Nidhi,
Apologise for the late comment...but I wanted to write in leisure the update demanded that !
I felt like I was watching this on TV, you writing was so flawless and so visual .
I am glad Khushi realised that she has no,reason whatsoever to mistrust Arnav and rather than let hypothetical problems and issues spoil her trip with him she decides to let go of her insecurities and make this trip a memorable one for them!
I am glad she realises that trust is the foundation of any relationship and that is what she needs to do...to trust the man she loves...and a man like him would always attract attention, so be it... And he has proved,so many times how much and how strong his love,for her is...love how he does not let go of any opportunities to touch and hold her...gave me goosebumps!
Loved the descriptions, loved his anxiety over the room, he is caught in a dilemma he wants to spend all the time he can with her but does not,want her to feel any pressure or get the wrong impression about his intentions...he is at unease with this thought in contrast to her being all excited and in awe of the surrounds and totally comfortable with their living arrangements, she knows how,much he loves her...you know the way you describe their love for each other is so so amazing...it's like they love each other so much that they seem to be bursting with love !
Love how she reassurance him that she is completely okay with the arrangements and infact teases him and then gets him to,agree to follow her lead!
Love that she is so concerned for him,his health and takes the effort of going shopping to dress up,for him...
Love that she sees him sleeping looking so vulnerable that she does not want to wake him and alters her plan and arranges for an intimate dinner for them, her way of app siting and acknowledging all that he does for her...
Loved the flashback about the bracelet and her feeling of uneasiness at the mention of his date which she now understands the reason for, they have always felt something for each other...his gesture of presenting her with a keepsake ...little did she know how important that bracelet would come to mean to her...!
...loved the way he comes out to the balcony and address her as"baby" that scene made me go " dhak dhak" so can just imagine her plight...loved his look. ( the pictures of their clothes added to the entire scene )
Loved her feeling guilty about eating dessert and there being so sugar free substitute for him, loved how he is mesmerised and enjoying her enjoyment...
Loved the feeling of desire and passion ...that they feel for each other.
Loved how they both want to be with each other without any pretence or pressure...they love each other and to them this is just a way of showing each other how much and they both want it, but she can she the questions and uncertainty in his eyes...along with love, so she takes the decision and once again the lead ...and then him telling her to let him show her how much he loves her...RAMANCHI..we also want to see how much!
But jokes apart a beautifully written updated...cannot wait for him to see his initial on her now! The mehendi one...
Waiting eagerly for the next part...
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