Jaldi aaiyye Arnavji! Thread Four - Page 18

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Posted: 12 years ago
Loved d update
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very very sweet update..
i was also having a feeling that Asya will spot the together..lol
i will also miss asya and the kids part..hope they meet again 😉😉
In Paris 😃😃 jab uske husband ko aqal aa jaegi hehe...lekin itni jaldi kaisie😕

the best part was Arnav immitating Khushi in the car..sooo sweet..

a surprise part but definitely worth reading..
Loved it..
MashaAllah
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Shukriya 😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
finally ArShi back to Delhi
more of ArShi to come yet
thanks for pm
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update
Eagerly waiting for the paris trip
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update didu.

I loved it

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Posted: 12 years ago
beautiful update
luved arshi's romantic moment im train
arnav is so caring towards his lady love ❤️

waiting 4 next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb Update dear =) =) moreover i love your precap =D
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Posted: 12 years ago
Surprise Thursday update! Not that long. I promise the 6th june one will be longer & 90% will b only ArShi!
Thanks for the likes & comments! Over to..
Translation for Part 67(B)
Khushi cursed herself as she silently lulled Arnav to sleep, in her arms.
Khushi(thinks): Its entirely my fault! Arnavji is right when he says that I'm crazy! I shouldnt say anything just like that, without thinking!
She feels extremely guilty after recalling all the hurtful things she'd said to him.
Khushi(thinks): I told him in a fit of anger that he's good for nothing,which was completely wrong on my part . And wen I compared him to a.. monkey & said that he pounces on me,I shouldnt hav said that at all!
She runs a hand through his hair.
Khushi(thinks): Arnavji may or may not say anything,but tonight I came to know that my words did hurt him. Hey Devi Maiyya! Plz forgive me! Henceforth I wont say anything like that to Arnavji!
She plants a kiss on the top of his head.
Arnav shifts a bit,wrapping his arms even more tightly around Khushi.
Khushi(thinks): I hope he's not feeling cold?
She looks towards her feet to find the blanket lying on the edge of the berth.
Khushi(thinks): Hey Devi Maiyya! How should I get hold of this blanket? Arnavji is lying in sucha way that I wont b able to move much. (worried)And what if I try to move & end up waking him up?
She gets an idea.
Khushi(thinks): I agree that my dupatta isnt all that heavy.. but.. may b Arnavji wont feel all that cold if I cover him with it..
She removes her dupatta from under the pillow & covers Arnav with it.
Few minutes later,she starts feeling cold herself.
Khushi(thinks): For one,I cant increase the temperature of this AC. Secondly I'm not able to get the blanket. I'll hav to do something or else I'll end up with a cold..
When she tries to pull the blanket towards herself with her foot,the blanket fall down on the lower berth.
Khushi(thinks): Oh-ho! Now nothing can be..
Her train of thoughts is interrupted when she hears Hamdaan's voice.
Hamdaan: Ammi.. Ammi wake up..
Asiya: What happened beta?
Hamdaan: Something fell on my foot..
Asiya: What?
Khushi(thinks): I hope Asiyaji doesnt see.. me & Arnavji like this.. God knows what she'll think if she spots lying like this?
At that moment she hears Asiya's voice.
Asiya: Its a.. blanket. Looks like Khushiji's blanket fell down. Move aside beta,lemme keep this on her berth.
Khushi(thinks): Now I'm gone!
She tightly shuts her eyes close.
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Asiya is both surprised as well as shocked to see ArShi sleeping arm-in-arm on Khushi's berth.
Asiya: Ya Allah!
Hamdaan: What happened ammi?
Asiya: a.. nothing,beta. Come on,lie down. I'll come after covering.. her with the blanket.
She stops for a moment to gaze at ArShi after covering them with the blanket.
Then she sighs & goes back to sleep.
Khushi opens her eyes & heaves a sigh of relief.
Khushi(thinks): Thanks a lot, Asiyaji! In a way I'm glad that we'll get down early in the morning,before u wake up! And thus.. I wont hav to face u!
She goes to sleep after thanking her stars.
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**The next morning at 3:45 a.m.**
Arnav is woken up by the alarm tone of his phone.
Khushi(whispers): Before it wakes up all the passengers,go to ur berth fast & switch off the alarm!
Arnav rushes down the metallic rungs and almost jumps down on the floor.
Then he grabs his mobile from his berth & turns it off.
Heaving a sigh of relief he goes back to Khushi's berth.
Khushi(whispers): Y did u climb up again? Get down & take out the luggage.
Arnav(whispers): Relax Khushi! Everything will b done on time. Its not even 4 am yet..
======ArShi r whispering throughout the rest of the conversation=======
Khushi(confused): So what is the time right now?
Arnav: Its 3:45 am..
Khushi(relieved): Then its fine!(cups his face)Did u get sleep?
Arnav(holds his hand): Yup! I did manage to sleep! Thanks!
He kisses her hands,one after the other.
Khushi: Plz forgive me! Sorry!
Arnav(puzzled): What for?
Khushi: I.. I've told u many such things which I shouldnt hav.. I'm sorry for all those!..
Arnav: Its okay,Khushi! Lets not talk about all that..
He puts an arm around her.
Arnav: Tell me something,did u sleep well? I hope.. u were comfortable?
Khushi: Yes,even I got a good sleep!
Arnav: Great!
He kisses her parting and then proceeds to kiss her eyes close.
Then he pecks her nose & tweaks it.
Arnav: Welcome back to Delhi,mrs. Raizada!
Khushi: Delhi is still far away,Mr. Raizada!
Arnav: I'm sure,by now the train must b in the outskirts of Delhi! Anyways..
He kisses her cheeks and is about to kiss her lips when Khushi stops him.
Khushi: Not here..
Arnav: Y not?
Khushi: Arnavji,we're in the train!
Arnav(inches his face closer to hers): Ya, so?
Khushi: Wh.. what.. ya.. so!? What.. if.. someone.. spots us?
Arnav(tucking her hair behind her ear): Everyone's sleeping.
Khushi: S.. still..
Arnav: No still! I want my good morning kiss!
Khushi pushes him away.
Arnav: What the..!
Khushi: Look around,Mr. Raizada. Its not morning yet!
Arnav: Whatever!
He pulls her closer & slams his mouth on hers,thus putting an end to her protests.
Khushi clutches his shirt tightly in her fists in order to prevent herself from moaning.
She heaves a sigh of relief when he lets go of her.
Arnav waits for a few moments before speaking.
Arnav: What has.. happened to u today?
Khushi(confused): Nothing at all!
Arnav: I kissed u yet.. u didnt react the way u usually do..
Khushi(understands): Oh.. that? What do u want? The passengers who did not wake up after hearing ur alarm should wake up after hearing my moans?
Arnav: Y r u so conscious about such things,Khushi?
Khushi: Y r u not conscious even a bit,Arnavji?
Arnav: Forget it!
Khushi: Absolutely! Now get down & take out the luggage. Meanwhile I'll call amma & find out if they're up or not.
Arnav makes a face as he gets down the berth.
Arnav: U wait here.I'll take out the bag after coming from the washroom. Dont try to take out the bag on ur own. There's still some time before we get down.
Khushi: Okay. Dont worry. I'll wait here for u.
Arnav nods & leaves for the lavatory.
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Khushi smiles at Hamdaan & Razaan who were sleeping peacefully on the same berth.
She plants soft kisses on their foreheads.
Asiya: Khushiji?
Khushi is shocked upon hearing Asiya's voice.
Khushi: Y.. r u.. aw.. awake? (realizes): a.. I mean.. u.. woke up so.. early?
Asiya: Ya.. woke up some time back.Plz sit..
She moves her blanket aside in order to make space for Khushi.
Khushi reluctantly sits beside her.
Asiya: I'm really glad to hav met both of u! My kids got really attached to u! I'm sure they'll miss u a lot!
Khushi: Ya.. I'll also.. miss them! And I'm.. equally.. glad to.. hav met u all!
Asiya: Y r u.. hesitating so much?
Khushi: No.. Its just that..
Asiya(smiles): U need not b embarassed about the blanket thing! I can understand. U guys r newly weds and..
Khushi(interrupts): No! Its been.. more than a year since we got married.
Asiya(shocked): Really?
Khushi: Yes.
Asiya: I'm so sorry! I really felt as if.. u were newly weds!
Khushi(blushes): No. Its not like that!
Asiya: Mashallah! U & ur husband love each other so much! I'll pray that u both keep loving each other the same way even after many years!
Khushi: Thank u! I'll pray to Devi Maiyya to keep u & ur family happy!
Asiya: Thank u so much! Can I.. say something,Khushiji?
Khushi: Yeah.. sure?..
Asiya: U're extremely fortunate to hav sucha husband who loves u unconditionally! And take such good care of u! I observed him in the evening. When ur muscle got cramped,he looked more worried than u!.. Pain was clearly visible on his face.
Khushi smiles in realization.
Asiya: May Allah grant sucha husband to every girl! Then every girl's life will b blissful!
Khushi(holds her hand): Hav faith in ur fate & Allah,Asiyaji. Who knows?1 day ur husband might become like my Arnavji?
Asiya(sighs): I think that's impossible..
Khushi: Nothing is impossible! Its in the hands of every man/woman to change his/her fate! And everyone can be changed with love!
Arnav enters the compartment at that moment.
Arnav: Khushi,y did u wake her up?
Khushi: I neved did! Ur alarm must've disturbed her sleep!
Arnav: I'm really sorry!
Asiya: Plz dont say sorry! I wasnt able to sleep since a long time..
Arnav: Khushi,did u call babuji?
Khushi(realizes): I completely forgot about it!
Arnav shakes his head & proceeds to take out his lugggage from underneath the berth.
Asiya: Now u must start helping him. I'll lie down. Bye!
Khushi: 1 minute..
She hugs her,much to her surprise.
Khushi(whispers): Dont loose hope. Everything will b alright!
Asiya smiles at her after breaking the hug.
Khushi: Give my love to the kids! And tell them that I'll miss them a lot!
Asiya(smiles): Sure!
Arnav: Come Khushi,lets go to their coach.
Khushi: Okay.
She follows Arnav after bidding goodbye to Asiya.
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**Outside the old Delhi railway station,at 4:40 a.m.**
Buaji: What was the need to call Mohan babua at this hour,Nandkisore? We could've hired taxis..
Amma: Ya!
Arnav: I'd planned to do that but..wen I told di about it yesterday,she suggested that she'd send Mohan. U'll come home with us. Hav breakfast over there. And then while going to office,Aakash will drop u to ur house.
Buaji: No babua. We'll go to r house now itself..
Amma: Jiji is right, bitwa. I'd asked the milkman to give milk from today.If the milk stays outside for that long,the cat will drink it & spoil the whole courtyard. Plz drop us to r house. We'll come later to meet everyone.
Arnav(shrugs): Fine. As u wish!..
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**After reaching GH**
Arnav: Mohan,u wait outside. We'll come in a few minutes.
Mohan: Okay sir.
Khushi pulls out a dining chair for babuji.
Khushi: Plz sit down,babuji.
Amma: Ji,u sit down & take rest. I'll get water for everyone..
Khushi: U can do all that later,amma. U also sit down. And buaji..(looks around) Wer's buaji?
Buaji: Coming,Sanka devi! I'd gone to open the door & windows..
Khushi: U also sit down.. (to Arnav)Y r u standing?Sit down naa..
Arnav: No,thanks! I'm fine.
Buaji: What is the purpose of this early morning round table conference?
Khushi: Question-answer session!
Buaji: What?
Khushi: Yeah! First u sit down.. (helps her sit down)Ya! Now tell me,how was ur pilgrimage?
Buaji: Oh! It was excellent,Nandkisore!
Amma: Yes bitiya! We got Vaisnodevi Maiyya's darsan. And we also got to explore the lake market! I enjoyed myself thoroughly!
Babuji: Thank u bitiya! And thank u damaaad babu for making this pilgrimage memorable for us!
Arnav: Plz dont say thank u,babuji!
Khushi: Tell me honestly,u'll didnt face any problem naa? I hope u dont hav any complains about me?
Amma: Not at all,bitiya! We're telling the truth-we're very happy!
Buaji: There r no complains,niether about u both nor about the arrangements over there! We had a really good time! Apart from getting Baisnodebi maiyya's darsan,we got to meet Sures bahinji!
The smile is wiped off khushi's face.
Amma: Yes jiji. Since bahinji was with us,we quickly got a room in that saraay. And u also got a friend!
Buaji smiles.
Khushi: a.. I.. want to.. say something..
Buaji: What is the matter,Sanka devi?
Khushi: a.. buaji.. aunty.. Aunty is.. no more..
Buaji(shell shocked): What?
Khushi nods.
Amma: When did this happen?
Khushi: Day before yesterday. Her grandson had called me up.
Amma: Haay Ram! How come.. so suddenly?
Khushi: Due to heart failure..
Babuji: She was a kind & helpful lady. May her soul rest in peace!
Khushi(with a hand on her shoulder): Plz forgive me,buaji! Her grandson called up very late that night hence.. I didnt disturb u back then. And yesterday,since we had to leave the hotel in a hurry,I completely forgot to tell u about it!
Buaji: Its okay! (sighs)It wouldve been nice if I'd got a chance to speak to her before she passed away. But.. (sighs)Who can go against God's wish,Nandkisore?
Khushi: Whatever happened was the best for her,buaji. Aunty had to spend many years in grief,without uncle. Devi Maiyya liberated her soul.
Buaji nods.
Khushi: We should get going now. Di & everyone else must b waiting for us..
Amma: U're right, bitiya.
She is about to get up but Khushi stops her.
Khushi: Its okay,amma. We'll go on r own.
ArShi leave after greeting the Guptas'.
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**In the SUV,on the way to Shantivan**
When Arnav notices that Khushi is unusually quite,he decides to cheer her up.
Arnav: Mohan,park the car on the left..
Khushi: What happened?
Arnav gestures her to wait.
Mohan looks at Arnav for further instructions after parking the car.
Arnav takes out his wallet & hands him some money.
Arnav: U go home now. Make sure that u reach office on time.
Mohan: Okay sir. Thank you!
Arnav nods.
Khushi: Will he get an auto at this hour?
Arnav: Yes Khushi. (points to the opposite side of the road)Look,there's the auto stand. He'll reach home,dont u worry!
Khushi: Okay.
She is about to shift to the passenger's seat when Arnav stops her.
Khushi: Now what?
Arnav(with his arm around her): I hope I can say it now..?
Khushi: What?
Arnav: Welcome to Delhi!?
Khushi(faint smile): Yeah,sure!
Arnav(smiles): So,welcome back! (pecks her lips) Aapka.. a.. swaagat hai! (which means welcome back in Hindi)
Khushi(smiles a bit more): Thank u! Aur saath me aapka bhi swaagat hai!
Arnav: Thank you! BTW,u never asked me..
Khushi(frowns): What?
Arnav: How was my trip? Whether I had any problems or not? Whether I hav any complains or not?
Khushi: Y would I ask u? This wasnt ur pilgrimage! This was amma,babuji & buaji's yatra. Hence it was my duty to ask them about it!
Arnav: I see..
Khushi(blushes): I'll ask all these questions to u.. later on!
Arnav: After reaching home?
Khushi: Nope! (lowers her gaze)after ur yatra..
Arnav(confused): Myyatra?
Khushi(nods): Paris yatra!
Arnav(smiles): Oh! Okay.. I'll also ask u at that time-(imitates her) Khushiji,how was ur yatra?
Khushi shakes her head & smiles.
Arnav: Tell me honestly-Did Arnavji trouble u a lot? I hope u had no problems while staying over there? I hope u dont hav any complains with Arnavji?
Khushi: Of course not! I'm damn sure that Arnavji will leave no stone unturned in order to make Paris yatra a special one for me! All I'm worried about is.. he shouldnt hav any complains about me! (cups her cheek)U've seen how amma,babuji & buaji r today naa? I want u to be twice more happy wen we return from Paris!
Arnav(smirks): That's a given!
Khushi: Yeah,y not? Ur wish will b fulfilled so its bound to make u super happy!
Arnav: Absolutely! BTW,I'll b fulfilling ur wish today.
Khushi: My wish?
Arnav: Yup! U remember u'd won a bet according to which I was suppossed t take u to the Chandni Chowk market?
Khushi recalls the bet..
*Flashback*
Arnav(with his left arm around her waist): Lets do.. "all that" here,in the kitchen!
Khushi turns to him,shocked and then turns away.
Khushi: Right.. now?
Arnav(whispers in her ear): Yes! Right now!
He removes his arm from around her waist & moves 2-3 steps back.
Arnav: Tell me Khushi,is it a deal?I'm giving u a chance to prove urself!
Despite,u know.. all this.. if u manage to keep urself at a safe distance from the fire &.. cook without burning anything,I'll accept that u can take care of urself!
He again comes & stands right behind her.
Arnav: And in case u're not able to do so,u'll hav to accept ur defeat!
Khushi: If I win the bet,u'll hav to take me to the Chandni Chowk market day after,i.e. on Sunday!
Arnav: Deal!
*Flashback ends*
Khushi(blushes): Ya.. I remember.. the bet.
Arnav: I couldnt take u over there before u left for Vaishnodevi but.. I'll definitely take u to Chandni Chowk today!
Khushi: Which means.. u wont go to office today?
Arnav: Nope,I wont! And that's not all,I'll cook dinner for u tonight. And we'll hav a private,candle-light dinner at the poolside!
Khushi(smiles): Wow! What is so special about today that u'll b doing all that for me?
Arnav: Today's wife pampering day!
Khushi(believes him): Really?
Arnav(smiles): Nah! I was just kidding!
He holds her hand.
Arnav: Actually today's my last holiday before we head to Paris. I'll hav to attend offcie tomorrow & day after. Thats y I want to make this day special for u! Once we're back from Paris,I & Aakash will b busy with the Mehrotris' deal and then.. I really dont know when I'll b able to take a day off? So, I thought of making the most of this day!
Khushi: That's a nice thought! Since u're doing all this for me,its my duty to do something special for u!..
Arnav: Like?
Khushi: That's a surprise! I'll tell u later. Right now,should we go home or.. u wanna stay here in the car itself?
Arnav: Lets go home.
They shift to their respective seats & leave for Shantivan.
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Precap: Khushi: Taste this & tell me hows it?
Arnav has tears in his eyes after tasting it.
Khushi(concerned): Is it spicy?
Arnav shakes his head,wiping his tears with the back of his hand.
Khushi: Then.. y do u hav tears in ur eyes?
Arnav: Today I.. (gulps)ate something made by u after.. a long time so.. I'm just.. a bit.. overwhelmed.
Khushi: Hey Devi Maiyya!
She sits on his lap & wraps her arms around him.
Khushi: Sometimes I feel that u know me inside out but.. I still dont know many things about u! Like,for instance,I never knew that these small things hold so much importance in ur eyes..
Kindly ignore typos & mistakes. Next update on 6th June.
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Wonderful surprise Smitaji, hope you are exams are going great! Finally Arshi are back in delhi and only two days to go for Paris trip, super excited about it 😃 Although it was shorter than your regular updates but it was as awesome as much it could be. Asiya proved to be a great character for the story, she made Arnav realized that Khushi is not a kid and made Khushi realized that sometimes she speaks without thinking much and they unintentionally hurt each other! Looking forward for next update now as precap was overwhelming for me too. Thanks for the PM, chapter was super duper amazing as usual 😊

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