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preethi28

@preethi28

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

The relationship Payal and Khushi share is something to be cherished no doubt. Khushi sees a friend, a sister and her most trusted confidant in Payal.But some of the decisions with regards to her relationship with Arnav have to be made by her.
Payal is mature, sensitive and has more experience i these matters but she is not Khushi and Arnav is not Akash.Khushi's predicament when she liked Arnav while she was seeing NK might have been similar to what Payal once faced.So taking Payal's advice that time was correct.
But deciding the future of her relationship with Arnav and making a call on the physical aspect is something she has to do alone.No amount of discussing with Payal is going to help her.Akash didn't have issues regarding marriage and Payal was not averse to pre-marital sex.So she cannot really help Khushi.
I think the sooner Khushi makes up her mind about what she really wants the better it is.Procrastinating things is never good.
I hope Khushi's question to Arnav is something which would help her in making up her mind.

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LooneyLuna

@LooneyLuna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

This chapter felt nice and soothing..although troubles might be lurking in the background.

I like how you portrayed the steady pace of their relationship. It begins with the initial cant-keep-this-silly-grin-off-my-face and can't help spending every free moment with you (surprises me because ASR is such a preacher of personal space). But then delves deeper into the different facets of their relationship..like the ease/peace of being around each other, the physical intimacy (combustible as always!), sharing of an emotional past yadi yada. And that both are equally invested in making each other happy.

I can appreciate Payal's personality more with each chapter.

I wonder if the future holds talking through and understanding each others perspectives about these facets, or letting it crumble slowly.

Thank you for writing a long wonderful update, even while you were sick! Hope you are feeling better.

Hitashi

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laksh65

@laksh65

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

awesome udpate loved it.

payal is so matured and a logical thinker, i wish she was projected like this in the show.

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Wow I am so glad to see your update. It was superb loved it

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arnavbarun

@arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Its great how both of them are trying hard to make this work!

their love is the only thing them together otherwise everything seems against them...from backgrounds to beliefs

love payal...her advice is always bang on! wish i had someone like her

but in this case Khusi did the right thing by avoiding the matter for the time being

even I was curious to know why arnav has problem with marriage!!

waiting for the next update to know the same

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Sasha

@sarunsashasingh

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Amazing, superb n a very light hearted update.
So khushi has concerns about physical aspects.
But iam sure that there must be a reason that Arnav is so against marriage. 😕

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aayt

@aayt

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

finely u r back n with wonderful update

beautifully written they r quite comfortable with each other

nk is such a sweetheart after all that he is still concern for her

n he was right also about arnav his past is open book

khushi is very much into him its true ishq per zoor nahi

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Wow... amazing update !!

See this is what i was wondering my self ... how will Khushi cross the threshold to the physical aspect of this relationship.

NB ji i swear the way you write down all these points detailing every emotional aspect its mind blowing.

I mean Payal and her thoughts , her simple logical explanations to Khushi ... helping her cross each hurdle without being in her face ,,, Arnav on the other hand is giving her all the attention he can sum up along with not crowding her too much but then these office make out sessions might just blow in their faces.

And although Arnav will not do anything against her will still like he said he is a hot blooded male terribly attracted to Khushi how long will he be patient ???????

Finally NK ... though he gave unsolicited advice to Khushi he was absolutely correct.

Its like we love both Arnav and Khushi and each stand for their idealogies which inevitably will lead to heart break !! I dont want either of them to suffer!

See after the previous update i thought i will not think about the prologue and enjoy each update as it comes but then this one again has stirred the same emotions in me.

Edited by _disha_ - 12 years ago

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Mahnoor

@Mojoo

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Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Fantttasssttiic loong one update...
I hope u will b doing well now...
Love their dates...calming,relaxing,peacefulness n romance...what else one can ask for...I want Arnav of Urs FF...😉
Last line got my breath away...but have to wait for next update to see his answer...I like it that finally khushi got courage to ask him most obvious thing...love ur writing...best wishes for u n update soonish...