You and Me........ FOREVER! Part 9 updated-pg 98 (24/04/2014)

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Aaj hi sare updates padhe maine...awesum h meri jaan
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Awesome update
That gang really they should killed
Rey and kriya ka fight and noke jhoke
Sangeeta ka jija ji kahana aye hye its so loveable

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Thanks a lot all of you who liked the previous update and commented. I'm happy with the response I'm getting and I hope for the same encouragement from you guys in the future.

Sorry for the delayed update again. This time I haven't got a solid excuse but just my laziness to blame.

Sorry Darls😳

Everyone Enjoy the update--

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Part 7

Life is a name of roller coaster and this roller coaster gave us many shocks. We still survived because of the beautiful ending to this roller coaster, the ending of Love. But for me this bumpy ride doesn't seem to end.

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It doesn't matter how much effort I have to make but I will not let go of it so easily.

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Rey was very positive after his meet with Sanjana. So he decided to once again visit Kriya's house. He went but the door was clossed. "Aap?", he heard her voice from behind. He turned around an what he found was enough for him to fell for her all over again. She was wearing a long coat with long boots and a woolen cap on her head. She was dressed like this due to the cold weather outside. She was surely looking cute and the reason why he loved her that way because she looked like a doll which Rey's older cousin sister had when he was five and he used to say that I'm gonna marry this doll.

He just got lost in that serene beauty. The perfectly carved lips, the heart melting eyes, her little nose adding more to her inncoence and moreover the way she was dressed. He stepped towards her and she stepped back. He kept coming forward and she walked backwards till the time she hit the door.

He held her from her waist and opened the door behind them and took her and himself inside, carefully not letting her go. He got dangerously close to her, she gulped hard on looking him staring at her lips. His body was pressing hard against hers. They felt the heat rise. A tide of emotions passed through them. In that moment Kriya forgot all the issues and problems her life was giving her. Rey sensed her awkwardness but also the desire which was building up. He couldn't even control at this time, after so long they had been that close.

She shut her eyes tight and her breath got uneven due to the proximity they were sharing. He put his lips on hers. She shrugged on his action but didn't resist. He bit her lower lip and them pressed his lips on hers softly. His grip on her waist got tightned and the kiss got deeper. She didn't respond but let Rey dominate.

He pulled back after some time, her eyes were still closed.

"You can open your eyes now"

She slowly opened her eyes and looked everywhere except him.

"Now tell, are we meant to be?"

"Rey, this kiss doesn't mean that I agreed to anything."

"Oh really? Phir mujhe apne itna paas kese aane diya"

"Look I never denied that I love you. I just said that we can't be together after all what happened in my life".

"Oh wow Miss Ghai, here I'm trying to make things better but you are stuck on your useless point".

"My point is not useless Rey. Aap bus chale jao, move on!"

"What the hell Kriya, you are my only Love, how can you even say that".

Anger was visible on his face, her constant denial was making him go crazy. It was enough of his patience. On Kriya's side, she again broke up into one more crying session which was her normal routine now. He couldn't see her in pain nor he could do anything without her acceptance.

Things were getting miserable and there was no cure to be seen. Kriya was right on her place, doing everything which she could do to save her Love from the cruel world but Rey was also sacrificing not caring about the outer world but the efforts made by both of them were doing nothing but making them get away from each other.

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This is enough, I can't take this anymore. Kriya k bina jeena is like har roz marna tou aik hee baar main kiun naa mar jaoon. Let this case finish once and for all. Aik dafa jo pain seh loonga woh uss k liye poori zindagi achi bana degi. He stepped on the window pane from the 12th floor of the tallest building in Dehradun. He let himself to the nature's flow and took the last step forward which made him go away from his Love Forever!

There he lied on the road with blood covering him with a note in his hand. His eyes were telling a long story of emotions, passion, love and dedication but what was covering all of these things was grief which he left for Her to rely on.

What did he think? She will be out of all the problems after this step, NO! He left her there with a neverending guilt and sorrow.

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So guys, how's it?

Don't glare at me, this wasn't the last part and it's not even gonna end like this but sadly I have to say that this SS is going to finish in 2-3 more updates.

Do comment and hit the like tab.

Appreciation and Criticism, both welcome!

Love ya all,

Soha!

Edited by Sohad3fan - 11 years ago