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@Marinajan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#291

hello guyxx ...next part is last part...i know guyxx u all feel bad for that...here is part 6...

chapter 6

arnav:is ka matlab wo khushi or meri beti hai...khushi me tume wapis lake rahoon ga its my promise...

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next morning...

arnav came down...

arnav:diii jijajii...

raj:kya hua chotte ap chilla kyun rahe ho?

anjali:chotte ap thek to ho u smiling...

arnav:di bat hi kuch esi hai...

raj:esi konsi bat hai...jisne apke chehre pe muskurahat ladi...

arnav:jijaji...that child is mine and khushi's...

anjali:sachhh...

arnav:han di...

raj:to der kis bat ki jao dono ko apne asli ghar me le ao go chotte...

arnav:han ...

arnav left...

khushi's house...

khushi:bacha please chalo na...

sana:no no no...

khushi:bacha dekho ap jaldi se thek hona hai na...

sana noded"yes"

khushi:to phir chalo doctor ke pass...

sana:mama agar mera opreation nahi hua to me mar jaoon gi...

khushi:sana nahi esa nahi bolte ...apke sath apki mama apke dad or DM sath me hai na to ap ko kuch nahi hoga...

sana:per mere papa to mere sath nahi na...

khushi:sana challein hume late hora hai...

sana:hmm ok...

khushi left the hospital...

arnav reached khushi's house...

arnav:happy!

happy:arnav ji ap yahn?

arnav:hmm khushi kahan hai?

happy:khu..khushi...ap jante hen wo ..wo yahan nahi rehtii...

arnav:happy please...muje khushi se milna hai please batao khushi kahan hai me tumare age hath jorta hoon...

happy:nai nai arnav jii...apko ye shobha nahi deta..me bat ta hoon...wo hospital gayii hai sana baby ko leke..uska opoiment tha...doctor ke sath..

arnav:hospital??? opoiment???muje kuch samj nai ara...??

happy:han arnav jii sana beemar hai...

arnav:beemar?? kya hua hai use?

happy:wo...

arnav:bolo happy...

happy:sana ke heart me hole hai...

arnav shocked...

arnav:whattt??

happy:han arnav jii..khushi yahan sana ko dekhane ati hai har jaga se sana ko jawad de diya hai ke uske bach ne ke chances bohat kam...hen but yahan ayi to pata chala abhi bhi waqt hai agr us ka opreation hogaya to wo bohat jald theek hojae gi...

arnav's eyes was teary...

arnav:kis hos..hospital me???

happy:city hospital...

arnav:thank you...

arnav leave for hospital...

in hospital...

arnav:yahan sana gupta ka opoiment hai doctor naina ke sath...

resp:ahh yeah but sana gupta ka nai sana singh raizada ka hai...

arnavhimself:iska matlab aj bhi khushi muje nahi bhooli wo ab bhi muj se pyaar karti hai...

arnav:ok thankx..

resp:but ap kon?

arnav:me khushi ka husband...

resp:oh MR.raizada..khushi sana ko leke ja chuki hai hai bas abhi nikli hai...

arnav:oh shit...

arnav bhahir ata hai but khushi car me nikal jati hai...

arnav:dammm...

arnav khushi ka peecha karta hai...

jahan khushi anathaahram me jati hai...

arnav ander jata hai...jahan khushi or sana bacho me choclates baant rahi hote hen...

arnav:khushiii...

khushi peeche murti hai...

khushi:arnav...

sana:hello mr.raizada...

khushi:bacha ap inko jante ho?

sana:yes mama ye gift inho ne hi muje diya tha...

khushi:oh ya...ap jao car me betho me ati hoon..

sana:ok...

khushi:ab or kya chaiye apko mr.raizada?

arnav:khushi...meri bat...

khushi:no arnav bass bohat ho gayaaa...mene bohat sun li tumari or ab nai sunoon gi..

arnav:thek hai mat suno tumare sath mene jo kiya uski saza muje manzoor hai...

khushi:huh! saza..ye saza bhi tumne khud chuni hai...

arnav:khushi me sab janta hoon!

khushi:kya jante ho?

arnav:yahi ke sana is our daughter...

khushi:no tum kuch nai jante sana mine and samrat's daughter...samje ap...

arnav:khushi jab jhoot bolna na ata ho to bola bhi mat karo...

khushi:me..me jhoot nai bol ri samje ap...

arnav:phir meri ankho me dekh kar kaho ke sana tumari or samrat ki beti hai...

khushi did not seen in arnav's eyes...

khushi:mene kaha naaa sana meri beti hai or samrat ki basss...

arnav yelling...

arnav:agar sana tumari or samrat ki beti hai to hospital me tumne sana arnav singh raizada kyun likh waya hai bolo khushi...

khushi blank...

arnav:kya hua ab khushi bolo????

khushi:han sana apki hai beti lekin pala sirf use mene hai wo sirf meri beti hai us ko muj se koi nai cheen sakta koi nai matlb koi nai ap bhi nahi MR.arnav singh raizada...samjee ap/...

arnav:wo meri bhi beti hai...

khushi:kesi beti han kahan se ayii...kab khayal aya ke wo apki beti hai..pechle 1...1 ...month...year ...week..day ..me me yai aas lagaye bethi thi ek din ap ao ge muje apnao ge lekin nai...me galat thi...lekin aj me kamzorr nai me apni beti nahi lejane doon gi...

arnav:khushi me manta hoon muj se galti hui hai lekin uske saza me aj tak bhookat raha hoon...

khushi:zandagi bhar bhookto ge...

khushi left...

arnav fell down and crying...(BGM--Sun raha hai na tu ro raha hoon me)...

and this side khushi sitting on bed and crying..(BGM--sun raha hai na tu ro rahi hoon me)

sana came in khushi's room...

sana:mama why are u crying???

khushi:kuch nai bacha...

sana:papa ki yad ari hai...??

khushi:han

sana:to ap papa se baat kar lo na...

khushi:bacha papa abhi so re honge hum kal bat karen ge thek hai...

sana:ok good night...

khushi:good night...kiss on sana's forhead...

next day...

in RM...

in arnav room...

anjali:chotte kya hua???ap ro kyun rahe ho?

arnav:di khushi won't come di...

anjali:kyaa per kyun chotte???

arnav:pata nahi di...

arnav crying...

here is part end...

guyxx please leave ur long comment plzzz and hit the like button...Ans sorry guyxx cuz its short part...cuz its gonna end thats why em updating short ...

Love

T!@

Edited by Marinajan - 12 years ago

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tia

@Marinajan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#292

Do long comment pleaseee!!!!😭😭😭

resss karne ke baad i want long comment..😡😡

Edited by Marinajan - 12 years ago

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Barun_Addict

@Barun_Addict

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Posted: 12 years ago

#293

Editing

OMG

Hole in heart

Poor Sana

Hope she'll b alright

N ye City hospital har jagah aa jaata hai

Ok,,

Ab jo main bolne jaa rhi hun..

Usk liye mujhpe kayi log joote n chapaal fekenge

But I'll take the risk

I don't think that Khushi should forgive him so easily

He has to repent a lot...

What he did was not at all acceptable..

N it doesn't mean that he will throw her out of his life

n bring her back whenever he wants...

*Ducks my head*

Throw whatever u want 😆

Lol 😆

Nice update Tia

Waiting fr the last part 😳

N yeah this was a long comment na !! 😆

Edited by Barun_Addict - 12 years ago

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 12 years ago

#294

well took him long enough didnt it

now he realises his mistake

after wasting so much time

and when he couldloose his daughter

though here is hoping he wont

well of course she cant just forgive him that easily either

kaam hi aisa kiya tha unhone

well here is hoping sana shall be fine

so she did give his name to her

as in his surname

well she had to didnt she

so what now

shame this is ending though

cheers for pm

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tia

@Marinajan

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#295

Originally posted by: chavvi16
well took him long enough didnt it
now he realises his mistake
after wasting so much time
and when he couldloose his daughter
though here is hoping he wont
well of course she cant just forgive him that easily either
kaam hi aisa kiya tha unhone
well here is hoping sana shall be fine
so she did give his name to her
as in his surname
well she had to didnt she
so what now
shame this is ending though
cheers for pm

thanks 😃

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MOHIT

@MT_loverboy

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#296

oh !!!

I dont feel like she will forgive her soon

such workk cant be forgiven ...

u ending it 😭

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tia

@Marinajan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: MT_loverboy
oh !!!
I dont feel like she will forgive her soon

such workk cant be forgiven ...

u ending it 😭

..hehehe thnkxx

yup em ending will start an other one..lol😃

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Shifa Khan

@chulbuli94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#298

Arnav has realised all his faults rather sins~~

Now,he can't live without Khushi and their daughter~~

It's not that easy on Khushi's part~~

But an angelis always an angel~~

She'll forgive him !!!

Nice story !!!

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tia

@Marinajan

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#299

Originally posted by: dolly477
awesome update👏👏👏

thnku

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tia

@Marinajan

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: chulbuli94
Arnav has realised all his faults rather sins~~

Now,he can't live without Khushi and their daughter~~

It's not that easy on Khushi's part~~

But an angelis always an angel~~

She'll forgive him !!!

Nice story !!!

thank u dear..

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