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srilathas

@srilathas

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#531

nice story...very well written...gr8 work...

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pixi_nightingal

@pixi_nightingal

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#532

i read it one go it was superb

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Nira khan

@nirbasito

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Posted: 11 years ago

#533

it was beautiful...thank u so much dear...👍🏼

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Saraa

@..Saraa..

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#534

Ok...So to be honest I hope you had written it for about 2 or 3 updates more as this was the plot which would have turned into a really good FF, although I felt that the story was written off in a rush I really do respect your efforts in writing it, whether what you had in Mind come through your words or not, its just that I really appreciate that you didn't discontinue it and gave the story an end. I am really proud of you for doing so.😃

And yes, I liked your notes and blabbering too.😆

Love,

Saraa

P.S.: I'm really sorry of I hurt you in anyway but I believe in speaking your heart out. 😃

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kshows_fangirl

@kshows_fangirl

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#535

This was a good story...but I just wasn't convinced about Arnav's character...I didn't feel the love, trust, and loyalty that he would have for Khushi in the future..

But, may that is just me personally...Other than that, I enjoyed reading it...😊