khamma dadi shaab ... !!


he bent down n take her ashirwaad

ds: jite rahiye !!!


uday looked at j with smrick


uday : tumhe manyta ki respect karni chaiye j

akhir vo devghar ki hone wali yuvrani n jaighar Ki

hone wali mhari hai !!! RESPECT THO KARNI

CHAIYE


j: thanks for remind me uday


n she looked at him ... with angry look...


j: ds hum soch rhe manyta jiji ke anE ki khushi

mai party kyu na throw kare wat say


brijarj: its a great idea .. !!!


ds: its good idea ... doc shab party ki taiyaari aap

kariyega !!


j: thanx ds ... !!!


n she huged her again


j:manyta jiji ye party apke liye bhoth especial

hone wali hai i hope u like it with evil smrick


uday thought ( some thing diff ... j manyta ke liye

party throw karna chati hai but question IS why ? )


hi everyone


every one looked at stairs its none other than

manyta she wear a green color suit with blue dupta

sleeve less kurta n in her right hand she wear a

watch ...


uday thought (wow ... she is beautiful her eyez her smile ) uday was bisy to recognise her n sherya who was look at him continusly wid evil smile


sherya : hey look who is coming ... MISS.PRINCESS


everyone look at shreya with confusing look i mean miss princess manyta n look she is luking like a true princess !!!(she say princess a bit louder)

everyone smile at her ...

uday looking at shreya wid dead full luk


n shreya just giggled looking at uday's reaction she wink at him ...

ds: good morning beta

manyta sit on her chair she didn't looked at uday

manyta nodded wid smile...

uday thought ( it is wired she didn't look at ... me

she try to ignore me ? or j say something to her )

manyta mind was just stuck on that word


R U FALL IN LOVE WID ME PRINCESS ..😳😳


manyta thought (hell why he was looking at me today's

dream was so ... scary i m not fall on u uday how

can i fall on u ... when i love HIM?)


she was bizy in her thoughts when shreya said


HEY PRINCESS WHERE R U LOST IN PRINCE DREAM (when she say prince she look at uday )


who was bizy looking at shreya wid dead full luk n in other side j was fuming in anger


she back in her real life ...


manyta: kya ? nhi tho dadi shaab ... (she just changed the topic )


ds: ha manyta beta ...


manyta : app sab kya baat kar rhe the ...


rahul : actually tumhari choti bhen tumhare liye party organised karna chati hai

manyta luk at j wid r u srs luk 😕😕


j give her a cute smile


manyta thought (wats wrong with everyone first uday dream n now that j ... she organised a party for me aaj sab ke sab pagal ho gaye kya ... uthale uthale mujhe nhi in dono ko utha le haa nhi tho )


...


present ...


manyta was hell crying ... !!!


plz leave me ...


i can't ... my love i can't ...how can u forget me ? aarohi ...


aaditye plz leave me i never forget u I LOVE YOU !!! she just brust out crying her tears fall down on her chicks


u love me ?(he giggled)


so tell me who r u? aarhi or manyta ?

if i say manyta


THAN ... ?


I WILL KILL U


PAST ..

some one pull her in a room ... she try to shout but suddenly he cover his hand on her mouth manyta luked at his choclatey brown eyez who was luking at her intentionaly manyta mummered tum


uday give her a chizy smile he go close to her n said


kyu kisi or ko expect kiya thi ...


manyta who is dumstuck nhi mai ... vo tum !!


she is confused her heatbeat beating like ...a jackpet


n one sentance was disturb ... her mind


R U FALL IN LOVE WID ME PRINCESS !!!


she just pushed him n said NO !!!


n she leave that place uday was confused wats wrong wid her ?




PARI N KRITZ 😳😳😳

well well well everyone want to kill me right now 😆😆 u have many questions right ?like who was aaditya n why she say i love u to him as he is a bf of manyta or something well first i mention in notice that some new charectors come out in this story i can't reveal him so easlie but i told u who is he as a chrector sketch


aaditya : (firstly i told u guyz i m biggest fan of ian n i can't control it anymore)aditye sighaniya a bissness tycon a most handsome good looking guy of india every girl want him his (blue eyez hipnotize iski kardi hai menu i swear widout shirt ye banda hawt lagta menu😳) i noe i noe its a song but i can't control my self 😆😆😆






















Edited by -Kritika- - 11 years ago

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