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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#721

Originally posted by: 1993.ssg
Great update
past ARIYA scene is cute
and present ARIYA scene is emotional
teasers are very interesting
pls continue soon
egarly waiting for the updates

for me both are good

Thank u dr for tje sweet comments...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#722

Originally posted by: sanalala1990
Hey nice updates yaar tum bhool q gayi muje mera naam pm list mai nai and u know kitna wait karti hu tumhari updates ks

Thanks sana yr how could i forget u...
per tum hi kahin gayab ho gaye...
lagta haii kuch jayada tim tak faint hous 🤣🤣[= gaye

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: riyaarjun
i am somuch happy ki ap ne apny post direct forum pe ki or mene ye mo. se pdhy es lye der se comment kar rahihu so BADA VALA SORRY n kabhy kabhy lat hojae to advence sorry because me study ke lye jarahy hoo so ... u understand again thanksss

Thanks for the comments dr but lets see now how much less response...

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#724

Originally posted by: marnali04

i'm going with the second one..

Thanks dr

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#725

PART=31
"Tere baaten...akser hum kerten hain..."

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SCENCE-
Uff kahan rakh di..
kaye dino se dhoond raha hoon ,per mil he nahi rahi..
.
Arjun searches somthing in his almira...
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ON THE OTHER-
In riya's room...
She also searches somthing or seems like lost in her work..
.
She makes her face expresstion..
Somthime serious..somtime happy..or somtime funny..
.
uff etani sari pic dekh li per ek bhi pic main,enaki smile kerti huye photo nahi hai..
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she pouted her mouth..

dekho baby..(Put her hand on her belly)
Dekho apne papa ko..
ek dam filmi hero lag rahe hain..Aahyeee kitane hote.!!!!.. or ek dam rawte style...
She leaned closed n kissed arjun's pic..
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but sudenly looked here n there for the confermation..is anybody looking her or not ...
n again kissed pic...
Ese to main front walli wall per lagaongi,
taki hamara baby bhi bilkul enki tarah ho...

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omggg kitane searius Or intelligent lag rahe haii..
humm to chess bhi ata hai aapko..
not bad..Akhir sir kiske hain..
pulling her shirt collor,

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ohh ho sorry baby apke bhi baba hai..ab khush...

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again gun..Hum per kisko marne ka erada hai...
she start giggling...
dekho baby apne baba ko dhayan se dekh lo..

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kya kaha baby ...akadu or khadus...
she put lappy aside n start giggling..
naughty baby baba ke bare main ehsa nahi kehate.
(stil loughing)baba ne sun liya to kya sonchenge

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#726

Ha haaa hee ..hee...
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she press next button for another pic----
She lost in that pic..
no he was not loughing but still he looking handsome...
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She leaned her face again closer ...
She looking him without blinking her eyes...
n I wish aap hamesha mere samne rahen..
pata nahi..
ye kon se feeling hai..per dill kerta hai aap hamesha mere samne ho..
mere pass..
ek ajeeb se kami mehsoos hoti hai..
.
She silent for few minute...
(n remembers her all meeting with arjun...)
.
kaphi soncha nahi tha ...riya mukharegee kabhi..mrs riya arjun rawte ke naam se jaani jayegi..
.
(remember the day of their wedding)
Kabhi sonch nahi tha..ur baby is growing n living inside my body..
She closed her eyes n feel her baby..
A wider smiled crept on her face..
Pyaar ka na sahi..per ye phir bhi aap ka ansh hai..
tears drops her eyes..
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(Remenber the days when arjun know that she is pregnant with his child..)

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She wiped her tears imedeatly..
uff sorry baby mama bahoot jaldy senti ho jati hai.
.
(she talk with her baby)
Kya huya...naraj ho..ya baba ko miss ker rahe ho..
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Ohh to baba ke yaad aa rahi hai..
Per main bhi aapki super mama hoon,
mare pass ek Achha idea hai..
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SCENCE SHIFT--
On the other side ---
one girl is talking on a phon...
Yaa dont warry kaam ho jayega..
maine kaha na ,samjho tumhara kaam ho gaya..
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She smiled n moved outside the pub..
humm so next target is mombai..
not bad..
etana time ho gaya..Mombai se bahar aye..
Pata nahi vo kaisi hogi,
mujhe miss kerti hogi bhi ya nahi..
per ussase milane se pehale..
mujhe aapne baki ke kaam kerne honge...
She took texi n leave there...
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SCENCE SHIFT-
IN Arjun room-
now arjun totaly fustrated.. he shut his almira door,

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#727

Just calm down arjun..
tu bhi bus ek mamoli se shirt ke liye etana tense ho raha hai...
(yes he is tense bez ...arjun ko apni shirt nahi mil rahi..)
.
But that was my lucky shirt..he matered under his breath..
.
First time maine vahi shirt pehani the..jab main usase mila tha..
.
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SCENCE SHIFT IN RIYA'S ROOM--
She get up n moved toward her almira...
humm to baby wait ker raha hai..ke mama kya kerne vali hai...
of ho..apko to pata hai..
kyunki mama her roj ehsa kerti hai..
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She smiled...N took somthing inside her almira...
(She change her nightwears)
After few minute she drifted into sleep..
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AFTER FEW HOURE IN MID NIGHT---
Someone nocking arjun's door..
Arjun just tried to sleep in his bed..
he heared the sound n switchon the light..
he imedeatly moved toward the door...
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SCENCE SHIFT:-
Present---
Arjun hugging riya..n shouted..i choise only u..
He parted that hug n still closer to her..
mari ankhon main dekho riya...
or kaho kya tumhen mujh per turst nahi hai..
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Arjun..nnn siirrr..Arjun put his finger on her lips..
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Sirr nahii riya..sirf arjun..
i know i hurt u more..
mujhe tumse vo sab nahi..
before he could say..
she put her hand on arjun's mouth..
plzzz kuch maat kahiye..

i know aapne vo sab jaan bhujh ker nahi kaha..
.

Ar-plz forgive me riya..
plz...
Ri-sirr plz do..nt say this..
its hur..ting me more..
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Ar-how could u do that riya..tum etani achhi kaise ho sakti hoo..
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Ri-She gives her litle smile..
n says sab aap se hi shikha hai sir..
aap baho..ot ach..he hain sir,
pherk sirf etana hai,
aap jatate nahi hain...
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arjun leaned more closer n
kissed her forhead..
she closed her eyes just wanna to feel him...
.
arjun wishper Will u turst me.??
she nodded her head..n
wishper in slow voice..
I trust u arjun s...ir..
.
he hold her hand tightly...

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#728

kuch nahi hoga tumhen..or na hi hamare baby ko..
sunna tumne..
tumhen khud ko majboot banana hoga..
apni wil power ko...
tumhen ladna hoga hamare liye..apne liye ..or hamare bachhe ke liye..
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She just nodded her head..
.
Ri-sir..
but arjun nodded his head in negative...
she smiled n say..Arjun..nn
.
(first time she call him by only his name..)

(Arjun also gives her his smiled)
.
Jab bhi aap mere pass hote hai..
mere sath hote hain..to mujhe kisi ka dar nahi hota..
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Main merna nahi chah..ati arjun..
main ...main jeena chahati hoon..apke saath..Hamare baby..(put her hand on her growing belly..)
ke sath..
per ager use kuch ho ...
Ar-Shhh.. kuch nahi hoga..
.
plz mere pass rahiye arjun ..
i need u..
dill main ek ajeeb se ghabrahat ho rahi hai...
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SCENCE SHIFT:-in fb
Arjun opened his door n saw she was standing outside his door..
before he can asked anythink to her..
She hug arjun n start crying..
she pulled herself more closer to him..
.
He was litle scared by her action..
riyaaa what happened sab thik to hai na..
pet main phir se dard ho raha hai...
Doctor ko bulaon..
plz kuch to batao...
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Few minute before-
Riya was sleeping in her room---
but in sleep her mind is driffted somwhere else...
.
There was one dark area..
She was running on a road..
(she was breathing heavly ,
totaly tired n her face covered with sweats...)
Two pairs or arms following her continusly..
She screaming n shouting arjun's name for the help..
.
But he was not anywhere...
she heared one voice..
Give me ur baby..i want ur baby...
Koe nahi bachha sakta ab tumhen...
The hands comes closer closer n more...
She shouted arjunnnm...!!!!
.
But her voice betraying her that time...
She breathing heavly n opened her eyes...
.
she looked here n there just wanna to recognized the place..
she found

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago

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Poonam..../Piya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#729

In her room..
She lift her face other side n saw time it was..
2:30...
She still scared n confused..it was her dream or reality..
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the light of her room r off,
it scared her more..
She runs outside n start nocking arjun's door...
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Arjun hug her lightly n continusly pathes her back..
Riyaaa kuch to bolo kya huya..
Tum kaho to hum abhi doc ke pass chalte hain..
.
plz ronna band karo riya..
its not god for u n baby's health...
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Baby's heath..she pushed arjun away..
Arjun shocked for that second..
She rub her eyes n shouted..
apko kuch khayal bhi hai ,
kitana chik rahi the main..
kab se aap ko avaj de rahi the...
vo log hamare baby ko marna chahate they..
or aap pata nahi kahan they...
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Arjun now totaly scared..
Riya kon they..or hamare gher main kaise aye..
Tum daro maat main abhi dekhata hoon..
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Arjun took his gun..
Riya tum yahi rehana room main bahar maat ana..
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Arjun look each n every corrner but he found nathing..
He comes inside his room..
Riya stil stood there...
.
Riya bahar to koe bhi nahi hai..
maine sab jagah achhe se check kiya hai..
Suddenly door bell rang...
Trinnn trinnn...
Riya fearly hug arjun ...
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TBC-
aaplb door per kon hai..????
vo bhi aadhi raat main...
AAJ KE LIYE ETANA HIII...
hop u like ...
Mast ya bore..???

Sorry for any error...

Edited by ll_piya_ll - 12 years ago