The Bride With A Doll...Removed/ A/N on Pg 42 :)

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Jay

@Sharaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#201

Hi Jen...

Awesome Prologue... Bride with a Doll..👏

Selected period is making me intrigued... Pre Independence India...

Arnav Basu Raizada...

Here, Khushi is already His...😳

Satish dada is only family for Khushi??? whr is her parents...??their surname?

My cute naive innocent Khushi with Roopa...

i love whenever you bring dolls to stories...

be it, impenetrable heart, Twinkle or here Roopa...

Waiting for Story to take away my mind...😉

Thanks for pm Jen

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leanne_1983

@leanne_1983

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

Loved the prologue. Excited about the story. Looking forward to chapter 1.

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tanvi_arshi

@tanvi_arshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#203

Nice concept...waitin for its start..continue soon plz..pm.me

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..Jyoti..

@..Jyoti..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#204

Great prologue
their age difference is 13 yrs omg..

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Jessie

@jessjazz

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

13 year gap between them!!! But this did happen then...

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#206

Jenny, Your writing is addictive. So you write it and we will follow..
Eagerly waiting ..

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

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Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Intresting start ...

Continue soon

Thanks for pm

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kamalinee

@kamalinee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#208

hmmm the Bengali connection...inspiration is Ron Sen I hope. I am confused about the age difference, though 13 years was not uncommon during that period, looking forward to reading this.

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smilli

@smilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#209

Ok...now dat was owsum...dear itny interesting concepts lati kahan se ho..?

Tooo goood...eagerly waiting for part 1 ...
Ye to abhi se mera favourite ho gya...:)