Rusted Relations thread 3 - Page 77

Give 3 months leap if u can

I don't know about others but personally i would prefer a gradual progress of story throughout this three month phase...


Reason: there r already so many mysteries n leap will make it even more confusing... The current track of the story is not because of some recent happening but because of something that happened in the past... Then giving a leap n writing the flashbacks n then obviously referring to the real reasons that r a part of even further past will b quite confusing to understand... We all readers read something as it gives us a respite from a very hectic schedule n we get involved in the world of words... Too much confusion results in losing interest in the whole concept... Rest u know better as it is ur very personal idea in the first place...


I hope m making some sense here... Lol

i think u can give 3 months leap

Originally posted by: Fleur_de_Lis

IMPORTANT NOTE

Hello,

My dear readers

I have something to share with you and in return I also want you all to share your views or opine on the views I have to say.

I have reached a certain juncture of the story. After writing CHAPTER 19 C I had planned to start the next sub-part. Now here I will disclose my dilemma.

I had once thought to give a 3-month leap in the story and start from the point where all the mysteries are unfolded and the different ways and thoughts are out like the Pandora's box and show the love affairs and the progress of unveiling the mysteries in flashback.

Then again I thought to continue with Khushi's stay in RM and the gradual unveiling of mysteries and formation of love and hope in different couples and wrap up these 3 months rapidly with important mystery disclosures.

These 3 months' phase is an important part. It can make or break this story.

The story has many sub-plots and layers already..I am already juggling the PAST and the PRESENT which is quite confusing..if I take a 3 month leap..the flashbacks which will be shown would cover the 3 months and also before that at the same time..it will be like 2 or 3 channels being viewed at the same time at the same screen.

Now my question is would you girls like it simple or complex??

Should I give the story 3 months leap directly and come back when necessary or wrap up these 3 months with major incidents and progress???

I can write both with ease. I want you all to breathe in the story..enjoy and savour the story..

So..please wear your thinking caps and let me know asap.

If you have any other idea..you can share it also..I will be glad to know the alternatives as well.

P.S. whatever decision you will take please give a reason behind choosing that certain option.

For example: if you want 3 months' leap directly I really would want to know the cause.

Again, if you want 3 months' progress gradually I would again like to know the reason.

Das ist alles.

Thank you

Fleur de Lis ❤️

I think complex with 3 months leap would be my choise coz it will be more interesting

Final decision is obviously urs.

I think a 3 months leap will be good...
And then the flashbacks unfolding the secrets and their love would be good to read...
So my vote for 3 montha leap...

More complex the story more intresting it will be...and more thrilling too..

Make it easy to understand rimli... make the story mysterious but dont make it more complex ... it would be easier for us to catch the concept if it is less complicated ... 😊

do whtever u want yr,, we will read it anyway