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RapChick101

@RapChick101

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#621

Chapter 57.

Aww!
Khushi!
She's such a Girl!
Just like a cute one.
Wish they Talk!
Actually and properly.

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#622

I found this story at night n I read all 57 chapter in one go

I really really like this stry ... How it began from when they were stepping in to their teenage years n it continues til they are about to make some major life changing decisions ... I really like the concept

Plz pm pm me yr next update , I have send u a request

Thanks

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mayurisb80

@mayurisb80

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#623

a new fan for your beautiful story..loving it thoruoghly..cheers M

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-Shilpaa-

@-Shilpaa-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#624

read ur ff in one go and am happy dat i decided to give it a try...😊 U r an amazing writer and ur work is simply fantastic.. i luvd hw u hav shaped up d characters through d years...and am in luv wid ur story... i knw u update frequently which is a very good thing.. bt i still dunno hw am i gonna wait till next monday to read d next chapter... please please please update soon.. luking forward to it...

i'm sending u a buddy request... please do add me and send me PMs for d future updates...

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#625

omg is khushi going for a date!?! wel surves good to arnav... tell him to be more discreat! ;>

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Sisbamboo1

@Sisbamboo1

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#626

I'm crossing my fingers and hoping very desperately that Shyam is not the one who Khushi made reservations with...but then where would the drama and twist come from? Ugh. Stupid Shyam. This is either going to make Arnav really hurt and he will lose hope of reconciliation or it will make Arnav really hurt and make his possessive nature come out with a vengeance and force Khushi to talk about her admision and then they will live happily ever after.

I'm voting for the second outcome!

Is it Arnav's turn to say, "Hum bhi aapse I love you damnit!" since the roles were reversed?

Fabulous chapter! The glimpse into Khushi's thinking process was amazing. It made me understand her and also want to shake her for the unnecessary pain she is causing both of them! But fear of rejection is a very strong emotion to fight against.

Take time for some TLC and enjoy!

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#627

I found this pic the appropriate one for khushi's look! :D So thought of posting😳

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A_R_S

@A_R_S

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#628

Hmm I'm this time a liitle late, but nowadays I'm stucked with more work.

Coming to the latest chapter (Chap 57). To be honest I had expected or better my wish was, that the story continued, where it ended the previous chapter and Arnav also confessing his feelings to Khushi. But you made a big jump and it was for me first somehow confusing and I had to sort my thoughts or digest the info that two years have passed and Arnav still hadn't confessed and then to read it again from beginning.

And I don't know why, but for the first time I have been left not satisfied after reading a chapter of this story. It's not, that you haven't written well. Khushi's insecurity and her fears have been described superbly by you. I think, me not being satisfied has more to do with my wrong expecations and my fear of what will come regarding "the piece of news" and it maybe involves Shyam.

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Originally posted by: Eccentrica
but with the piece of news he was going to get from her any chances of together forever would be crushed

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Originally posted by: Eccentrica
The door to her room opened. "Are you ready Khushi? I've taken reservations for dinner at your favorite restaurant. You don't want us to be late, do you?" She nodded, the mask in place as she gave him a small smile.

I read time and time again. so I can find something to 100% eliminate the possibility, that Shyam is the one, who opened the door. But no, u have done a good job. 👍🏼

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Deepa jha

@Dee_J

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#629

res😉

Edited!

Firstly I was shocked that u updated so soon as you said it would take few hours😲

But then I am happy that you updated soon!😃

The chappy was superb!

Arnav's homecoming brought smile to my face!

Hopefully he will set everything all right in their relationship 🤔

You did mention in one of your notes that aman or aradhana might have told khushi about arnav's departure! Sicne aradhna ain't the one, so is it aman? Is that the thing hidden by him? Or something else? Curious to know!

Khushi is at work? I hope things don't get worse as she didn't came to pick him!

Update next chappy soon😳

Edited by dj_arshifan - 12 years ago