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Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Since I have just discovered you, wondering if you both individually have written before?

Reason I ask is that I am so impressed that if you have written other Arhi stories, I want to go find them and read.

Also...when are you going to update next?

Please let me know😊

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@MILLI_K

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

awesome update quite mysterious update soon eagerly waiting to read it thanks for pm

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

wow! loved it!
pls update soon..eagerly w8ing 😉

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Anamika100

@Anamika100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Read this again and focused on her POV during her wedding...was she in for a shock...expecting him to be hers alone...

"She stared at her mehendi clad feet as she tried very hard to avoid looking at her handsome to be husband beside her. She had dreamt of this day all her life. She had dreamt that she'd be wearing a beautiful red and golden lehenga and smiling blissfully as her husband performed the rituals of filling her maang with sindoor and pampering her slender neck with a mangalsutra. They defined their love, their marriage. They told the world that she was his and he was her's alone. She couldn't wait to be his in every way she could imagine. "

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He was so fortunate that his wife tolerated every crap he threw her way and chose to shut her eyes, her ears and her mouth as he involved himself with women after women.

Edited by Anamika100 - 12 years ago

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Anumeha Khanna

@anumeha_PM

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

interesting ff..

cont. soon..

n do pm me when update...

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shubhi15

@shubhi15

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Superb start...
Very well written...
Can't wait to read more...
Continue soon...

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Shaintini

@Shaintini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Nice update.loved it.update next one soon.

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richa1792

@richa1792

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Boy, oh boy.!!

I am so glad that I stumbled upon this.!!

This has all the ingredients to be an amazing story.

An almost evil Arnav :- Check

Lots of Angst :- Check

Redemption (hopefully in future track) :- check.

I can't wait to read more.

seriously, i am of half the mind, to make a vodoo doll out of you guys and compulse it to keep on writing more updates.

Creepy, I know.!!

Arnav in bed with Sheetal, while his baby was dying was an abomination.

But looking at the way he behaves, I don't think he would care much.

And even if he would, I am sure he would love to put the entire blame on Khushi.

I don't understand why is Khushi with him, if she knows about his infidelity?

due to her family?

What ever it is, I think she should leave him. He is the worst excuse for a husband.

Oh, and absolution for his sins is going to come at a great price.

He is doing whatever he wants, having affairs, not caring about Khushi, living his life as if he was a bachelor.

But the question here is, At what cost?

Richa.

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Superb start...Khushi is pregnant and Arnav is clueless...can't wait for more...please update soon...thanks for the PM

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

That was a start!

You got the reader's attention with the first part itself.

I was wondering who was the patient.

Then came the dhmaka with Sheetal.

In the end you tell us that Khushi was pregnant.

So they did have a physical relationship too!

What is Khushi here? How can someone be so weak?

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