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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: momo121

Loved the CS and the teaser!
Plx continue soon and thnks for the pm


thnkss😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62
The teaser is just awesome !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
HELLO ! guyzzz now ap logo ka intizaar khatam hua...here is the 1st update...guyxx i had my story book me uspe arshi ki stories likhti hun...bohat sari writes ki hn mene...btw enjoy1

ENJOY!😉

IN MUMBAI

6 year old baby standing with school bag...then she say...

girl:mama come fast! we are getting late and you now that i dont like to going late?

then a young woman 25 her age...wearing this...woman shouting..'

yes guyxx its khushi...

khushi:ayii meri maa ayiii! lo bas me agayii ab chalen sana.?
yeah that baby is sana...khushi's daughter...

sana:what the? how many time to tell you dont wearing this type of cloths you are looking good in indian cloths mama! not western.

khushi:my baby ! mere office me indian cloths nahi pehne jate tabi to mama ye pehnti hai na...acha abhi humko late nahi hora?

sana:oh yeah! lets go...

IN DEHLI

RM..

anjali:chote nashta kar lo?

arnav:no di i am getting late for the office...

arnav left

anjali:ye chotte bhi na pata nahi kab sudhren ge!

then suddenly 1 boy hit anjali's hip by his football...

anjali:aravvv!

yeah arav anjali's son...8 years old...

arav:sorry mum!

raj:lojii start hogaya iska subha ka sorry...

arav:hey dad!

raj:hi buddy!

arav:where is mamu?

anjali:your mamu is left for the office...

arav:oh! shit again mamu forget ?

raj:yup! buddy your mamu forget! ke unko aj tumare school jana tha...

arav:ye mamu bhi na...sab muje yad dilana parta hai unko to...

AR groups...

la:ASR ye files aap ek bar read kar len ...phir me Mr.khanna ka bhej doon...

arnav:hmm rakh do...or aman ko bhejo...

la:ohk asr

lavanya left...

aman cabin me ata hai!

aman:asr Mr.mehta ko desigens bohat pasand aye hen...but..

arnav:but??whatt?

aman:asr wo chate hen ke humare sath deal fainal karne se pehle ap or Mr.mehta SG desigens ke MD se mulakat karen or unke desigens dekh len phir teeno companies partnership karen jis me ziyada profit hume hoga...ek dafa meeting kar len...

arnav:hmm alright! kab meeting karni hai.. ..??

aman:asr wo Mr;mehta ne kaha hai next week me he meeting fix karenge...

arnav:hmm fine...and pata karo SG desigens me kon kon se staaf hen...

aman:ok asr...

aman leave..

arnav open the drawar..and tooke the picture...

arnav:where are u? kahan chali gayii ho muje chor kar khushi where are u??

arnav's eyes was teary...

IN MUMBAI...
SG desigens...

girl:khushi! boss tuje bula re hen

khushi:ok me jati hoon...

girl leave...

boss cabin...

khushi:sir apne muje bulaya?

boss:khushiii! kitni bar kaha hai sir nai samrat kaha karoo...

khushi:ok ok fine samrat...kaho kyun bulaya hai?

samrat:khushi kal sana ke school me function hai na jahan wo koi act karne wali hai..to sana ne strickly order diya hai ke mama or dad ko ana hai..warna wo act nahi kare gi...

khushi:i know samrat...tum subha ghar ajana wahin se hum teeno sath sana ke school chalen ge ok...

samrat:yeah thts great idea

sana called him dad...

next day...

khushi:bacha are u ready!?

sana:yes mama!

khushi:are wah ur lookiing great han..

sana:hmm...

then samrat come...

samrat:hello! guyxx

sana/khushi:hi...

samrat:wah! sana u look preety!

sana:hmm...now can we leave we are al ready late!

samrat: yeah lets go...

they leave for the school...

they reached school!

mam:hello samrat khushi! how are u both?

samrat:we are fine u say?

mam:i am good! lets go to function hall...

khushi:hmm ok...

arnav is also there!

arnav raste se jata hai jahan sana us se takra jati hai!

sana:what the? are u blind damm it?

arnav shocked to hear this words...

arnav:what u said baby?

sana:i dont like to repeat again and again! Mr. ...

anousment...

now our school's best student ! sana...sana come on the stage!

sana look at arnav and said!

sana:laad govarner!

then she leave there!

arnav:what the! she said laad governar...ye to sirf muje khushi kehti thi..ye...(arnav thinking)

flash back...

arnav:khushiii!

khushi:kya hai?

arnav:how many times to tell u dont dare to touch my things damm it!

khushi:humne kia kiya? apki sari files pure kamre me bhikhri pari thi to mene side pe theek kar ke rakhi hen yahan! ap ko nazar nai aya humari galti nai hai...

arnav:what the! i warn you last or first time khushi dont touch my thins again samjii tum...

khushi:huh! chillaiye mat! hume dheere sun ne me ata hai laad governar kahi ke!

arnav:youuu!

khushi left...

flashback end...

princi:Mr. raizada are u ok?

arnav:yeah! wo bachi kon hai?

princi:wo is school ki sab se best or intelligent student hai...

arnav:her name?

princi:sana

arnav: full name?

samrat come and says!

samrat:sana shergil! any problem?

arnav:no ! why i have any probblem!

samrat:hmm..em samrat shergil!

arnav:arnav singh raizada!!

samrat :i know! ap ko kon nai janta! nice to meet you!

arnav:hmm...

samrat:btw sana is my daughter!

Arnav:nice girl!

samrat:i know just like her mother!

arnav:hmm..ok bye

samrat:bye...

arnav leave the hall...

samrat know all about arnav...

in hall...

khushi:kahan gaye the?

samrat:mam ne bulaya tha!

khushi: acha!

samrat:see sana agayii...

sana act...

sana copying to khushi...

her talking her dressing her crying her singing her dancing her hair styly...etc ect...

arnav shocked to watch sana's act..and smile after 6 years..

arnav:muje esa kyun lag ra hai ke me is bachi ko barso se janta hun ...muje kyun lag ra hai mera is se koi to connection hai...or muje esa kyun lag ra hai khushi mere aas pass hai...

khushi:samrat me abhi ati hoon sana ke pass se..

samrat:ohk!

khushi leave to backstage...

khushi:wah! bacha tumne muje bataya kyun nahi ke tum ye act karne wali ho?

sana:mama muje laga ap ko bura lage ga...

khushi:are! muje kyun bura lage ga...

here is part end...


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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
me first🥳

nice update...
sana calls samrat dad...
waiting for arshi to meet...
really wanna know what happened in past...
continue soon n thnx for the pm...
Edited by cheesemad - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
Hey dis was very well written. Enjoyed it to bits.. Hope arshi meet soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66
fantastic update...Sana met his father.. Arnav got hint thats why he was asking her surname but Samrat interrupted..
waiting for next update...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Sana met Arnav.
Sana Shergil..! She called Samrat as dad..!
Arnav was confused after conversation with Sana.He asked her surname.But Samrat intervened.
Waiting for next update.😊
Edited by megh.arhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Res. Kal comment karti hu padh k... Abhi lunch time hai😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
Super
Sana has met her father.
Continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
updated my comment on page 20:)

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