ArshiFF:The Controlling Lover(16+) Thread 1 Ch1-13

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princesssheena

@princesssheena

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#591

i loved the update :) its really nice i am falling in love with this story the more i read it :)

Good job

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rimu

@rimzu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#592

hahaha...she wore his boxers agn...dAts cute..

nd nyc update

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#593

Just loved it...seems like Arnav is fallen for Khushi as much as her...the update was really awesome...waiting for next weekend...

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dima_a

@dima_a

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Posted: 12 years ago

#594

simply amazing short update...waiting for next update and for there weekend date

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Jasmeet

@CBrocks

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Posted: 12 years ago

#595

Hey... really loved ur storyy😊...read all the chapters in one go

i kno it resembles fifty shades a little...but found this one better👏

can u please pm me when u update next:)

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Nkayani

@Nkayani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#596

Loved the update.
People are sooo jelous of arhi im loving it

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Aysha

@ayshaomar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#597

Awesome

and hahaha definitely a good way to get back at the cheerleaders

so Lavanya feels there is something off or something more to him, which Khushi feels also

Arnav seems smitten by Khushi, already feeling restless without her, can't keep his hands off her and wants her over again, but Khushi seems as smitten by him too

looking forward to the next update

Edited by ayshaomar - 12 years ago

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Kavyanjali

@kavyanjali08

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#598

Awsommm i just luvvv dis story...oh i was so waiting 4 it 2 b updatd...arshi prtz were sweet i luvd da way dey both shard der feelings lyk his craving 4 hr or hr using his stuffz...i didn't undrstnd wht made la say 2 khushi bout arnav dat way? N wud khushi tell arnav bout it? Btw u havn't disclose much bout khushi's family though arnav's is too not much clear but still kuch toh pata hai but khushi's isn't out a bit myt shw somthing lyk khushi telling bout hr family 2 arnav i'm curious bout it...luking 4wrd 2 hr weeknd stay arnav's...oh itz such a awsom story mwahz i wish chpz wud b more long...itz to story 4 my lykings...nyhoo nxt chp sooon..:)

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Mariam Khan

@Mxk3444

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Posted: 12 years ago

#599

their realationship is going in a fast pace and im not liking it. Khushi should really trust her friends instinct on Arnav being a little weird. thanks for the update.