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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Ratna--

Thank u Foru 🤗...lovely update...always feel good to see Hiten and Agni bonding...awww our hero is injured ...hope he get well soon...so sweet of Meera to visit him ...he was all alone at home 😳...can so imagine them sharing coffee and talking ...his sister and mother noticed a change in him...yeh toh hona hi tha...he spent the whole evening with his love...waiting for the next update 😊


thanks for such a nice comment diii
yeah thanks to me that he was alone, maine uske family ko jaan bujkar bahar bhej dia tha😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks for all the like and appreciation guys🤗
Edited by foram. - 11 years ago
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Days were passing slowly for Agantuk, he was getting bored and restless as he was asked to take a bed rest and was not allowed to go anywhere by his mom. It has been so many days wen he met meera last time. His behavior changed, he was getting angry on everyone for no reasons... his family got worried for his sudden mood swings, only hiten knew the reason for this change in him. hiten knew that Agantuk has not seen meera for days, he was missing her terribly, wanted to see her beautiful face, her smile.. he wanted to talk to her, but he wasn't able to help his friend. Even Meera got busy with her work and didnt met Agantuk for days.
Finally after so many days Agantuk insisted his mom to let him go out atleast for a walk. he called Hiten and asked him to take him to his movie set as he expected Meera to be there. they both reached studio. everyone was happy to see Agantuk back after a long time, they all greeted him and wished him to recover soon and join them soon,but his eyes were only and only looking for Meera. Aganutk got disappointed as he didnt found Meera there, he walked out from set in anger without imforming anyone and leaving behind hiten. he went to his car and decided to go to Meera's house. his hand was still fractured and driving was not possible for him but he was so desperate to see her that he didnt even realised the pain in his hand. Soon he reached Meera's house and went inside. he knocked the door.. but got no reply so he again knocked the door, this time someone came and opened the door. his heart skipped a beat, the moment paused for him, his legs were stucked to that place unable to move forward nor back ward...as he saw Beautiful Meera standing in front of him... she was looking gorgeous in white kurti and red salwar... her hairs were tied up in a tight bun but a small lat or a strip of hair was covering her beautiful face. she was busy putting those hairs behind her ears as her hands were covered with flour and she couldnt touch her hairs with those hands, she didnt noticed who was at door... Mohit came forward and helped her by putting her hairs behind her ears... his hand touched her beautiful face... she was shocked as she felt an unfamiliar touch on her face, she looked up at the person... she was surprised... and both shared a eyelock which was for just few seconds as Mohit broke the silence and said: m so sorry i touched you, but i saw you struggling to put your hairs behind so i helped you. i hope i didnt do anything wrong😕😕😕, "oh no not at all and thanks" replied Meera. Mohit: so hmmm can i come in???? Mouni: oh m so sorry i didnt ask you to come in.. pls come in and take a seat, i just wash my hand and come back. she rushed in kitchen. Mohit was looking around her living room, it was beautifully decorated with nice show piece and beautiful wall paintings, he had visited her house before wen he came to drop her home but then he left in a hurry...he sat on a sofa and was waiting for her to come.
Meera washed her hand, cleared the flour from her dress and opened the bun and let the hairs down. she came out with a glass of water. and settled next to him.
he took some sip of water and kept the glass down... again their was a silence around.she broke the silence and asked him about his hand. "its fine now. i can do some hand movements too, and in a week my fracture band will be removed. and i can get back to my work. he replied with a smile. then again a pin drop silence as they didnt knew what to talk???
then Agantuk looked around and asked her about the paintings. Meera replied with a smile that she love paintings and love to collect such unique paintings and antiques. then she asked about the wall paintings which she saw in his room and then both talked about art, paintings, their fav painters, artists etc. while talking Meera mentioned that she too like to paint to which Agantuk asked her to show some of her work. she got up and asked him to follow, she went to her bedroom, wen they entered he saw a beautiful portrait on the opposite wall, the portrait was of a lil girl with her dad... he took no time to recognize that it was Meera. but to confirm he asked about that portrait to which she said that she herself made that portrait. she said " its me and my dad, i love my dad so much and this is my first ever portrait and its very special to me. Agantuk was mesmerized with that cute and innocent smile of lil meera, she was sitting on her father's lap and her father had a story book in his hand, he was telling her a story and meera was smiling listening to it. Agantuk then turned towards Meera who had that same innocent smile while talking about her father. he was looking at her and Meera was talking about her father, he was lost in those beautiful eyes, which were filled with joy, happiness and proud feeling. he uttered Beautiful... she stopped and looked at him... he then came to his senses and said "beautiful portrait, you are a born artist, so you have so many hidden talents within you, we need to meet everyday so that i can know more about you." with a twinkle in his eyes😳. Meera smiled and they went outside...
Agantuk almost spent his whole day with Meera, he still wanted to stay with her but Meera was worried for his health so she asked " dont you want to go home, you need to take rest, we will meet tomorrow. Agantuk was unhappy with this he thought " why cant i be with her forever, i dont want to go anywhere" but with faded smile he got up to leave, but before going he asked her to meet tomorrow for a coffee date, she happily agreed.
Here, hiten was all worried about Agantuk, coz Agantuk suddenly disappeared without informing anyone, Agantuk's mom was worried and was constantly calling hiten to know about Agantuk.

Agantuk, came near his car and saw his cell phone blinking, he saw 100 missed calls from his home and from hiten. he called back hiten.
Hiten was angry on Agni, as soon as he picked up his call, before Agantuk can say anything he started firing on Agantuk.
" where were you, do you even know how worried we were, have you lost your mind. how can you be so careless, now will you speak up m waiting for your answer, Agantuk... was about to reply but Hiten started to speak all over again...
"what you think of yourself???, we are nothing for you... i am noticing your behavior from past few days, you are hurting your parents and me, you dont care for us but we do, we love you and so we care for you, now will you reply?? where the hell are you😡. Agantuk: sighed a relief and said "phewww!!! are you done??? now listen.. i was at Meera's house and just now i came out. dont worry i am going home you meet me there, then we will sit and talk. Hiten was relived that Agantuk was fine and composed, he seemed happy, but at the same time Hiten was worried for Agnatuk and his love for Meera!!! what if Meera has no such feeling for Agantuk and what if she dont accept his love??? then what will happen to him, he is so crazy about her that in this state too he went to meet her. i just hope that no such day come in my life wen i have to see my friend heart broken, i need to do something, i need to talk to meera. i need to know what she think for Agantuk, but first i need to meet my friend.
and he left to Agantuk's house.



Edited by foram. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay Di...I read the FF once again. Now I am Demanding a out and out romantic update on Meera and Agantuk.
By the way Agantuk injured then Meera must take care of him...is that posssible?? ❤️And about Hiten...🤣Yaar kitna achcha kisat hai Agantuk ki jo use itna achcha dost mila jo Bhabi ke bare mein janne ke liye mithai ka dabba leke neend kharab karne aa gaya🤣...Next Update kab hain??
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg you guys here.
will update tom.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: foram.

omg you guys here.
will update tom.


1:00 pm ke baad karna!! Tab tak mein school se bhi aa jaungi 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
Okay...I will be also there.
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Posted: 11 years ago
DI...I am here.
Lets start...with Agantuk and his Tanhai. Well when someone got injured and forced to stay home. I can feel it because hum bhi kabhi guzre hai uss rastey se...😭
But like his mom caring for him.😊
Wow...he was restless for Meera??😳
"Inteha ho gayi Intezar ki/Aye na kuch khabar mere yaar ki" Thoda dheere chalo Agantuk Dada. She needs some time...and after her realizing herself she will come to you running.😃
Then He went to his movie set and got once again angry and frustrated so he left.😆😆😆
"Ishq mein/tere Ishq mein/Kar diya/Kar diya...bekhabar./Bechain shamon shehr/Bas tujhe/yaad karta hoon main har pal..." So my bro is little too impatient so he remmebering my Princess Di went to her house.☺️
Meera was cooking😃Making Roti?Paratha?Luchi?Puri? what???😳
Anyways here once again Magical MoMo moment...him putting aside a loose strand of hair, her shying and then talking...Wow Meera is a painter too...so she can paint(landskep and portrait), dance, sing...well now I just want to know what could she possibly not know??😎 In one word Brilliant👏👏👏
Okay Back to MoMo moment...loved every bit and like Agantuk me too don't want it to end.😭BBBut...yeah he must go home.

Di 100 missed calls??🤣Mujhe ek baar mere Uncles, Aunty and cousin brother ke kul milake 15 missed calls aye the. But thenwell I need to explain them and...oh yeah last one was from my Principal 4 missed calls...he was very angry as I kept my cell silent but then again was happy...coz of my result.But the gyst is missed calls
🤣
Aur yahan toh our Agantuk Dada got 100...so better luck with that. And Hiten is a very good friend of Agantuk. Itna question😆But I like that tooo...so Hiten is going to interrogate Meera now??Kuch hilarious funny moments dena Di...arsa ho chuka hai kuch comical pade huye.
So Awesome updates...keep going.

Edited by mmroyalkaterick - 11 years ago
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Kasam mere momo ki kya likhti hai tu yaar!!

Awww...agantuk is getting restless!!! 😳 koi baat nahi agantuk pyaar mein aksar aisa ho hota hai!!! 🤣

Ye dil hai ki manta nahi!!! Agantuk ki bhi kuch aisi hi situation hai i guess!! Bechara kismat ka maara! Jisko chahta hai ki wo uske peeche padhe wo to padhi nahi hai! Aur jisko wo nahi chahta hai wo sab uske peeche padhe huye hai! Koi nahi agantuk pyaar mein akasar aisi choti-choti batein hoti rehti hai!!! 😆😆

So finally janaab aisi phati huyi halat mein meera ke paas gaye! And must have looked so beautiful na in red n white!! 😳 Yaha meri halat sirf soch ke aisi ho rahi hai then agantuk ke saamne to sakshat meera devi khadi thi! Bechara aadhi baatein to use dekhke hi bhool gaya hoga!!

Ohhh...😳😳😳 he touched her!!! ufff!!!

Hmmm...so meera knows painting too just like ahem ahem...!!! 😛 Painting ke baare mein hi baat karte rahe!! yaar...!! agantuk agar aisa karega na to 10 janam mein bhi usse propose nahi kar payega!! lagta hai mue agantuk ko training deni hi padegi!! 🤣

Duniya mein ha kisiko hiten jaisa dost mile! Chalo sahi hai ab wo meera and agantuk ki setting karwayega!! Good luck hiten! Acha hai warna muje hi jaana padta agantuk ko training dene!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: mmroyalkaterick

DI...I am here.
Lets start...with Agantuk and his Tanhai. Well when someone got injured and forced to stay home. I can feel it because hum bhi kabhi guzre hai uss rastey se...😭
But like his mom caring for him.😊
Wow...he was restless for Meera??😳
"Inteha ho gayi Intezar ki/Aye na kuch khabar mere yaar ki" Thoda dheere chalo Agantuk Dada. She needs some time...and after her realizing herself she will come to you running.😃
Then He went to his movie set and got once again angry and frustrated so he left.😆😆😆
"Ishq mein/tere Ishq mein/Kar diya/Kar diya...bekhabar./Bechain shamon shehr/Bas tujhe/yaad karta hoon main har pal..." So my bro is little too impatient so he remmebering my Princess Di went to her house.☺️
Meera was cooking😃Making Roti?Paratha?Luchi?Puri? what???😳
Anyways here once again Magical MoMo moment...him putting aside a loose strand of hair, her shying and then talking...Wow Meera is a painter too...so she can paint(landskep and portrait), dance, sing...well now I just want to know what could she possibly not know??😎 In one word Brilliant👏👏👏
Okay Back to MoMo moment...loved every bit and like Agantuk me too don't want it to end.😭BBBut...yeah he must go home.

Di 100 missed calls??🤣Mujhe ek baar mere Uncles, Aunty and cousin brother ke kul milake 15 missed calls aye the. But thenwell I need to explain them and...oh yeah last one was from my Principal 4 missed calls...he was very angry as I kept my cell silent but then again was happy...coz of my result.But the gyst is missed calls
🤣
Aur yahan toh our Agantuk Dada got 100...so better luck with that. And Hiten is a very good friend of Agantuk. Itna question😆But I like that tooo...so Hiten is going to interrogate Meera now??Kuch hilarious funny moments dena Di...arsa ho chuka hai kuch comical pade huye.
So Awesome updates...keep going.



aww thanks for such a biggg comment
and you want something funny
well tera reply hi itna funnny hai ki kya kahu

now coming back to your reply
hmmm meera was making paratha's but main momo me itni kho gai ki bhul hi gai ki meera kuch paka rahi thi, well jane de uska kaam uski bai ne kar dia😆😆

hehe i know 100 missed calls kuch jyada ho gaya na
🤣 but isse effect padta hai samjhi😆😆😆

yeah yeah hiten hi khud funny insan hai funny update to jarur milega

and hamare despo agantuk babu ka bhi kuch karna padega😆😆😆

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