Virika OS (Collection) - Moments...New OS Pg 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys!

I know I should be revising for my exams but what to do, Virika won't let me! Me and my friends were talking about alcohol and I got reminded of when jeevika got drunk during their honeymoon, so my mind started working on its own and now I'm here with a new Virika OS! It continues from when jeevika falls unconscious and viren takes her back to their hotel after the whole muqadma scene! Hope you like it!

And for all those Telugu people reading this, it might seem familiar as I realised I had 'seen' a similar scene in more than one film whilst proof-reading this...but oh well!

Quick note: Jeevika is a little more outgoing than the actual show! She is louder and friendlier with viren, but dressing and blushing wise she is the same! viren is the same as the show, but just a little bit more naughty!

Ok enough of my blabber and to the actual OS now!

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Hangover

The fierce rays of the sun penetrated through the wide windows straight onto her face. The light from the sun wasn't helping her in any way as a throbbing headache took over her, she compressed her closed eyes together trying block as much light as possible, but that action of hers only made her headache more severe. Lightly pressing her temple with her hand she sat up leaning against the back board to give her support. She slowly opened her eyes to see viren sitting near her on his phone, in his shorts, SHIRTLESS! She was so shocked to see him like this and couldn't figure out what was going on! At that moment she also realised she wasn't in the clothes she was wearing the night before, instead she was wearing Viren's large t-shirt and shorts that reached up to her calves. She was scared, confused, upset, clueless and a million other things, she couldn't reason her condition and her headache made it harder for her to think clearly. He was on his phone, but looked up at her when he heard her moan in pain. He put his phone down onto the bedside table next to jeevika and went and sat closer to her as she hugged her knees and tried to cover herself up with the duvet.

Viren: 'How you feeling?' he said as her drew circles on her knee with his fingers, she got freaked out by this action of his and shivered slightly.

Jeevika: What happened?

Viren: 'A lot of things happened' he said whilst staring into her petrified eyes, she couldn't understand what he was saying and got even more scared.

Jeevika: Meaning?

Viren: 'Meaning...' he kissed her knee and traced his hand up her arm to her face, stroking it slightly. She kept on quivering and closed her eyes not knowing what to do or say as she felt her eyes tear up.

He moved closer and was just about to kiss her when they heard a knock on the door, he quickly got up and pulled on a t-shirt whilst she sighed in relief but was still scared as hell. He went and opened the door, letting the person waiting outside in while he grabbed a towel and made his way to the bathroom whilst secretly winking at her, freaking her out.

The young lady who was probably in her late twenties came up to jeevika with a bright smile on her face; she was wearing a white sari and had a trolley with various things with her.

Mina: Hi! I'm Mina, the nurse here at this hotel

Jeevika: Hi?

Mina: You're probably thinking what I'm doing here right?

Jeevika: Yeah, I'm sorry.

Mina: It's ok! I'm here because you were heavily drunk last night so I came to check on you!

Jeevika: DRUNK???

Mina: Yeah, anyways how are you feeling now?

Jeevika: umm...my head really hurts and I don't remember anything!

Mina: Don't worry your heads hurts because of the hangover! Just have these medicines and drink this and you will be fine in a bit.

Jeevika: Thank you

She was taking the medicines when the nurse said something surprising her.

Mina: By the way Ma'am, You are very lucky to have a man like him as your husband!

Jeevika: Meaning?

Mina: I'll tell you...

*FLASHBACK*

Viren was carrying an unconscious jeevika back to their room in his arms, after she passed out because of the excess alcohol she accidently drank.

Viren: Can someone help me please?

Receptionist: Yes sure sir... Anand, help sir with the keys

Viren: And can you send a female nurse as well, to room 302 please?

Receptionist: Definitely sir!

Viren smiled and took jeevika to their room whilst a porter helped him open the door, he laid her down on the bed but jeevika was holding onto Viren's shirt tightly and wouldn't let go. He smiled at her innocence and slowly loosened her grip on his shirt and made her lie down properly. He tucked her hair behind her ears, so that he could admire her beautiful face, and pressed a soft kiss on her forehead before he heard a knock on the door. He quickly went to open it and let the nurse Mina in.

Viren: Umm...My wife has passed out because she accidently drank some cocktails, can you help me out a bit?

Mina: Sure sir!

She went up to jeevika to have a look at her to try and get an idea of how drunk she actually was!

Mina: You might want to change her clothes as she seems rather uncomfortable in her current clothes.

Viren: Oh yh! One minute!

He rushed up to the wardrobe and tried to find Jeevika's clothes but no matter how hard he searched he couldn't, so in the end he just gave the nurse his new t-shirt and shorts, which were too large for jeevika but it also meant that she would have been really comfortable in them.

Viren: I can't find anything else!

Mina: It's fine! So I'll leave and you can change her clothes.

Viren: Actually I was thinking if you could change her clothes for me!

Mina: But you're her husband, you have full right over her!

Viren: I know, but I don't want to do something she might not like and feel uncomfortable with, and I don't want to misuse my rights on her, especially when she's not in her senses!

Mina smiled in amazement as she had only ever seen guys who would grab every opportunity they had to get close to their partner, but this was the first time she saw a man respecting his wife's feelings and comfort level and not taking advantage of his rights. She smiled as she heard his answer and took the clothes from his hand as he went into the bathroom to get changed himself. He stayed in the bathroom for a while until the nurse called out to him telling him she was done. He went back into the room and thanked the nurse.

Viren: Thank you so much!

Mina: No problem! And by the way, you're wife is very lucky to have you as her husband! It would have been amazing if every guy in the world thought and acted like you do. Be happy always!

Viren: Thank you!

Mina: I'll come back in the morning to give her some medicines and to check up on her!

Viren: Ok, see in you in the morning! Good Night!

Mina: Good night!

She went away and viren locked the room before settling down on the bed next to his life. He adoringly stroked her hair and took her into his arms, trying to fall asleep.

Jeevika: 'I love you virenji' she murmured quietly in her sleep which didn't go unnoticed by viren whose eyes flied open wondering if he just heard what he thought he did!

Viren: 'Jeevika...Jeevika?' when he heard no reply he understood she must be talking in her sleep, he smiled and kissed her forehead, 'I love you too!'

*END OF FLASHBACK*

Jeevika now had tears in her eyes listening to the nurse's words about her amazing husband, and understood that he was just joking with her in the morning, to mess about with her. She couldn't believe what she had heard and just wanted to hug viren tightly at that moment.

Mina: Ok Ma'am I'll leave now! Take care of yourself!

Jeevika: Yeah, thank you!

The nurse left and she left jeevika thinking about her caring husband, she had no idea that viren was like this. She knew he was not like the other guys but she didn't know he was that different. At the moment she felt like the luckiest girl in the world! Viren came back out of the bathroom and jeevika looked at him with love, while he looked at her with a flirty smile. She decided to get him to confess he was joking and so replaced the happy look on her face with a serious look. He came and sat beside her on the bed.

Jeevika: What happened last night?

Viren: I already told you! A lot of things happened!

Jeevika: Like what?

Viren: 'like' he stared at her lips and leaned forward while she pushed him back.

Jeevika: Stop lying!

Viren: I'm not!

Jeevika: I know exactly what happened last night!

Viren: You do?

Jeevika: YES!

She took a pillow into her hand and started hitting him with it.

Jeevika: Why did you lie? ... Do you know how scared I was? ... I was thinking about the craziest things! ... How could you even say such a thing?

All this time viren was trying to dodge the hits whilst also trying to say a few words in between

Viren: Hey...I was just joking! ...Stop! ...Oww! ...Jeevika! ...I'm sorry!

Jeevika stopped as ran out of energy, viren was taking a few breaths and jeevika stared at him with mock anger.

Viren: Phew! Calm down! I was just kidding! I would never do anything that you don't like! Ever!

Jeevika looked at him, the happiness in her face taking the form of a smile, before she started grinning like an idiot; she pulled him close and dug her face in his chest, with one arm around his neck and the other around his waist. He was initially taken aback by her move but soon adjusted himself in her arms and tightened his grip around her.

Jeevika: Why are you so perfect?

Viren: Because I'm your husband!

Jeevika smiled and gripped him more tightly; they stayed like that for a bit until viren said something.

Viren: You should get drunk again; I like you when you're drunk! You do the most amazing things!

Jeevika pulled back with a sarcastic 'really?' look on her face while he winked at her, she couldn't help but smile so she just hid herself in his chest while he enclosed her in his warm hug.

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So how did you guys find it??
Please comment!!
Tomatoes and chappals allowed too!!!
And im thinking of adding another scene to this, it will kinda carry on from this scene, it will be a lil bit more romantic but i will only write another part if i get a good response!
Thanks xx
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aashna.irani thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woww!!!!!!
such a cute update !!!
our viren is sooo cuteee and caring !!!!!!!
their bond is just brilliant, they don't need to do anything big to prove their love its just the small things that always matter.
thanks a lot!!!!!!! hope yo give us more stories like this !
~aashna
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Edited by aashna.irani - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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fantastic update..loved it
nicely written
aww...viren is the best husband
pillow fight of virika was so cute
the way jeevika dug her face in viren's arm was so sweet
Virika's bond is so special
thanx for pm.

Edited by vishwa94 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I liked and also commented so plz pm me
Xxx
:-D:-D:-D
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I found out bcos I am Telugu.
But it was different from the original one
It's nice n very good
All the best for ur exams
Edited by NeetuHarshi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres
😊 :-)
That was truely amazing
I loved it
The cute bond
N viren is just so freaking adorable
Do write more
Edited by girl97 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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*editted*
OMG! OMG!
This was sooo good!
I mean.. I WANT TO SEE THIS IN REAL
Can someone beat Viren?
NO CHANCE!
HE is a PURFECT HUSBAND ❤️
You potrayed the feelings sooo well!
I M SPEECHLESS! 👏👏
Edited by Charucrazy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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AWEEE...
Awesome! Lovely!
Drunk jeevika...
Viren just played wid her...
it was reallly wowww...LOved it !
Yes! Waiting eagerly for d next update...! PLEASE...!!!! Update...
N roses for u...NO TOMATOES N CHAPPALS!!!! ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow wow wow wow suchhh a romantic updateee hayyyeee just tooo awesome... Cant wait for the another parttt... Plah ypdate soon eagerly waiting best of luck for ur exams all the besttt plsh one more updateee plshhh... Eagerly waiting thnks for the PM...
Title could be talli jeevika with romantic virennn sry for the bad idea...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update...im a telugu girl!😉 i did see in 1 film i guess!😉 but the way you wrote its fabulous!

Superb update..continue sooon!!😊😊 thanks for the pm

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