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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
First of all welcome back Ani , i missed u !🤗


Awesome concept Ani :D
i am intrigued , cant wait for the update ...
thanks for the PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
Hey its really amzing concept.👏
plz do continue.
and PM me also soon.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow.. nyce concept dear 😃

& welcum back..🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
#24
Amazing concept!!
U should definitely continue that 2 pretty soon!!
😊 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
hey welcum back do continue plj plj pljjj and ur ffs also pljjj
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
first of all welcome back!!
very interesting ss..would love to read more!
hope you continue your other ffs also...
thanks for the pm!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#27

Thank you

Originally posted by: sanjana_D3

Please do continue , it sounds amazing !

And PM me when u do 😊


Thank you dear. I am glad u liked the concept.

Originally posted by: zb456789

Yes please do continue n try to update soon
Lovely concept


Thank you. I am glad u liked the concept.

Originally posted by: nature2

kyu nhi karegi jarar kargi 😆😆 kana hi hoga nhi kargi toh hum hai n😆😆n Welcome bak🤗we all miss uthis is for u Ani


😆 ha pata hai tum log ho... 😛 n thank you so much for this yummy ice cream 🤗 I missed u all too.

Originally posted by: -shenz-

of course u should.. n that too pretty much sooner 😛


Thank you so much dear. N I hope updated pretty sooner 😉

Originally posted by: sweetsimi123

Wow...amazing concept Ani...eager to read...continue soon 😃 ❤️


I am glad u liked the concept Simi..Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: love_taarey

dear plz continue it yr

n if possible pm me😊


Thank you. N I will surely pm you. 😊

Originally posted by: Twinkle_d3

Omg omg
u r bck u r bck,
i cnt how much happy i am ur work is always a treat to read..
Thnx for coming bck..
Pls continue soon..


😆 yes I am back. Thanks for ur kind words dear. N plz don't say thanks to me for coming back. 😳

Originally posted by: vrushanharshi

plz do continue the concept sounds amazing to me


Thank you so much dear. I am glad u liked the concept.

Originally posted by: deep_Tanha

Hey My cutie Pie

🤗🤗🤗


I missed u so so so much,...thank god u r back...m so happy






Lovelyyy concept ..continue soon and if possible the other 2 FFs..

DHT is one of my favorite FFs😳

Luv
Ur DI


Hey Di 🤗 Thank you so much for ur lovely comment. N I can't tell u how much I missed u 😒. Finally I am talking with you. Hoof. About the other two FF's...I will try my best. N DHT is my fav too among all these three 😛

Originally posted by: sweet16cash

Hey ani hope u dun mind me calling dat to you.. Amazing concept plzz continue and do pm me wen u update it realli liked it..:)


Yes surely u can call me Ani or whatever u feel like. 😊 I am glad u liked the concept. Thank you for the comment.

Originally posted by: sakshibshah

thanxxx fr coming backkk...

Continue soon...
Sakshi...!!


Hey dear plz don't say thanks for that 😳 n thank you for commenting.

Originally posted by: SwaRon_rocks

Amazing concept..plz continue soon

plz pm me when u update this or continue or other works(both of them r a treat to read)..have buddied u..


Hey dear I am glad u liked the concept and about the other two works I will surely try my best to continue them. N thanks for ur kind words.

Originally posted by: bhanumathitanha

Amazing one please continue . Thanx for pm


I am glad u liked the concept. Thank you so much for the sweet comment.

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

welcome back ani

do continue soon


Thank you so much aruba 😃

Originally posted by: TANHA_H

Welcome party toh banti hai th banan pdhga ab toh


😆 sure sure. Thank you for commenting dear.

Originally posted by: abhilasha_dream

Of course u shud continue...


Thank you.

Originally posted by: tanhawalaswaron

CONTINUEEE.



YOU HAVE GOT TO WRITE THIS!
andd the others too! :P


Sure! I promised that I will complete this, that means I will surely complete this. N about others I will try my best to continue.

Originally posted by: spongy

nice intro

please do pm me
i would like to read it


Thank you. I am glad u liked the concept. N I will surely pm u.

Originally posted by: Tanuka_TanHa

First of all welcome back Ani , i missed u !🤗


Awesome concept Ani :D
i am intrigued , cant wait for the update ...
thanks for the PM.


Hey Tanuka 🤗 I missed u too 😒 I am glad u liked the update. Take care dear. 😃

Originally posted by: Rupali_13

Hey its really amzing concept.👏

plz do continue.
and PM me also soon.😊


I am glad u liked the concept. Thank you so much.

Originally posted by: yogini64

wow.. nyce concept dear 😃

& welcum back..🤗


Hey Yogini..Thank you so much. I am glad u liked it.

Originally posted by: fun4ever

Amazing concept!!
U should definitely continue that 2 pretty soon!!
😊 😊


😆 Yup I am continuing pretty soon 😛 N thanks for the sweet comment.

Originally posted by: sadafarsha

hey welcum back do continue plj plj pljjj and ur ffs also pljjj


Thank you. N dear I will surely try to continue them. But I will need time. Plz don't say plz...

Originally posted by: princessaaliya

first of all welcome back!!

very interesting ss..would love to read more!
hope you continue your other ffs also...
thanks for the pm!!


Thank you. I am glad u liked the concept. I will surely try my best to continue them.





Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chapter 1

It's was a Sunday afternoon and a beautiful angel was lying on her bed reading a romantic novel. She has a sweet smile plastered on her face, though she didn't know after some moment this smile of hers is going to vanish.

She was feeling sleepy that's why she thought of having a nap for some time. When she closed her she felt someone threw a cloth on her. She took the cloth in her hand and opened her eyes and saw that the cloth is actually a shirt.

She looked towards the direction from where the shirt came and was startled to see the sight in front her eyes. She saw a tall boy, shirtless standing in front of her who was unzipping his jeans. She couldn't see his face as he was facing his back towards her.

She didn't know what to do. She started to shout at the top of her voice. The boy turned around and he was also shocked to see a girl shouting at the top of her voice looking at him. He rushed towards her and covered her mouth with his hands.

"Stop shouting..you..you siren."

Her eyes grew wider and she looked at the unzipped jeans which was hanging down and his shirtless body and gulped. He followed her gaze and smirked.

"What? Like something you see? I know what effect I have on girls!"

The girl glared at him and struggled to remove his hand from her month. But he held her one hand tightly with his free hand and let her struggle with the other hand. But she couldn't remove his hand from her mouth as he was too strong for her.

"Awww poor baby couldn't remove my hand from her mouth. Its okay babes try harder" and chuckled.

She again tried to remove his hand but couldn't, so she stopped trying. She pleaded with him with her eyes.

He smirked "oh so you gave up so easily?" She glared at him. "Fine I can leave you but don't you dare shout again. If you shout" he leaned forward and stopped when they were just inches apart. "It won't be good for you."

She felt that shivers were running down her body and her heart was pounding. He tucked a bang of her hair behind her ears and then left her smirking. She couldn't react. She was too shocked as well as scared to react. He zipped his jeans and saw her looking at him with wide eyes and mouth. He chuckled.

"Hey miss siren, can I get my shirt back?"

No reply.

"Hello?"

He held her by her shoulder and jerked her. She came back to her senses. She threw his shirt at his face.

"WHO THE HELL ARE YOU AND WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN MY ROOM?"

While wearing the shirt "Ahh I told you not to shout. Why you shouting?"

She crossed her arms across her chest. "What am I supposed to do then?"

He said casually "Leave my room!"

"Excuse me.. this is not your room. This is mine."

"No you are mistaken miss siren. This is my room and I want it back, and you know what.." he leaned forward "I always get what I want."

She gulped. She didn't know why she was getting affected by him. In her life she never got scared of any boy. Then why she is getting scared of him?

"Li..listen.."

To her relief Mrs shekhawat came in the room "Sharon why were you shouting?"

Sharon signed in relief and ran towards Mrs. Meenakshi Shekhawat.

"Aunty I don't know from where this beast came."

Swayam chucked looking at her. His mother was surprised to see her son in their home.

"Swayam you didn't tell us that you are coming today."

"Mom I wanted to give you and dad a surprise but she messed everything by shouting."

Sharon was about to say something. But Mrs. Shekhawat said first..

"Swayam its okay. She is Sharon, Gautam Uncle and Smitha Aunty's daughter and Sharon this is my son Swayam."

Sharon glared at him and Swayam smiled at her wickedly.

"Mom I do remember some years ago you said she will come and stay with us but what is she doing in my room?"

"Swayam she stays in this room. Whats the big deal son? You can stay upstairs."

Sharon's heart started to pound again. She remembered his words that what he wants he gets it. She looked at Swayam and he smiled mischievously.

"Okay mom then I will go upstairs but the problem is I had a small accident today and I can't walk properly."

"What? But how? Are you fine?"

Sharon was shocked. She was confused whether he was telling the truth or doing a drama.

"Yeah mom I am fine. Don't worry I will walk till that room in upstairs."

Then he started to walk and fell down cause of pain. Both Meenakshi and Sharon rushed to help him. Pain was clearly written on his face. Sharon thought that no she was wrong. He is actually suffering from pain. Both of them supported him and took him to the bed.

"Swayam you stay here, she will stay in the other room"

"No mom let me go. She will have problem there."

"No no Swayam, you please stay here. I don't have any problem staying upstairs."

He asked gently. "Are you sure Sharon?"

"Yes yes absolutely."

He smiled. "That's so sweet of you Sharon, thank you."

She also returned the smiled. "Its okay."

Meenakshi told Sharon.. "let's go Sharon. Let him rest. Kaka will send all your stuffs in the evening."

"Okay Aunty."

They were going out of the room when Sharon turned back to look at him and she was shocked as he was dancing looking at her. Her mouth fell on the ground.

"What happened Sharon? Why did you stop?"

"Aunty.."

She looked at Meenakshi and then pointed towards Swayam and to her disbelief he was sleeping peacefully.

"What? He is sleeping so lets go."

"yes" [in her mind] "arrgghh he fooled us. God is he for real? How am I going to stay with him under the same room?"


I have no idea howz it. U all can only tell me. So do tell me whether u r liking it or not. Do hit the like button and leave ur precious comments.

-Anindita.


NEXT

Edited by Anindita91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey my cutie pie...🤗

Such an awesome chapter...the beginning was en-thrilling...wooo...

She looked towards the direction from where the shirt came and was startled to see the sight in front her eyes. She saw a tall boy, shirtless standing in front of her who was unzipping his jeans. She couldn't see his face as he was facing his back towards her.

She didn't know what to do. She started to shout at the top of her voice. The boy turned around and he was also shocked to see a girl shouting at the top of her voice looking at him. He rushed towards her and covered her mouth with his hands.


I was stunned for a moment...i thought may be some kidnapping or something worse will happen...u know very well how to keep the reader waiting for next part


The cute mischievous Swayam...poor sharon...under same roof..its gonna in fun...with ur writing skills..it will be just amazing...

Loved the update baby...


As i said ...so glad to see u back...missed u ..LOVE U


Luv
Ur DI
Edited by deep_Tanha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I m glad that you are back that to with a bang n bang on update
Fadoo wala lovely
Thanks for the pm

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