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Snoowfall

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

all of them so good, i could not stop laughing...🤣

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jani_16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Ha ha ha ha ha... ive never laughed so much in my life ... grt work ...

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#743

Liza thank you for your entertaining comments and detailed comments! Here are my thoughts..

Part 2

So glad you enjoyed the funny lingerie scenes..Yes I loved her First Aid too and could totally imagine Khushi pulling something like this!

Of course Arnav would make her sweat a little at dinner table, she did deserve it!

Part 3

Thank you for the reassurance 😊 When I outlined the bit I thought it would be over in a two shot but alas my ability to end things is tough and my mind conjures up new ideas.

I told Madhu that pool table is very useful indeed 😉

Part 4

Thank you so much and it truly makes me feel good that people are laughing while reading this. Laughter is the best medicine for so many things, and it's nice to forget our worries and enjoy Arnav and Khushi..

You will have to tell me how those jholas are and if they are as good as Mayan hammock 😉

As I said Nidhi claimed to have pull things from real life incident and not all authors 😆

ASR playing LUDO was quite a punishment for him..

Hope I get enough inspiration and ideas to continue entertaining all of you for some time 🤗

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Sami 🤗

Trust me if it weren't for you know what (the land of chappar chappar)...i would have finished this so fast. Knocked you down literally...

But kya kare chappar chappar ka addiction lag gaya hai...

Trust me sweetheart you will see me all along and once i am done with this hopefully in a day or two..

I would be attacking ANK..

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#745

Part 5:

Can i say sammi that i love your Arnav very much...👍🏼

And clearly your arnav uses his 'shatir dimaag' much more brilliantly and effectively than the original one ever did. 😳

i could see the smirk and glee spread on arnavji's face as he outlined the cure to curb the ermm 'wanton desires' of his dear wifey..😆😆

And what a master stroke get his lady love at his disposal to have his wicked way with her...😉

But at the same time i also loved this naive and almost childlike khushi who is driven insane by the longing that she has for her patidev. So refreshing to read about a khushi like this Sammi.

And i am now intrigued as to what Mr. Shatir Singh Raizada has up his sleeves...

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#746

Chap6 and this is for my V...🤗 then how can i not like it dammit.

I always felt that IPK did not use that awesome office of ASR after Arnav and khushi's marriage 'properly' 😳

I so wanted to see some great office romance after Arnav and khushi fell in love 😳 (Don't judge me there i love the good old office romance - M & B style)

But sadly that was not to be the scene all we got was one fancy dress show of khushi in Arnav's office and khushi and arnav sharing a very ordinary lunch at this office.

So thank you Sammi for finally giving me the office romance which was clearly blush worthy...☺️

And you got good old Aman too here...😆😆😆😆 as a peeping tom.

I love how you always manage to inculcate humor every single time into your updates...

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kondhili

@kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#747

Part 7 and this one is for Charu...🤗 such a strong lady i tell you sami...

Bheege hont tere...uff what an awesome HOT song...Suits the 'HOTTEST couple' that i have ever seen to the T...😳

The song is so full of passion and desire that it was really shatir of Arnav to come up with this brilliant idea..☺️

Probably the only time that i have loved Di's interfering 'chotey chotey' attitude and dialogues...😛

But can i tell you that before i turned various shades of pink in the last part of the update i was rolling on the floor with laughter in the whole aman, asr and khushi office scene.

I have said it before and i want to say it again...i love the way you have all your stories with just the right amount of passion and a good dose of Humor...

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kondhili

@kondhili

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#748

Now that i have caught up its time for me to say

intrigued and curious to know how you are going to use the inspiration of the 'ponytails' from our dear friend DDD...😉

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_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: kondhili
Now that i have caught up its time for me to say

intrigued and curious to know how you are going to use the inspiration of the 'ponytails' from our dear friend DDD...😉

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ssyahoo

@ssyahoo

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#750

Thank you Liza!! Glad you are all caught up!

Part 5

Arnav and Khushi are always depicted as a passionate couple so it makes sense to show the passion from both sides! I really do love innocent Khushi though 😆

Part 6

I am so glad that you enjoyed the office romance scenes. I have a few more planned before series will end in addition to a few more special guest appearances by Aman.

Part 7

Glad you enjoyed the terrace scene and Anjali doing some good for a change. Thought they should have some nice memories of the terrace 😉

The ponytail chapter should come sometime in July. I have three parts ahead of that, but maybe I will change the sequencing around let's see.

Let the naughty times roll! 😆

Edited by ssyahoo - 12 years ago