Finding Love #5: COMPLETED

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Ok how do you end the chapter at this!! You should have a disclaimer at the top of your chapter, Warning: Prepare to take cold shower after update 😡

Ok now back to the good parts!! Loved how Arnav was a little uncomfortable at the thought of them sharing a room. I absolutely loved this line

Running his fingers through his hair he realized he still hadn't talked to her about their living arrangements and here he was practically devouring her first chance he gets.

While you did utilize the sofa we had something else in mind. 😆

Ok so the flashback about the charm bracelet was nice. However I think there may be something more to it. It was nice to see that Arnav was also caring in the past, even though he was going out on a date.

So I loved her dress and the dinner. It was really nice for Khushi to plan something romantic. Again pictures were beautiful. Now on to the best part was their hot kiss and we can't wait to see just how much Arnav "loves" Khushi!!

Edited by ssyahoo - 12 years ago

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IPK007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#652

WHaaa?!!!!

You actually stopped there...!! This is not done...this is so not done..!!!!!

Will come back to comment later...😃

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Awesomely romantic chapter !! Though there were so many things I liked about this chapter...like their care and concern for each other, their kiss, Arnav being so adorably gentlemanly, their outfits, the whole ambience, that you created so efforlessly yet so brilliantly with your words, their kisses, their date...loved it all...but my mind keeps hearing Arnav's last words, "Let me show just how much I love you" 😳..The dhakdhaks have started...

And after the teaser, you are killing us...can't wait !! I wrote Monday by mistake in the PM...but you are going Monday...and myself Wed...😃

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_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#653

Oh my freaking God Nidhi !!!

Sabse pehle i have to complain for this big time ramanchi... kuwe tak laa kar pyaasa chod diya !😕

But i swear i was grinning like a love sick puppy from ear to ear while reading this update!

This awesome feeling of being in love ... with all the firsts of a relationship springing in the air make me feel so mushy i cant tell you !

I cant pin point one single line in this update as a favorite...each line written by you transported me to a fairy tale and i so want to stay there.

Loved Arnav's slight hesitation in not wanting to look like a prude by booking one room ...i love him yaar ..isse zyaada kya bolo main.. like i said Arnav Perfect Boyfriend Raizada it is.

And Khushi finally she has taken the leap of faith ...and wants to shower him with her attention and love and is she doing a great job or what !!!

Naughty girl told him she wore an old dress ha ...😆

I loved all the lovely pics you put up makes my imaginary world even more delightful!

Now after such an end you please tell me how to wait patiently for next update !

Ps; Thank u for this long update ...it is well appreciated !😃

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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kondhili

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Posted: 12 years ago

#654

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OMG nidhi i feel like killing you for leaving the update there but chalo koi nahi.

My heart is fluttering already thinking about the next update...😳

Kabhi na kabhi toh kuch hoga na couch par ya bed par, thode ya no dard ke sath☺️

Hum intezaar karenge aur spam karenge uss din ke liye..😆😆

OK jokes apart..scorching HOT update...Waah and kya nazaare the uske saath.

I tell you i love the way you visualize the whole update.

You can see just about everything in front of you. Khushi and arnav in that awesome attire 'playing around' in that great room..

So thank you for investing so much into your update. Tussi bond ho bas.

I loved this khushi who wanted to do something for arnav and who wanted to take some control about the course of their relationship which was clearly driven by arnav all these days.

So kudos you go girl slay him...anyway he is half dead already.

Would it be ok if i tell you that i had some acidity problem accompanied with dhak dhak of the heart when i read this..

"Baby its cold outside, let's go in" he murmured against her ear.

The sweet murmuring and the casual touch were just ufff.

Great update ramanchi tha but koi nahi Chapter 30 also you will write...

Kaha bhaagogi...😆

Edited by kondhili - 12 years ago

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Sakina

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Posted: 12 years ago

#655

~Unres~

Fabulous Update...

Originally posted by: Nidsubh007

The plane ride had started off with the argument regarding Lavanya, but now Khushi had made a decision to not let that women, in fact any women or man come in between them, because frankly speaking a man like Arnav would always attract interest from the opposite sex, considering his line of work, his charismatic personality and silent yet strong character.

The important thing was to have a solid foundation in this relationship and trust, honesty and commitment was the pillar of this love. So how can she ever have any doubts regarding their love, when Arnav had gone out of his way to prove his love to her a hundred times over?

So it was officially decided by Khushi Kumari Gupta that Boston would mark the start of a fresh page in their relationship. No jealousy, no insecurities and no doubts.

I really Love Khushi for making this Decision...
Arnav is So sweet...
He was actually feeling bad for giving the wrong impression to Khushi...
Really Loved the last Line said by Arnav...
Can't wait for their Day out...

Edited by arshi_sunshine - 12 years ago

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barauni

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Posted: 12 years ago

#656

You stay in Chicago...!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ohhh poor me... Not only me all the readers... I pity all the addicted ones!!!!!!!!!!!!!😭 Its just about 9.20am at your place!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and your update is going to come up at 10pm in the night according to your time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤢 more than 12 hours waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤢🤢🤢 this is not fair... we want justice!!!!!!!!!😆 aap jaante ho ki addiction means hating to wait aur phir bhi!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏 Nidhi di aap ne humare saath ramanchi ki matlab cheating kiya...😭😭😭 now i think you really have to have to have to spring up with a surprise!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆

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mem1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#657

OH My Goodness Gracious!!!!!

You will kill me one day. or at least get me fired! I don't think looking all flushed at work is a good thing.

Specially when anyone can walk up to you at any time!

This as an update to die for... and for once I am actually glad you stopped where you did. I will remember to not read the next update at work, knowing what to expect!

Loved Khushi's date . and Loved how thoughtful Arnav is inspite of his 'needs' 😉

Reading your story makes me realize how much potential the show had, that they never utilized. a Super rich guy like ASR and all we got a barn and a farm house. 😭
They should have consulted you!

BTW, on second thoughts (cause all my first thoughts were taken up by the ending! and what is to come 😉) I really liked the story behind the Charm bracelet... very sweet!

Edited by mem1 - 12 years ago

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vandana.sagar

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Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#658

Waiting...

Updated on page 122!

Edited by vandana.sagar - 12 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#659

awesome update loved that khushi is going to stop worry about that b***h la and trust arnav loved how she planned a special day and night for him loved the dress so cute very beautifully update loved it are they ready for the next level how could you stop there thanks for the pm loved the update

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago