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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hai dears,😊
thanks for the friends who gave cmnts n likes😃
PART 42

After a long night both returned to their room n slept with jaanu...

Morning both pairs were blushing looking at each other...then,all got ready n went to niagara falls ..dadi told them all to go out..she wished to be at home...she wants the kids to enjoy..she willbe tired soon n they might come home soon for her..all made a pout..

Dadi patted vickys cheeks..ive visited all places when im with ur dadaji..now my old age needs rest n peace only..seeing u all happy i get it..im here with u just to see the happiness on ur faces when u return home..

All started to niagara falls..

Jaanvi:mama.

Geet:haan beta..

Mama:dekho.pani..

Geet:haan..see so nice na..

Priya:mama,so much of water..see how it is falling down

The kids were excited..

Maan slided his hands on her waist..her voice stuck in her throat..

Geet:maan..sab hain..

Maan:geet,its america..not india..see all..she looked around..n could not help than blushing.. both boys n girls,all were dressed up in shorts n banians..n holding each other they were enjoying the sight seeing..

Vicky took priya n moved forward..adi n pinky went alone..maneet were walking keeping certain distance from them..

Maan came to her..

Geet:hmm..i wish to see u like them..

Geet:chi..chi babaji..

Maan:waise ive seen u without too...

Geet:maan..u ..u..

Maan:kya..

Geet:bachi bi hai ..kuch tho sharam keejiye..

Maan:she is busy in watching the surroundings..im busy in my geet..he squeezed her waist making her jump..

Jaanvi:papa.lets go n play in water na..

Now how can they do that..

Maan:jaanu u want to play in water..

Jaanu:haan..

Maan:when we go to theme park we will play there..here if we play na..see that police na..wo humei pakadkar lejayega..

Jaanu:sachi..

Maan:sachi..muchi..then how will we go to see fish ,themepark n all..n dadi will be waiting for us na..so wewill not play here..

Jaanvi nodded ok..

Geet:aapna..

Maan:some times we must geet..jute bolna achi baath nehi hai..but the lie which doesntharm u can say..this lie is only to divert her..

They allroamed n came back n had their lunch..then they went for shopping..maan was teasing geets sense n geet was having hard time..

They all returned back home..jaanu n priya has already slept on the way itself..so it was not hard for maan to take geet immediately in his arms reaching their room..

The night was again passionate for them..

The next day maan planned for water theme park not to disappoint his jaanu n priya..

When all are playing in water maan roamed his hands in geets skin making her eyes wide..

Maan:geetu y r u looking me like that..he asked behaving all innocent..

Geet cursed him underbreathe..she looked cute while cribbing..

Maan:geetu,dont do that..or i will kiss u here itself..

Haawww..she wacked him n moved to pinky n priya..

Maan smiled..

All were having so much fun..n as expected pinky was also out of her sorrow n behaved normally..

Maan was busy drooling his wife playing in water with pinky n kids...vicky saw it n his mind went all naughty..he came behind maan who was nearing his mishty...vicky pushed him n went away laughing..it was so sudden maan lost his balance n fell on geet holding her..they went inside water..geet held him tight in fear..though maan was shocked at first seeing geet in his arms under water he took her lips once n left her..geet came out of water..n pinky asked is she ok..she blushed saying ya..

Here maan came out of water n searched for vicky..he was standing faraway from him..with a smirk..

maan:u pushed me na..now see what i do with u..

Maan went under water n pulled vickys legs..they were chasing n having fun..

Pinky: jaanu..c ur papa n chachu ..

The kids laughed at the scene before them..

Vicky came n hide behind geet:

Vicky:bhabhi save me from ur khadoos pati..

Geet:what?khadoos..how dare u say that..she wacked him..

Maan pulled his ears...

Vicky:bro bro..it hurts..

Geet:u deserve it..

Jaanu:papa aur keecho..

Priya:haan maamu..

They loved seeing vickys dramatic expressions..

Vicky:omg..noone is heto save me..

Pinky:enough of ur drama vicky..noone is going to fall in ur antica..haan if vaishu is here may be she must be listening to ur dramebaaz dialogues..

Vicky kept his mouth mum as all laughed at him..til evening they were having fun..they took all rides..

Adi:i ts enuf i think we must leave..

They returned home n slept soon..

The next day all went to under water museum...kids were delighted to see colourful fishes,sea horses craba,penguins,whales n all..they watched the seal show where the seals obeyed there masters orders..

They returned earlier to home at night ..geet n pinky decided to make dinner..vicky with kids were with dadi animating the things what they saw n how they enjoyed..n how vicky was been teased..dadi was hearing all..

maan decided to check his mails..n adi too was checking the details of office..after they came here they never contacted to kc nor checked anything regarded it..they were busy in their personal life..

maans face had wrinkles seeing the lappy screen..so many mails than ever..mainly from the spy whom he kept to watch rahuls moves..

starting mails said rahul was searching maan n family..he is mad to know where he is..then the mails said he is planning to make maan show up..next mails said rahuls plans..

maan closed his eyes..rahul was succeeded in his plans in lack of maans presence..adi came to maan..

maan:haan jiju..

adi:i think its time to return..

maan:hmm..

we both were here..n rahul did not leave any stone unturned..

adi:hmm..in all sites there are problems..

maan:ya..in some labours..in some quality of products is changed..in some strike by workers asking increase of payment ..in one a worker is injured and they are asking money ..

adi:hmm..

maan:rahul is succeeded..

adi:we must go immediately..

maan:yes jiju..u go n make arrangements ..we will leave tomorrow morning..n haan dont tell anyone..the happiness will drown from them..

adi:ya..

maan n adi told all they have an important meeting to attend..n so all will leave early morning..

they all had their dinner together..maan n adi hide the fact ..n enjoyed with them..all packed the things n were all set to leave..n left to sleep..

at night maan pulled geet close..after confirming jaanu is in deep slumber..he started to kiss her earlobes..pulling her close to him..

geet :maan..

maan:yes honey..

geet:why i feel like u r hiding something..

maan looked at her..she can read him in n out..

maaan:thats not important now..he sealed her lips with his..she tried so much to make him share his problem..but he made her weak by his kisses n passionate love making..he dont know how much days will it take for him to get this peaceful moment with his wife again..he dont want to spoil her mood..once they reached home he will explain her..

they all returned india after a long travel. in plane he n adi was discussing about their plans n geet n pin ky too came to know it..n they also helped him..

leaving jaanu n priya with pinky in home all reached KC..they called for an urgent meeting n got all information they need..then all 3 went to different sites n tried to sort every problem..it took a month for all to breathe peacefully ..atlast all was sorted..they thought..

it was another day government called out for a tender..maan mostly avoided rahuls meet..but here they faced n rahuls face spitted venom..geet was also near maan..

he stopped maan smirking..

rahul:how is ur peaceful life maan...

maan tried to move..his love for his dc stopped him to misbehave with rahul..

how much he may fell down rahul is his bil..

rahul:uff..i think i stealed ur peace..but i think it is not enuf..we will play more dangerous again.ur daughter is not with u...he said looking at geet..

geet had enuf of him..if maan is having respect for him..she is the one also to ask him to hold back ..but its too far...

geet :u have already played enuf..was that not enuf u took a small life before it comes to the world..

rahul:so mrs.khurana has tongue too..

maan:mind it rahul..my silence doesnt mean im weak..

rahul:oh im scared..

he then said with anger..

rahul:im challenging u maan singh khurana..i'll steal everything fromu that gives u happiness..try to keep ur wife n daughter safe from me..

maan has lost his control:he grabbed rahuls collar..

how dare u..dare u touch my family..

geet pulled maan from him..maan...pls..cool down..

rahul smirked seeing him in anger..

rahul:this is what i want to see..fear for them..u will face the pain when someone close to u leaves u..n u will not be able to see their face for last time too..mark my words..

maan:geetu..leave me..today i will..

geet turned him n made him face her...

geet:maan..u always kept quiet..n u will..let him do what he wants..i know u r there for me..n we both are there for jaanu..till im there he cant even near jaanu..

she turned to rahul..

geet:one day it will come mr.rahul..u will feel for ur behavior..that u will not be able to forgive urself..

maneet went from there..

present:

rahul closed his eyes..

geet was true..today i couldnot forgive myself..what if that day i have succeeded in my plan ..

vicky:that time too god was with them..bro came at right time..

precap:geet n jaanu followed by goons of rahul..maneet in jungle..trying to save their life..😡.

25.4.2013..6.00 pm

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Edited by valli22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
next will be u,me..
but dont know..will i be able to type with my nonsupporting lappy😡
next week no updates..
im in vacation..saying before iitself
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
Thank u so much di for posting the update & I just LOVED this update it was beautiful filled wid loads of love emotions & anger loved our maaneet😳 & di u've given a scary precap eagerly waiting for next hoping maan will come & save his lives(geet & jaanu) di jaldi update dena will be waiting
LOVE U LOADS di😳 aur ab waiting for U ME plzzz😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
lv it dear
oh rahul he is bck of maneet dear
precap is scary
hope everything alright
w8 fr u me and aur
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15
Good I like it
All water park masti
And rahul the idiot
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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
maaneet in jungle😲
di yeh rahul kab sudhrega
wowww d trip was awesomeee
n masti of vicky n maan was 2 good... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
Nice part all enjoyed there outing aspecially kids...
Maaneet also suceed to breck rahul trap...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
lovely update
Maneet romancing
Rahul making plans to make maneet's life hell
Maneet facing rahul and maan angry
Precap is scary but i know maan is there so y to fear ????
Edited by mehak173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19
superb update

wat is rahul upto
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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
awesome update di
love maaneet nd family moments
aww kids were so cute nd vicky dramebaazi
Rahul created problem nd destroyed family sweet holiday
but he can never success in plan when maaneet r together

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