ArHi FF: Between two Strangers - # 3 - REMOVED

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dis_arshi

@dis_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#301

lovely..its really nice to see arnav is so understandable and caring about khushi...such a lovely husband he is😳

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Seeta

@LadyR

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Posted: 12 years ago

#302

Arnav truly loves Khushi and I hope he is able to give her the space with her trust issues. The shower scene was really cute as was Khushis reaction to the size of the bathroom !!!! Arnavs eagerness to marry Anjali off was equally adorable...

They are off to Delhi to register their marriage and I hope nothing goes wrong, am eager to read about Shyams reaction when he finds out they are married...

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#303

Trust me Deeps, wen i say i hv read a lot of Matured content on IF... I'm a Besharam n I admit it... 😳 😉 Bt dis ws sumthng wich cn b described in wrds... I wud insult wrds if I describe dis... Dis is d mst beautiful form of matured content i hv evr read... D wrds were carefully n beautifully chosen, In all it ws cute yet sensual... D bathroom scene ws Awesum... 😆 Luvd ur writing, wud luv 2 read 4m u more... 👏

Y isn't dere a lyk tab 4 PM too???? 😆

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anyafarsi

@anyafarsi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#304

aww i loved the whole chapter...it was amazing...you've described everything really nicely n to the point...it was awesome

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Deepthi

@ToxicLove

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Posted: 12 years ago

#305

Originally posted by: asthagarwal
Trust me Deeps, wen i say i hv read a lot of Matured content on IF... I'm a Besharam n I admit it... 😳 😉 Bt dis ws sumthng wich cn b described in wrds... I wud insult wrds if I describe dis... Dis is d mst beautiful form of matured content i hv evr read... D wrds were carefully n beautifully chosen, In all it ws cute yet sensual... D bathroom scene ws Awesum... 😆 Luvd ur writing, wud luv 2 read 4m u more... 👏

Y isn't dere a lyk tab 4 PM too???? 😆

Awww, this is the best comment I read about my writing..."I wud insult wrds if I describe dis... ". I dont really consider myself as prolific writer nor I am good at writing the matured conent. I am not very comfy writing the body parts. If given chance I would avoid the matured content but my story calls for it so I had to pen down something..And I am glad it worked this time :)

Thanks for your wonderful comments. You made my day. Thanks zillion dear.

Edited by deepthiya - 12 years ago

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asthagarwal

@asthagarwal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#306

Originally posted by: deepthiya

Awww, this is the best comment I read about my writing..."I wud insult wrds if I describe dis... ". I dont really consider myself as prolific writer nor I am good at writing the matured conent. I am not very comfy writing the body parts. If given chance I would avoid the matured content but my story calls for it so I had to pen down something..And I am glad it worked this time :)

Thanks for your wonderful comments. You made my day. Thanks zillion dear.

I knw n cn understand ur uneasiness... It calls a lot of strength 2 write such content... Wen i wrote it 4 my Two shot I ws so nervous tht i dnt check comments for d whole 1 day... Bt I ws glad tht readers lykd it... N I'm so overwhelmed wid ur response...

Trust me, d pleasure of commenting here, ws entirely mine... 😃

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Snoowfall

@Snoowfall

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#307

Deep, you are the best in this, liked the way they talk all the wordings, this one of the best I have read, you showed it perfectly to us thru your words, her hesitation then he relaxing her, it could not been any more prefect, not sure why she withdrew, I am sure you have something in store for us, I thoroughly enjoyed it, I agree with Arnav worst surprise ever, and they married twice, like that too, so thoughtful of him that she missed it and decided to make it happen for her again...

The best for me was when he says sorry and ask her for help, no other FF that I read so far has that, it was the best, thanks dear...

The mature content you wrote was too good, it is not easy to write, the flow with which you wrote was awesome

Edited by arnkhunostalgic - 12 years ago