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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
interesting case and loving theupdates

thanx di.

i am glad you liked the update

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

Originally posted by: unishaz
superb update dear.. loved it dear.. Thanks for pms.. update soon..

thanx dear.

i am glad you liked the update.

your welcome.

i will update soon

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: ShanayaShaleen
Awsum Update Meghu..!!! Wowww! Riya..Awsum Work My Dimple Doll..Hmm the case is really complex! Leena k bhai ne uska baby abort karaya...Aaarrrggghhh! Son Of A Bitch! Uggghhh! N usne un dono ko marwaya 😡 😡 Aise bas***d ko toh phaasi hi honi chahiye!! Huuuhhh! Oye Hoye.!!! Raesha goin as couple!! Aayesh in black saree n Rathod lost..!!! Shree DJ cool...Chotu Waiter🤣 Bg Song...Chahun Main Ya Naa..Haaye! Lov it! ! U knw dat im hopelessly addicted to Aashiqui 2 songs! Evryone Happy wid Riya's work! Proud of u My Dimple Doll!! Thanxx fr d pm! Continuee Soon..!!

thanx shanu.

yes she worked really awesome.

yes he killed both of them.

thanx dear.

your welcome.

i will update soon.

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Aks13
Super duper amazing update dr.

Awww Arjun felt something for her but don't knw wht is it????

Loved Arjun's concern for Riya.

Wow always reminded him of Rosh by her actions.

The case was interesting n emotional.

How can a brother do this to his own sis???? He is a monster not a human being.

Awww Rathod was lost in Aisha.

Samsha's dancing part was so cute.

Yippiiie the solved the case coz of Riya's presence of mind.

Loved the way Rathod praised her.

Thanks for pm dr.

Continue soon.

thanx dear.

yes he felt something for her but he dont know what was this.

yes riya sometimes remind of roshni.

yaa he is a monster. i also want to kill them.

yes they solved the case because of her.

your welcome.

i will update soon.

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: sharmaayushi
Awesome update di
Riya is great fatabulous job by riya
Arjun accepted that he likes when riya cares for her
shasa's part was amazing
continue soon
thanx for pm and such a lovely update
will be waiting

thanx my sweety ayu.

yes she is great

yes he accepted.

i will update soon

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Originally posted by: Chocolate_barun
loved it
was impressed with riya's work
arjun ko riya ko dekhkar roshini yaad aati hai
rathore and ayesha going as couple and dancing so romantic
case is heading to find its real culprit

can't wait for next one
update soon
thanks for pm

thanx dear.

yes when he sees riya he remembers roshni

i will update son

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

First of all sorry guyes main kuch ke comments ke reply nahi de payi.

i am really sorry but thanx for giving my story great responce.

Special thanx to

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here is the next part.

this part is specially dedicated to my devil aka devildiva21 and piyu aka ll_piya_ll

and this part is little bit emotional also

Scrool down

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Shweta Gupta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#148

PART-5

Rathore: aaj agar hum case solve kar paye hai to sirf riya ki vajah se. Welldone riya.

Riya: thanx sir.

Rathore caaled dayoff

so sasha and chotu goes to rathore suv and ariya shree goes to arjun car.

In Sasha Suv

Ayesha and rathore are thinking about there dance and chotu is sitting quitely. Rathore is stealing glances of ayesha through mirror but ayesha is unaware of that and she was looking from outsideand also thinking about the dance.

Chotu: sirr...

Rathore: broked his terrance and says haan chotu.

Chotu: sir aaj ka case kitna emotional tha na.

Rathore: haan kisi bhai ko apni behen ke saath aisa nahi karna chahiye tha.

Ayesha: haan sir koi aisa kaise gir sakta hai.

Rathore: ayesha yahi duniya hai or hame isse phase karna hoga because we are officers or hame to yeh sab roz dekhna padhta hai.

Ayehsa: jee sir..

Chotu: but aaj hum yeh case agar solve kar paye to sirf riya ki vajah se hain na sir.

Rathore: haan she is very intelligent girl.

Ayesha: or sweet and cute bhi sir.

Rathore: yes she is cute and true hearted nature.

Chotu: sir vo mera ghar aa gaya.

Rathore: sorry vo baaton baaton main pata nahi chala.

Chotu: koi baat nahi byee and goodnt sir and ayesha.

Rathore: byee and goodnt chotu.

Ayesha: byee goodnt.

Rathore: ayesha

Ayesha: jee sir

Rathore: main tumhara driver to hoon nahi jo tum peeche baithe ho?

Ayesha: ohh sorry sir main abhi aage aati hoon.

Rathore: hmm

Ayesha come towards front seat and rathore drive the car in between driving both are stealing glances eachother.

Rathore: umm ayesha

Ayesha: jee sir

Rathore: you are looking beautiful. This colour suits you.

Ayesha blushes and says thankyou sir.

Rathore: ayesha hum office ke bahar hain so you can call me sameer.

Ayesha again blush and says sir main aapka naam kaise le sakti hoon aap to mere boss hain.

Rahtore: to kya main tumhara dost nahi ban sakta?

Ayesha: nahi sir aisa nahi hai.

Rathore: to fir mera naam leke bolo.

Ayesha: but

Rathore: no buts.

Ayesha: ok sir

Rathore: ayesha

Ayesha: ok sameer

Rathore: thats good lo tumhara ghar aa gaya

Ayesha: byee sameer.

Rathore: byee and he headed towards there home.

In Ariya Suv

Shree: rii you are awesome

Riya: kyun shree

Shree: are rii tune case jo solve kiya hai.

Riya: maine kya kiya jo kiya vo mera farz tha.

Arjun: riya shree is right just becuse of you we solve the case.

Riya: thank you sir but yeh maine akele nahi isme aap sabh ka bhi haath hai or upar se yeh mera farz bhi tha.

Shree: but sir koi bhai apne behen ko kaise mar sakta hain?

Arjun: haan shree lagta hai iss duniya mai bhai behen ka pyaar khatam ho gaya hain.

Riya was remembering his bhai

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Kunal(19yrs): riyu kya hua tu itni udas kyun hai?

Riya(12yrs): kuch nahi bhaiya.

Kunal: sach sach bata

Riya : innocently bhaiya aap mujhe jaan se to nahi mar do ge na?

Kunal: was shocked at her question but soon he reply with a smile meri pari aisa kyun pooch rahi hain?

Riya: bhaiya vo main na aaj news main dekha ki ek bhai ne apni behen ko mar diya just because ussne apne cultural ke aadmi se shaadi nahi ki to mujhe aisa laga.

Kunal: tujhe tera bhai aisa lagta hai?

Riya: nahi mujhe mere bhaiya super hero, smart, handsome or bahut pyaare lagte hai

Kunal: to baccha tune aisa kaise soch liya i love you more than my life or mai aisa kabhi nahi karoong.

Riya: i am sorry bhaiya.

Kunal: koi baat nahi riyu.

Riya: bhaiya vo apni behen se pyaar nahi karta tha kya? koi apni behen ko kaise mar sakta hai?

kunal: riyu iss duniya main alag alag tarah ke insaan hote hain. Koi accha to koi bura or rahi baat uski to uske andar apni behen ke liye koi pyaar nahi tha.

Riya: haan bhaiya aap sahi keh rahe ho.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~FLASHBACK ENDS~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Shree: shaking riya riya tu theek hain na.

Riya: come out of her thought haan main theek hoon. Sir aapne gadi kyun rok di?

Arjun: riya tum theek to ho na?

Riya: haan sir

Arjun: vo jab shree tumhe shake kar raha tha or tum javab nahi de rahi thi so thats why?

Riya: i am fine sir.

Arjun: sure??

Riya: yes sir.

Arjun: hmm and soon he start the car.

Riya(MV): kaha ho bhaiya I miss you mujhe aapki or bhabhi ki bahut yaad aa rahi hain. I missed you so much main uss sikender ko nahi chodungi jisne mujhse aap logo ko cheena hai.

Arjun(MV): yeh riya ko kya ho gaya tha? kyun mujhe aisa lagta hai jaise iski aakhen kuch bolna chahati hai? Kyun aisa lagta hai jaise iski aakho main ek dard hai? Akhir kya raaz hai tumhara riya?

Riya: sir mera ghar aa gaya

Arjun: yaa..

Riya: thanx for the lift sir.

Arjun: hmm..

Riya: byee shree goodnight byee sir and goodnight.

Shree: goodnight riyu and byeee.

Arjun: just nodded his head.

NEXT MORNING

All are present in ETF office. Rathore was reading news paper arjun was sipping his chai and reading file and choree, ayesha, riya and liza are talking. Suddenly shree phone rings. He see the caller id and smile mischiveously.

Caller: hello..

Shree: hie jaan kaise ho?

Caller: main to theek hon aap kaise ho?

Shree: jee abhi tak to hamari tabayat theek nahi thi par jabse aapka call aaya hai tabse to hamari tabayat ek dum theek hain.

All are listing shree talk and wonder whom shree were talking but riya understand this she was happy.

Caller: accha ji to yeh baat hai

Shree: haan ji.

Caller: kya baat hai aaj humse itni pyaar bhari baatein?

Shree: vo kya hain na aapki janeman bahut yaad aa rahi thi.

Caller: vo to hame pata hai.

Shree: befor he could speak someone snattched his phone.

Now my fingers are crying.