Finding Love #5: COMPLETED - Page 74

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Posted: 12 years ago

Lovely update Nidhi.

So Khushi is planning to make it a memorable trip. She is quite happy with Arnav and secure with the knowledge that he is her man. Quite matyred girl to realize it is beyond his capacity to control other girls falling over him. Her realization that he doesn't was what the trust is all about. Liked the way you have dealt with the characters Nidhi. At a glance this looks like a smooth story but I see that you have shown how the protoganists have dealt with their emotions and how well they overcome each and every problem taking into consideration the other. Like the way they are aware of how the others in their family see them as.

Nice pic of the aerial view of the campus and The Four Seasons Hotel, was really good. Wonder how Arnav slept in that couch! Comfortable to sit but to sleep! So Arnav had booked a single room but was apprehensive of Khushi's reaction! But Khushi's reaction does startle him doesn't it! He might have expected her to ask for a separate room but that girl gives him a lot of surprises and understands him very well. Their dress combination was superb! Black and red! Lovely combination! Loved the dinner setting for two. So they did have a memorable dinner and for desserts we are yet to see.

Will wait for your update patiently.

Edited by rulama - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊awesome chapter waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cliffhanger
Nooo
Awesome chapter
They are so sweet
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb...Superb...Superb update...Did not expect you to stop there...please give the next update soon...khushi has planned the entire evening for him...the pictures are awesome...and thanks for giving a quick glance of Harvard...both their dresses were pretty awesome...liked khushi's thoughtfulness about their relationship...its of no use to discuss about any other person not only lavanya because if you have trust and love in a relationship anything else doesnot matter...hope she stands that strong going ahead...any way arnav is there to support her...loved how she planned a date for arnav...superb update...thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update yaar👏...
i fall in love with this story again...
lovely update full of arshi sweet moments...
cant wait for next one yaar...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsum update
Whole chap only with arshii 😳 their kissed ,date everything perfect
Continue soon
Thanks for the link
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow what a lovely and romantic update
really love Khushi make such a decision for do something special for Arnav 🤗
He was feeling bad for giving the wrong impresion to KHUSHI by sharing room its so sweet
love his last line
" You know I love you Khushi, now let me show you how much"
i cant believe u just stopped there🥺
this is not done
cant wait for next update
plz continue it as soon as possible

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Posted: 12 years ago
wow nice update loved it thank you.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Woah, that was so awesome and superb...
Their understanding, trust and love is just superb...
Amazing update
Loved it so so so much... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago

Hi Nidhi:

Just started reading your story today and read all 29 chapters in on go…..I am in absolute awe as it is very interesting and very well written….you are a wonderful writer….the minor emotions that one go through in relationship has been written too perfectly….it is really amazing to read how a relationship develops between two people….you have shown attraction, jealousy, insecurities, flirting, teasing, affection, care and love….I can read all those emotions in this story….an amazing work…I can visualize a household with a loving mother a caring father and a lovely elder sister….each and every emotion are written very well….I just thought to drop a comment after reading all chapters…sorry for the delay…The last update was just like a fairy tale to me…hey bhagwan you left us on the cliff hanger…

Waiting for the next update eagerly…and yes I would love to receive a PM for your stories

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