ARSHI FF: ~PAWN~ #7 Chap 16 Pg 135 28/05 EXT

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janu

@jenji08

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#271

wow Arnav is regretting his mistake very badly...
i loved shyam in this update...
superb update...

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Penny

@penny25

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#272

ohhh...

so arnav has strted repenting...nd dat too badly...so much dat he cudnt meet her...for 3 days he is wid her but not infront of her...wat greater punishment cud it b for someone to c someone mentally broken bcoz of dem...

d fact dat arnav realise sdat he has physically harrasssd his own wife nd took away her innocnce is atleast a step forwrd towards redemption...towrds being a btter human being...

nd d talk wid his "dad" was so touchin...d concept was quite novel di...i hope arnav lives upto his promise of being protective towrds khushi...nd doesnt backs off from it...

its nice too c shym as a gud guy for a chnge nd anji d self-obssesd attention seeker...its very wierd to imagine arnav talking bout anji being "insane" nd to "get her checked up by a doctor" nd her nature of being a gold digger ...

but if keep aaside d image of d ever-ready-to-do-pooja-anji-nd-alwys-obessed-wid-her-chotay-nd-shym...we do now such kind of pychotic women do exist who r emtionally insecured nd thus creates problems for other in dis case khushi!!!

lets c why dis chapter is called MPC? nd does arnav confronts khushi...

waiting for d addition of d extension part...:)

Edited by penny25 - 12 years ago

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#273

amazing update please update soon.

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Dandelion

@nikita-nair

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#274

finally u updted dii...

gd updte..

lvd d way u described the father-son bond b/w khushiz fathr nd arnv..

um w8n wen he'l meet khushi nd his nxt stp 2wrds her..!

updte d extensn soon plz..!!

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arnaushi

@arnaushi

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#275

congrats on new thread...

i really loved the conversation between arnav and shyam(at least somewhere he is nice!).how arnav regrets shyam and anjali's marriage...

arnav's self conversation with his father in law was nice one...but where is rain considered as slap?😕 just kidding...😆]

but i am happy that arnav realised his mistake and is now repenting for it hope he goes to khushi soon...she needs him a lot...(i can imagine khushi jumping like a kid to arnav's arm)

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Nkayani

@Nkayani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#276

Yeay u updated.
I absolutly loved it.
Loved the scene where arnav calls mr gupta dad it felt soo nice to hear that from his mouth that shows hes accepted kushi is his life and has given her the place in his life which is for his wife only.
The second scene i loved was when the rain drops fell on arnavs face which u beautifully symbolised as him getting his punishment from kushi dad. I hope just like those rain drops kushi slaps him a number of times but even that wont even start to cover the pain arnav has given kushi.
Cant wait for the extention!

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Purnima

@-AniShiv-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#277

Wonderful..

Awesome..

Fantastic..

Brilliant..

Marvelous...

adjectives will fall short if I try to describe this update..

It is nice to see Arnav repenting on his deeds.. His apology to Mr.Gupta was the best part.. Loved that part a lot..

Finally Arnav realised that Khushi is a poor innocent soul and GG made her a scapegoat.. Hope he face the situation instead of hiding and crying..

Arnav himself know that Anjali is mentally imbalanced.. **NEWS OF THE YEAR AWARD** for this!!

Shyam proved that he is a good man, a great brother and a wonderful brother in law. His support and the hug was much needed..

The update was really awesome..
Waiting for the extension eagerly..
Continue soon..