MANVEER FF/Chahun Mai Ya Na update chapter 12 pg 93 (new update) - Page 11

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Chapter 3

Haye guyz firstly 'I m glad u guyz like our ff I m try my best in this epi 'thanx for lovely pricious .. comment n like thanqu so '. Much bda wala thanqu this update for u shivani ' now here the update plzz guyz do comment n like also'n plz forgive me for my grammitical mistake also ' now here the update ..

Chahu mai ya na

Chapter 3

Manyta is now big trouble she thought if she is not going so jiya is upset with her'n she stop talking wid her or if she is going so she meets him n she is not that mood to meet him actually she can't face him ' couz of that kiss ' !!

So now she have no option n she decide to go there ' for jiya '. Couz she love her most n she never loose her so she decided to go uday niwas ' if she see him so she just ignore him '.

In other side '

Uday is ready now .. for the party ' he take his cell '. He felt his cell buzzing

he picked the call '

uday: ha bol rahul ' !!

rahul: where the hell r u ' ?

uday: In my room '!!

Rahul:wat ? wat r u doing there? U know today is party ' ?

Uday: I know today is party ' !!!

Rahul: tho tu kamre mai kya kar rha hai ?

Uday:party ke liye taiyaar ho rha tha ' !!

Rahul: taiyaar ho gaya ?

Uday: ha niche aa rha tha '

Rahul jaldi aa ' sare guest ana shuru ho chuke hai ' !!

Uday: ya ya I will .. come !!

Rahul: ok bye ' !!

jiya is standing in outside the hotel n mummered herself ' !!!

Jiya: agar aaj madam ko ana nhi tha tho btha deti mai nhi bulati ' kam se kam bhoothni ka intzaar tho nhi karana padta had hai party mai log ana shuru ho chuke hai or ye bhoothni ptha nhi konse shmshanghat(graviyard) mai jake bethi hai'.. hd hai '!!!

Suddenly one voice come ' (I M HERE)

Jiya turns her face 'to see that person!!!!!

Jiya: tu kha rhe gayi thi'. ?

Aarohi: bhoth traffic tha ' !!! or teri vajh se mai aai hu !!

Jiya bhoth ehsaan kiya ' !!!

Aarohi: ha kiya ' !!! kam se kam thanx tho bol de ' !!

Jiya: thanx ? thanx bolegi meri juti(sandel) ' !!

Aarohi: had hai bhalai ka tho zamana hi nhi rha ' !!

Jiya: tumhare liye nhi rha mere liye tho hai !!

Aarohi: shut up !!

Jiya: so kis ka wait kar rhi hai apne bhooth ka ..?

Aarohi: nhi tere salman khan ka ' !!

Jiya: vo party mai milega ab chal andar ' !!

Aarohi:chal !!

They both go inside .. the hotel

manyta trying to hide herself ' !!

Jiya: tu ye kya kar rhi hai !!!

Aarohi: tujhe ptha hai na ye hotel kis ka hai ?

Jiya: tu tho esa bol rhi hai jaise is hotel ka maalik mera bachapan ka dost hai' !!

Aarohi: agar vo tera childhood frnd hua na tho I tell u !!! mai tera khoon kar dungi ' !!!

Jiya: esa kon hai jiske liye tu mera khoon kar degi !!

Aarohi: are mera boss uday or kon ' !!

Jiya: wat ? seriously ? I mean ' yahi pe tujhe naukri milli hai kya jga hai ? maze aa gaye ' !!

Aarohi: sirf hotel awesome hai vo tho '. Vo tho dog hai haa nhi tho !!ullu k aptha kasmanukhana kahi ka '. !!!

Jiya:esa kesa interviw le liya ' !! ki tujhe uska chaira bhi nhi dekhna ' !!

Suddenly she rember that kiss ' !!!

Aarohi thought( ise kese bthau kya kiya usne mere sath or maine use karne diya)

Jiya: oh hello kha kho gayi'

Aarohi: nothing party mai chal na '

Jiya: kk !!

They reached ' inside the party' !!!

Every one is dancing '.!!

Jiya:wat a amazing party.its really awesome !!

Aarohi: truly agreed ..jiyu !!

In other side ' !!

Uday vb j rahul unnati ' seat n bizy to talking each other ' !!!

J: wow rahul I never thought u thorwing like this party (wid attitude)

Rahul: j my sweetheart ..!! well I throw this party because just I show u that u never know me exectly '!!

J- really rahul ? but I dispoint u because I know u exectly ' u r uday's best frnd (she give him smrik)

Rahul: I m uday's best u know this 'but this is not a main point '. I m a rahul sighania ' saighnia's company ka maalik n u know wat everyone knowz me ' accept ur bloody attitude'!!

Vb: wow rahul or j bhai ka ghama san udh(fight) ' dekhte hai kon jitega ' kahi mat jaiye '. Me vijaidar singhn camra women unnati ke sath '. Just wait n watch ' !!!

Every one brust out lagh except j !!

J: watever (n rolled her eyez wid attitude)

Unnati: vese rahul ye party kis liye throw ki hai !!

Rahu:l ek khass wajh hai !!

Unnati: tum shadi kar rhe ho kya !!!

Rahul: unnati maine bola khaas wajh hai maine ye nhi bola shock manane ke liye ye party throw ki hai !!

J: vese uday '!!

Uday: ya princess' !!

J: hume ptha chala hai 'ki tum firse single ho'!!

Uday: j tumhe tho khush hona chaiye ki akhir kar hum single ho gaye ab tum humare sath zyada time spend kar sakti ho !!

J: oh plz uday hume ptha hai tum phele ladkiyo ke sath flirt karte ho or jab tumhara man bhar jata hai tho manyta or apne roke ke bare mai btha ke unse rishta thod dete ho !!

Uday: smell aa rhi hai jalne ki !!!

J: wat rubish !!

Uday: apne bhen se ithna bhi mat jalo j ki fire brigide bulani pade ' !!

J: watever !!

J: tumhe is party mai maze aa rhe hai uday jha tak hume tumhe jante hai tumhe loud parties pasand hai !!

Uday: princess vo kya hai na '. !! humare hotel ki party hai tho afcouse aachi lage gi!! Or humare best frnd ki party hai so I like it !!

J: really ' !!

Uday: princess hum tumhari trha moodi nhi hai if agar hume party achi nhi lagti tho hum yha kabhi nhi ate ' !!!

J: watever' !!I i thought I have a drink !!

Uday: go a head !!

She turn around '. !!!!

N BAAAM ''''' !!!

J: wat the '. ? !!!

everyone just try to conrtrol laugh'

Actually one girl hit another girl n another girl have a wine on her hand ' !!she throw a wine on j face ' !! uday just luk at that ' who throw a wine on her face !! she is none other than ' !!! aarohi uday luk at her she is luking damn sexy in red dress ' !!suddenly uday have big smile on his face '

Aarohi: I m so ' !! she luk at him wid a big shock she feel 40 watz corrent pass on her body ' !!

Unnati: r u kk j ?

J: unnati really ? u think I m kk !!

Rahul start laughing !!!

Vb: aaw j ke upar giri wine ab kya karegi vo is ladki ke sath be tune with me vijaydr singh or camera women unnatii!!

J: luk at him wid angrly

suddenly J just luk at aarohi ' !!

J: wow hume nhi ptha tha uday ' tumare is hotel mai esa log bhi aa jate hai !! hey bhar ka watch man tumhare rishtedar(relative) hai kya?

Jiya:luk uski' !!

She say something but manyta stop her !!!

Uday know her very well he knew definetly she speak something weard '

Manyta: oh plz ms'. ?

J:princess jaynadani'

Manyta: ya watever' !! (she rolled her eyez) !!

Manyta: vo mera rishtedar nhi hai but maine use pucha tha ki aap kis ke relative hai !!! tho usne kha ms.jay chudail ka ' !!

Everyone shock now because j is princess of devagar..no one can toned her on her face they have no guts to tonnde on her face or show attitude something but she is different'.. now unnati thought( who is she? first time j meet a girl who tonned on her face with attitude first time she meet her compition wow she is diffrenet)Everyone who listen her'.. they brusted out laugh ' except j ' !!

J shaut (guard)

Jiya: bhaag yha se aaruoo !!!

aarohi: aane de guards ko '. !!! in ka tho churma bna dungi mai ' !!

jiya: badh mai badla le lege abhi bhaag ' !!

they both '.run '. !!!

guard: jee !!

j: un dono ko pakaado ' !!

guards: ok mam !!

guards run to catch both ' !!

guard: ladki ruk!!

Jiya: agar ruk gaye '. !!! tho tum kaminy jail mai daal doge ' !!

aarohi n jiya go outside ' the party '.

Jiya:tu udhar ja mai idhar jati hu !!!

Aarohi: kk !!

Manyta' see one room is open she entered the room n close the door ' !!

In party' !!

GUARDS ( MAM VO DONO BHAAG GAYI ) !!

J: wat the hell tum 2 ladkiyo ko nhi pakad sakte ' !!

Guards(vo hotel se bhaar nhi gayi hai isi hotel mai chupi hai)

J:tho meri shakal kya dekh rhe ho dhudo agar apni naukari pyaari hai tho ' !!!

Uday thought(mrs jhasi ki rani bhoth fast hai(he smrik) vese vo abhi hotel mai hi hai so iska mathlab she is in trouble now n I don't know why hum use trouble mai nhi dekh sakte .. it means I try to search her)

He excuse everyone n go outside of the party ' !!

He mummered ( where r u miss jhasi ki rani ?)

He trying to search her in every where ' !! but there have many rooms so he decide to go his room n change that cloths n than he search her ' !!

He go his room !!!

Now he open the door ' !!!

Now he luk his room ' room is empty

Uday go close his vodrop suddenly he listen some voice in his room !! he try to listen where that voice come ' !!!that voice come in his bad ' !!!he luk down in his bad ' !!

Uday see a one girl who is mummred herself ' n close her eyez n she luk like a cute child ' !!!

Now he have big smile on his face ' !!! to see her ' !!

Uday: ms jhasi ki rani wat r u doing here ?

She open her eyez widh shock ' !!!

Luk at him innocently !!!

Uday luk at her with smrik ' !!

They both in eyecontact ' !!!

after 15 min manyta back her sense ' !!! n she turn her face ' !!

uday: ab puri raat tumhe is bad ke niche bithani hai ya upar bhi aaogi ? !!

manyta luk at him n said (kyu ye tumhara bad hai)

uday: ha ye humara kamra hai or ye hamara bad ' !! so if u don't mind hume change karna hai !!! vese tho tum yha rhe sakti ho hume koi prob nhi hai kyu ki kaafi ladkiya hume without shirt dekhne ke liye marti hai !!!

suddenly she come outside n said angry ( ye sab tumhari galti hai )

uday: humne kha tha tumhe j par wine daalne ke liye ?

manyta: tumne mujhe marne ki koshish ki vo bhi apni ghatiya car se '. Jis aadmi ko maine ithna sunaya ' jiski caar ka shisha thod diya '.vo hi mera bose nikkala ' !! or apna badla lene ' ke liye usne mere sath smooch ki ' !!!or u know what 1^st time ever mai tumhe rok nhi paai ' !! fir tumne mujhe naukri pe rakh liya ' !!fir mai ghar wapis gayi ' tho jiya ne mujhe is party mai bula liya .. mai yha phochi tho galti se us chudail par wine daal di or ab vo chudail bhatakti atma ki trha meri piche padi ' ye sab tumhari galti hai (she saide in one breath)

suddenly one voice in come outside the room

uday put his hand on her lips !!

uday:shhh !!!

guard: milli ladki ?

2 guard: nhi yr ' !!

Guard: dhudo hume vo kisi bhi halat mai chaiye ' !!!

2guard: thik hai ' !!

Manyta luk at him ' she is now dumbstuck'. She luk his face '. She thought(he so smart how girl no fall in love with him '

Suddenly uday lukz her eyes ' Who lukz him with intentionaly now uday is unable to control him self ' he remove his hand on her face 'uday thought( how anyone can be so innocent) uday go close to her '!!! Now manyta know wat is next now ' she closed her eyes '. Slowly ' she is ready to kiss him now uday smrik at her he try to more close him they both feel a warm breath

Suddenly 'lights off !

now Manyta sacared n huged him very titly .. he smile at her ' uday give her a back hug '!!

Uday: mrs jhasi ki rani ko andhere se dar lagta hai !!

Aarohi break a hug luk at those eyez innocently she nodded very innocently he luk at her put his hand on her chicks more close to her n kiss on her chiks ' than he kiss on her eyez 'he kiss on her forhead..now she close her eyez she don't know why but she likes his touch 'his touch like a magical'to her 'now he try to kiss on her lips 'he more close to her n tag his lips on her lips .. very softly he kissed her now manyta unable to control her feelling 'she response him back with more passnality uday is shocked to see her like this .. he gently kiss her wid full force' in after few minutes when they both have no oxygen ..so uday n aarohi break the kiss luk into eachother eye !! now he had didn't control his feeling he take her weast pull her more close to him aarohi just luk at those eyez who hipnotize her'!!

Aarohi ( why I m doing this? why I can't stop him? his eyez trying to hipnotize me wat the hell is going on? wats wrong with me ? jab bhi ise dekhti hu tho kyu ise dur nhi ja pati? )

that's it guyz howz it I hope u like it '. !!! plz comment n like also

precape: manyta in uday's rum n jiya in store rum wid ''his salman khan !!

kritz n pari ' !!!