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Awesome update!!

Viren is alive!!!... now Virika will become one and Virman will come closer...

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Virat opened the door of the
House.. nd move aside..asked jevika to enter first..Jevika confused first looked at him nd thn at manvi..Manvi nodded to ask her to do the same virat is saying..She sniffed nd enter inside..looking around..her eyes glued on him...
Viren Vadhera was sitting infront of her.It was a night mare for him she clenched her fist but just then hr glance fell on his legs..his state was pathetic..
His presence was not a big deal for her...BUT sitting on a "wheel chair" was not less then a shock for her..His teary eyes were explaining each nd every misunderstanding between them..Virat looked at manvi scared nd confused too...Manvi held his hand nd entwined her fingers wd him to assure him tht she is always wd her..
Viren was shocked to see them there..How could virat do this?The thing I hadnt tell my love for last for years how he could reveal it just in a minute..Jevika who was almost paralyised..She held hr head..nd before she could react nd spoke smthing..the very next moment she had fell on the floor ..unconsious..

Viren who was staring at his son from a far in virats lap..was waiting tht virat will gv his son to him..Virat could feel desparation nd soulfull tearz in his eyes..but he wanted his brother to ask him his self..
Viren after longing for his son for last 2hours.. he atlast spoke.ofcourse which father could bare the sepration of his son from last 3 years..nd whn he came back infront of his eyes..

He had finally broken through the ice' and the water formed with his warmth, flowed freely from his eyes. Now was the time for clarifications

He took him into his lap nd kissed him whole heartedly..he didnt know weithr he had left any space on his face wdout kissing..he hugged him while kissing his son..almost crushing him into his arms..he kissed on his forehead..he aparted to looked at sunnys face..his eyes nd nose similar to jevika..bt lips nd hairs were same as him..sunny put his hand on virens lips..playing wd it..viren kissed his fingers. Tears were still flowing from his eyes..He framed his face nd hit his head wd his..touching his littel nose from his..sunny cheered..in his baby language..Viren asked him to call her papa..Viren repeated "Beta bolo Papa..PA..PA.."
He smiled repeated "PAaa. .pa"
Viren smiled wdin tears in his eyes again kissed him..he stared in wonderment when the baby cuddled herself to him and held his forefinger in his tiny chubby fist. Viren looked up in awe and his eyes met wd virat who were looking them wdout blinking..tears rolled down on virats cheek he wiped it nd sat beside hr bro wheel chair on the floor..Sunny hugged his father almost sleep...Virat kissed sunny..Viren held virats hand. "Thanx virat..Agar tum na hote to mein kbhi apne bache se nahi mil paata.."
Viren kissed sunnys fore head again..Virat hugged his brother nd nephew "I love u bhaia ..."Viren hugged him back.."Virat meri jevika..jeny ko kuch hoga to nhi naa. Mein pehle hi bht dard seh chuka hun..mein phir se usey khona nahi chahta..Agar usey kuch hogaya to mein khud ko kbhi maaf nahi kar paunga.."
Virat wiped virens tears.."Nahi bhai wo bilkul theek hojayegi..u dont worry.."
Manvi came out of ICU..
Her face was pale nd eyes were swell..
Virat stood up"Manvi kia hua..sb theek to haina."
She looked at him nd burst into tears..She kept her head on his shoulder..clunching his shirt in her fists..Viren was also looking at them questioned..
Virat wrapped his arms around her "Calm down manvi..wt happn tell me?"
He moved her chin up..looking directly into her teary eyes "Doctor ne kaha 3days ke andar operation krna hoga..warna..she completed in sobs..
Virat framed her face consoling her like she is a baby girl.."Kuch nhi hoga jevika ko..hum uska operation aaj hi krwayenge.."
Manvi shook her head"Dii nahi maan rahi virat..Wo keh rhi hein ke jb tk baba unhein maaf nhi kreinge wo operation nhi krwayengi..mein kya krun virat"
Virat nd viren looked at eachother tensed.But the very nxt moment he gave manvi strength"Hum baat kreinge unsey.."
Manvi lukd at him in disbeleif..
Manvi sadly.."Jahan tak mein unhein janti hun wo nahi manengey.."
Virat determined "unhein maanna hoga yeh unki beti ki zindagi or maut ka sawal hai..

They reached hrishikesh in few hours..
Manvi hardly took steps to her house back reminding his father's harsh words in loud voice"Manvi agar aaj tum gayi to is ghar ke darwaaze tumhare lie hamesha ke lie band hojayengey.."
She touched the door when she remember The door had been slamed closed for her by her father" when she was waiting tht her father will call her back to home nd will agreed to her childish demand...She looked at virat..Virat placed his hand on her shoulder.Manvi rang the door bell..she wiped her tears right when she heard the click of the lock, she backed away from Virat turned back to the door. Her nerves worked up again, making her palms dampen slightly.
"Kon?!" It was Karan's loud voice that reached her ears in a sense of relief that pumped into her. He went hell shock..he recognized her from hr back..Virat forcefully made hr face hr brother.."Manvi di..When his arms came around her she relaxed completely. There was the twenty year old karan, whom she could never vision from anything aside her younger brother, who used to slip into bed with her after having horrid dreams.
"karan" She said.
"Finally remembered me." He said pressing his lips to her forehead right away. "Finally." The moment he wrapped his arms around her the first tear slipped. Here was her little baby who she'd barely ever thought about in the last 7 years. Her baby was a quickly growing man now. Once she'd felt his arms around her in a fearful moment. Now, as his arms came around her, she felt he had grown to be a protective brother. Something she could never have thought of at the young age of eighteen.
When he pulled away and smiled at her she saw how much he looked like her father now.
Karan:"Aap kaisi ho?Aap..i cant beleive..She aparted nd turned to go back.."Di plz listen to me..whr ru going?"
Manvi burst into tears "Nahi karan mein baba ko face nahi kr skti..i cant.."
Karan while crying"Nahi di kuch nahi hoga..plz aise mat jao.."
Manvi"Nahi karan meine tumhei to rula dia lekin mein maa ko phir se nahi rula skti..mujhe janey do"
Karan"Nahi di plz..mein tumhein phir se jane nhi dunga.."
Virat held hr hand"Tum yaha apne lie nahi jevika ke lie aai ho manvi..plz"
Karan was confused tum Virat vadhera ke sath..?
Manvi"He is my boss.."
"karan You'll handle everything?" she asked him tipping her head back.
"Of course I will. Mom's waiting for you for years." He looked at virat to invite them inside when Kripa took his brother arm in his hand..
"And, Dad?" She asked carefully. "What about him? Is he ever waited for me?"
"I dont know." He told her softly. "Come on." Hooking his arm in hers, an old habit, he took her inside, with virat following them.
He lead them both through the hallway, the hall way that was one so familiar. She could hear her own laughter as a young girl, running after her brothers and sister. Them running behind her once in a while. She remembered, as she walked into the living room, how quite the place used to get suddenly, when the door bell used to ring at night when her father used to return. And, as they turned into the dining room she tightened her hold on her brothr hand remembered the argument she'd had with her father here before she'd left home.
Seven years, she thought trembling again. 7 years and the argument was still so vivid in her mind. She could hear herself and her father yelling. She could still sense her youngest sibling, karan hiding behind her mothers legs, watching the scene. She could still feel the last time she had hugged her mother, a slight bitterness in her heart, that had only grew because she'd let it purposely. But the moment she saw her mothers back. She smiled,She opened her mouth to call him, not her mother, but her throat, it dried up. She looked at virat then, and she saw the confidence she lacked herself, in his eyes. She saw the buoyancy in his eyes that made her smile and trust herself. She turned back to her mother. She cleared her throat loudly and watched her mother gaze shifted nd then settled on her face.The spoon she had in her hand fell down..Her mom was overwhelmed..She scanned her daughter through teary eyes again nd again..
She smiled at her But to her mother, to whom she had been so wrong to, and her father, who she knew would forgive her, she had to take the first steps. She knew she had to because, she'd taken the first steps away from them.
"Mama." She said walking to her. "Mom." She said, her eyes filling now. Her feet didn't feel as heavy anymore. And standing in front of her mother, she took only a second the close the distance by embracing her. "I'm sorry." She said crying to her. "I'm so very sorry. I was rude to you every time you called and I was selfish the entire time. I was mean when I left home." Her mother's body was rigid against Manvi's. Her arms still hadn't come around her. Manvi still hadn't found the comfort in her mothers arms that she was longing for. "You're angry with me." She mumbled and began to draw away.
Then, her arms came around daughter. "I'm not angry at you. I never was. And, I'm glad to see you home."
"Oh Mom!" She clung to her and kissed her cheek. "I love you!"
"i love u too mama." She lowered his voice then. "Isn't that Virat Vadhera?"
"Hmmm? Oh." She turned away and smiled at Virat. "Yes he is."
"Ah." Virat couldn't figure out what he wanted to say.
Virat bow down to seek her aashirvaad..manvi cleared he is my boss.
"Jeetey raho beta.."
Manvi continud"He helped me nd provide me job when nobody was wd me nd i was alone"
Manvi's mom "You're father will be down in a few minutes manvi."
"Mom." She took her arm watching her stern behaviour
She shook her head. And, she didn't realize her father had been in the room. She knew that Karan was watching her again. "I am sorry for doing what I did. But..
"It was your fault we weren't with you manvi." Her father's voice was just the way she'd last head it. Strong, proud. Angry.
"baba." She turned wd heavy heart..tears again started rolling down from her eyes..she took heavy steps to hr father, but before she could throw her arms around him, he held his hand up.
"Your mother might have forgiven you, as might have your brother, but I won't."
"baba. Please."
"No, manvi. I told you 7 years ago, if you stepped out of this house then you were never welcome back. I meant it."
But even then, she slipped her arms around his waist and held him. He wasn't bulky like most men his age. "I know you meant it, baba." She knew he didn't hate her because he'd felt his hand on her head, even if it was for a second, and light, before he'd taken it away from her. "I'm sorry for everything I did, but I wouldn't have respected so many things I do now." baba plz mujhe itni bari saza mat dein..Mujhse naraz mat rahein... "I want you to forgive me, baba. I want you to talk to me...The hall way after long silence echoed by her cry..Her aweful words..her pain..her sobs..tht also made her fathers eyes moist..but he controlled his tears she was down beside his foot.. What ever she had been someday beside hr baba's heart.
She completed within sobs..But if you don't want to do either," she paused for a moment, "I will leave here happily because I know you're happier being stubborn and not accepting me.U accept it or not..i'm ur daughter baba. I always loved you, baba. And,." She saw it then, anger, sadness, forgiveness, happiness, irritation, and so many other emotions sweep his eyes. "I'm leaving tonight. I want to leave with your blessings. Tell me, baba,""Baba i need u..Jevika dii need u baba..wo zindagi or maut se lar rhi hein..dhe is in ICU wo aapse ek baar maafi maangna chahti hein baba..jb tk aap maaf nhi kareinge wo operation nhi krwayengi ..Humein apne kie ki waqt ne bohat bari saza de di hai baba.plz ..plz baba ab aap humein maaf kr dijiye na..
He took his hand back,karan couldnot resist any more nd "Baba" escaped from his mouth..
Manvi's father replied sternly "Meine tumhein ya tumhari mom ko to nahi roka..Yeh tumhari behan..jevika beti hai tumhari..she looked at his wife..tum mein se jo jana chahe ja sakta hai..lekin mujhse in dono ka rishta tbhi khatam hogaya tha jab yeh yaha se gae thi.." and left her sitting there in the floor.

Last tear fell from her eyes when she heard the door slam shut seconds later. It wasn't hard, nor did she feel ashamed, to let the tears pour once karan scooped her into his arms.Her mom reached nd hugged her..karan determined hum abhi jana chahie jevika di ke pass..she need us..Saying this within minutes they both gt ready to leave..Manvi was still hurt..unable to control her tears tht were droping on virats heart like acid..
When they were about to leave..Virat turned back nd saw manvis father standing there he passed a sarcastic smile n said
"Wow Mr.chaudhry very nice..Aapko kya lagta hai ke agar aap chhupayenge to nazar nhi aayega wo dard jo aapki aankho mein hai..Aapne apni wife or bete ko sirf islie allow kia takey aap jevika ko unki aankho se dekh sakein.."
Manvi's father cut in between "What rubbish?Get out from here.."
But virat continued"Bahadur or strong wo nhi hota jiske lie uski ego se barh kar kuch or na ho ..balke wo hota hai jo apne rishto ke lie apni ego ko kurbaan kar dey.."
"I said shut up!"
Virat again shower his words on him"Aap jantey hein ke apki betian kbhi ghalat nhi thi .. Jb bhagwan baap bnata hai to kuch zimmedari bhi deta hai..apne bacho ki choti choti khwahisho ko pura krne ki zimmedari..na ke zabardasti un par apne faisle thop die jayen..Manvi jis ne apka maan tora hai wo apka fakhar apka ghuroor thi Mr.Chaudhry..Scholarship paane ke baad ye uska right tha wo agey parhe..sirf aapka naam roshan krne ke lie..usne ghar chhora kiunke aapne usey majboor kr dia..aap ne sirf ye socha ke agr aap usey college bhej deinge to apne khaandan walo ko kya jawab deinge. Sirf is choti soch ki waje se aapne itna bara faisla kia or manvi ki zindagi barbaad kr di..kbhi nhi socha ke usey apki zrurat hai..wo kuch banna chahti thi aapke lie. .Aapka sahara banne ke lie"He yelled..bt this time silence in return..
"Jevika jo aaj zindagi or maut se lar rhi hai..usney apko baap bnaya. Pehli baar baba bola..Or aapne kya kia?uski shadi ek aise larke se tay krdi jo us se umar mein bhi chhota tha.Kabhi aapne puchha wo kya chahti hai? Apne sirf ye socha ke manvi ke janey ke baad jevika aapki izzat bachaye..or manvi ke bdle wo us se shadi kr le vrna aap un logo ko kya mun dikhayengey.Har beti apna sapna apne parents ki aankho se dekhti hai or jb parents aankhein band kr ke faisla krne lagein to wo ghar chhorne par majboor hojati hein..Lekin Aafreen hai..hairat hai..ke wo aaj bhi apni zindagi or maut ka faisla ek aapki maafi se krna chahti..agar aap usey maaf nhi kareinge to wo to jeena bhi nahi chahti..operation b nahi krwana chahti..mar jaana chahti hai.Lekin us din bhi aai thi..or aaj bhi sirf aapki ego aapki self respect aapki mohabbat ke agey aa rhi hai..
Aulad bhi kismat se milti hai uncle..Har parent ki kismat mein apne khoon ka apne bacho ka pyaar nhi hota..mujhe umeed hai aap socheingy..
Saying this he turned nd left for outside..where karan,Manvi nd her mom was waiting for him.They left for ooti to reach at soon as possible..

Viren was watching his son,He was sleeping peacefully in his lap..Scanning his every moment from last few hours..he smiled watched him smile, while sleeping..He again kissed his forehead..
The nurse came out of jevika's room.."Xcuse me,Patient ko hosh aagaya hai.If u wanna meet her so u can go inside."
Viren was dying to meet his jenny but hadnot courage ..how he'll face her..
He thought several times..but again nd again refused his own self.
Just then sunny works as an angel for him..Sunny woke up nd started crying..May be he was hungry..He patted on him bt no.. wt could u accept from 1 yr old baby..?
He moved his automatic wheel chair to jevika's room..
Listening her baby cry..she opened hr eyes nd moved up to take him in her lap..
Viren hesitate"Wo meine bohat chup karaya..bt i think he is hungry..! tum rest kro bs mujhe iska feeder dey do..i'll handle him.."
Jevika took him from his hold..Nd hurriedly unbuttoned her shirt's uper button nd started feed her baby. The baby immediately calmed down by his mothers touch and her soothing voice.
Jevika looked at him.he was looking somewhere embarrassed.
Jevika simply askd him "Mujhe ye sb kuch btaya kiun nhi tha.."
Viren smiled wdout looking at her "Yeh sab kuch nhi bataya tha phir bhi tum wapis nhi gayin..meri yaadon ko khtam krne ke bjaye ek wajood dia or aaj bhi seeney se lagaye bethi ho..agar sach bta deta to tum kbhi wapis na jati,or kismat ne mujhe is kaabil nhi chhora tha ke tum mujhe apnao.."
Jevika angrily "Yeh mera faisla tha viren ke mein kya krti..tumhein mujh pe bharosa nhi tha.."
Viren"Jevika mein sirf tumhein khush dekhna chahta tha..meri mohabbat khud gharz nhi thi.."
Jevika started weeping..Viren moved further to her bed "Plz jeny i dnt want even more tears in ur eyes ..stop it.."
Sunny went to sleep soon again.
She made him layied aside on hr bed nd looked at viren sitting there.."Viren it was all my mistake i should come to u..meine kaise maan lia ke tum mere sath aise.."
She held his hand..She framed his face wiped his tears by hr thumbs..nd kissed his forehead..
Viren jerked hr hand away..
"No jevika i still dont deserve u.."
Jevika held hr again.."plz viren aisa mat kaho..tum jo ho jaise ho mere ho..i love u .." he looked into her eyes nd found the same love as before..Tumne aisa socha bhi kaise ke mein tumhein nahi apnaungi ya tum mere layak nhi ho..Viren tumara pyaar tumhara sath meri zindagi hai.. mujhe ab ye disease hogae hai to kya tum mujhe chhor do gey"
Viren instantly replied "Nahi jevika mein tumhein kuch nhi hone dunga.."
Jevika closed her eyes..let the tear comes out "to phir aisa kaise socha viren..i love u..i love u viren..tum meri taaqat ho ur my strength,my love my life..Viren kissed jevika's cheeks nd thn he pressed his lips on her..sucking them for a minute the aparted for breath...Hitting her nose wd his he confess while crying "I love u jevika..i love u..he kissed his angel's head then..i cant tell u in 3 saalon ka ek ek lamha meine kaise tarap tarap ke guzara hai"Thanx for gvng me such precious gift.."
Tum rest kro..i'll handle him.." jevika smiled "Achha?yeh to pta nhi tht iska feeder 2years tak sirf mein hun..nd ur saying u'll handle him?"
Viren playfully "Wo to mein bs aise hi keh raha tha..'
He kept his hand on his son again. . .His heart was not filling to love his child.." She kept her hand on his..he looked at him nd entwined their fingers..not to let eachother again far from them..They promised..

Happy BIRTHDAY kARAN Tacker..Many many happy returns of the day!!
This update is dedicated to u...
nd virmanians wait for the next update For virman romance..Till than take care..nd enjoy yesterday's sizzling Episode.. dont forget to hit the like button


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