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clarissajohn

@clarissajohn

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#551

Superb update madhu esp the akash and payal ones

All both couple are in more comfortable position though not much said between them but the feeling do the talking here

So garima seems to have understood what akash wanted

Its getting intriguing and interesting

Expecting an update soon dear

Edited by clarissajohn - 12 years ago

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gifttag

@gifttag

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#552

I just discovered this fabulous story and finished all 13 chapters in one go. I just can't believe that someone can write so brilliantly. If a start I think I will run out of adjectives to discribe this beautiful piece of writing, it was a like a poetry that had such hidden meaning that one has to read few time to connect all the dots correctly like wise I had to read certain chapters few time to understand correctly and to take it all in, after reading the chapter about dreams a few times I was on such high that it took a while to calm down.
Would you consider adding me to your PM list if you do send them if not I will just bookmark the page and read the further updates that way but I am definitely not missing a single future chapter, you have got me hooked good and proper that I can't wait for the next chapter.

Thanks for writing this amazing piece of writing.
Will eagerly wait for next update.

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Annie12

@Annie12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#553

this was a wonderful update!!! superb and brilliant.

Missed the conversation that would have happened between arnav and Khushi in the morning. Everything from Aakash's perspective after that.

Wonder whats going to happen in the one month that Arnav is gone. Things getting interesting. Hope you will update soon.

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ducky_anne

@ducky_anne

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#554

GAH. I wonder how Khushi will react knowing Anjali is thinking about marrying Shyam?

Great update! Where is Arnav going for a month to? A month is so long!!!

Edited by ducky_anne - 12 years ago

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710617

Suspended

Posted: 12 years ago

#555

Madhu I am hooked to ur daily updates... Why tease me..

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rulama

@rulama

Sparkler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#556

So Circle R and Box lighting is in Panic mode due to the missing Khushi and lo in comes both Arnav and Khushi with their horses to set their mind at rest!

Well, Arnav doesn't like to go without informing Khushi and why is that? Anyway she can't ride much with a bad shoulder and Akash is having a whale of a time wooing Payal!

Poor Arnav he has to go back to mustering for a month! while the doc is able to romance!

Wonder when the'll come to know who Shyam is!

Loved the update.

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IPK007

@IPK007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Love the way this story is progressing along with Arnav and Khushi's relationship. This was a superb update. One of my favorites so far..😊

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BSRaizada

@BSRaizada

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#558

Hi madhu, firstly I came across ur ff when saiyuji recommended ur walk the line! Since then I'm I'm big fan of urs! Well.. Walk he line was epic n this dusty heaven is also no less!!
I really loved how u portrayed each n every character! Even jp n hp!! Kudos to u!
Kindly pm me when u update! Already sent u a buddy request, plz accept!

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vandana.sagar

@vandana.sagar

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#559

Hi,

Sorry for delayed response ...

But as usual I loved it...loved how when Payal comes riding to him to tell him about her father...he knew this is the kind of woman he wanted... loved payal reaching out for Akaash as her first choice in the case of a problem...loved Akaash comforting her so rightfully and taking over...I could visualise the strong silent support his presence and he provide to her... Unknowingly they have moved on together in their relationship...and that kiss on the forehead...it was romantic and sweet!

Loved how everyone was worried about Khushi and the danger that she might be in.

Trying to figure out what happened, where she has been for 3 days and then only to see Arnav bring in her in...but the surprise for the brothers seeing each other, and Aman...am glad Arnav left out some details !

I love the concern for Khushi he feels...but he feels more than that we know...I love how he asks to meet her before he leaves and loved the way he tells her he is going for a month...( like he feels she has a right to know ) and loved what his eyes said to her ...awww!

Loved back home his family s concern for her and finding out that she was with him...

Aman and la love the too

So where is he off to for a month...?

Waiting to read the next part! Beautiful !