Smitar's: Finding Khushi #8 Part28(4) Pg 133(19/5)

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Jenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Aww such a cute update loved it
Thanks for the PM
God bless
Jenna

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nisha_mehta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Wonderful part.
Waiting for the next part

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lala rukh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Aww loved it too good looking forward to the wedding functions:-)

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Sarah

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

Wow that was an amazing and brilliant update,

Awww bless khushi was so emotional to leave munshiji and the radio, loved Arnav telling her she is not going out of space.

Loving Arnav he is just so sweet and cute.

Loving buaji and mamiji with there cute remarks and teasing.

Please continue soon, eager to read how the Shagun goes.

Thanks for the PM xx

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Rhysenn

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Lovely! But this update was too short!

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

wow great story plz update soon
it's a beautiful story
thanks for the pm

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Mrinalini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

THANK GOD I'm NOT TOO LATE THIS TIME! 😳

HERE'S MY VISHESH TIPPANI on Chapter 25 (4)

Loved the update Smita.. It was so sweet! The Raizada's at the Gupta House to give Shagun! 😃 👏

Here I go with my favourite scenes...

First,

Nani, Mami, Payal, and Anjali hugged Buaji & Amma, grateful that Khushi had agreed to marry Arnav at the earliest. NK & Akash smiled to see the joy on the faces of the ladies, and sat down among them.

Sipping tea and nibbling Khushi's sweets, they discussed and fixed the dates for sagai, sangeet, mehendi, haldi, & the shaadi. They then discussed about the guests they needed to invite. Babuji watched them silently, happy.

Then Mami said, smiling, "We hab brought all the gifats (gifts) for the shagun. Bhere is your ladki?"

Buaji said, smiling, "Today is her last day with Munshiji in the godown, Nandkisore. Her work is over. She should be coming home anytime now."

Nani & Anjali nodded.

Anjali whispered, "Chotey must have gone to get her, Nani."

Nani chuckled.

"Aphter (after) all, Khussi ijj working bery (very) phar (far) away, on the next streetwaa!", Mami laughed.

The para above ^^^.. Hahaha.. Both the famileej together pulling Arnav bitwa and Khussi bitiya's legswa! 🤣

I really love the way Maami goes on with it! She is a Natural! 😆

*Really cute Smita*

Second,

"Don't be sad, Bitiyaa. You are going to get married soon, aren't you? Have a very happy life! May you have many many children!", Munshiji blessed her.

Khushi shook her head in agreement, and tried to wipe all traces of tears from her face.

Munshiji looked over her shoulder, smiled, and said, "Acha he, your aadmi has come to take you away in his doli."

Khushi turned around, startled, to see Arnavji leaning against the door. She smiled at him through her tears.

"Munshiji, we are getting married on the 15^th. We would like you to attend the function and bless us.", Arnav said, softly.

Munshiji beamed and said, "Zaroor, beta. Zaroor."

"I will send you the invitation card.", Arnav promised.

Munshiji nodded.

The para above ^^^.. Really well expressed.. Loved the way Munshi ji said "your aadmi has come to take you away in his doli."

Very true! Kyun Mr. ASR! 😉 Agar inka bass chale to he will get the doli today itself! 😳

Third,

Arnav took Khushi's hand as he led her out of the godown and towards his car. He helped her into her seat, fastened her seat belt, shut the door, and took his seat.

"Tum theek ho?", he asked.

She nodded, wiping her cheek with her hand.

He offered her his hanky.

Khushi took it and dried her face.

"Munshiji' and his radio...", she whispered. "I will miss both of them..."

Arnav smiled. "You are not going to outer space, Khushi. You will be still in Delhi after marriage. Just a few kilometres away'"

Khushi nodded. "I know. But... I don't know why, Arnavji... It seems like another world.", she sniffed.

Arnav leaned and pressed a kiss on her sweet cheek.

"Buaji is right when she called you sanki, Munshiji's chamchi..", he said, smiling.

Khushi pouted at him.

Arnav's eyes dropped to her pink lips, and his eyes sharpened with obvious interest and intent.

Khushi turned her head away, a blush rendering her cheeks rosy.

This was ^^^ A.D.O.R.A.B.L.E.. ❤️

Loved the way Arnav cheered her up and also KISSED her!

Khushi.. ab bhi blush kar rahi ho! 😳

*I bow down to you Smita*

And for the the LAST PART... Finally Shagun coming up in next chapter! Continue soon!

I'm going on a holiday for 5 days! May not comment but will give my detailed comments on Tuesday Night!

@Smita: Love you sooo much for the update... 🤗

@Rashmi: Thanks for the PM! 😉 Love you! 🤗

Continue soon! Desperately waiting for Next Chapter!

Now All i have to do is..

Loads of love, ❤️

Mrina 😊

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annieK

@annieK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Nice update Smita .

And thnx for the pm @rashmi.

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Param

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

wow Khushi agreed to marriage and Arnav without wasting time got the nearest date for his marriage to Khushi.. loved the updates.. Khushi was sad to leave munshiji and the radio.. awesome updates.. 😃

thanks for pm 😊