Chaitu...
Guess who is here...???😃 😃
Finally I made it Chaitu... 38 chapters... I covered it up...😉... Yaayyy...😛
Thread :1 from Ch-18 onwards...
The way you portrayed a restless Arnav was just great...I mean it was the simplest way but the reader could feel it's intensity very well... N the idea of food fair was awesome too...
It wad sooo funny to read the part where you described about Arnav's group's mission:Making Sandwich...😆 You know what you won't believe me , Even I was tempted to have Pani puri and I just went out and had it...😛... I really couldn't help it Chaitu...You really rock...😉...
Khushi's caring side was sweet...She really waited 2hrs even in her exam time..N that was sooo sweet of her...😳
The innocence and tenderness of LOVE at an age of high school life was depicted by beyond perfection... Chaitu you amaze me.. You really do...👏
You never fail to notice each and every tiny things N emotions with keen eyes as if you are being a part of the situation... I wonder if someone can be this much part of a moment even if it is in real... N I have now 3 writers in my this list including you... Other two are Saiyu [Rasgulla_sp] and Linny [Aquiline] ...
Hats off to you Chaitu for your brilliant talent ,coz I have never read any FF in IF which smoothly deals with TEEN LOVE... Yup the epitome of a Teen Love Story...You are a versatile writer Chaitu...A writer who deserves thousands of readers...
Thread 2
A very well organised Farewell ..to top it Khushi as Arnav...😉...That was fabulous...I'm loving the unsaid bond between them...
There 'll be no one who hadn't gone through a phase where he/she had to choose their future/career their own and it was a crucial moment we know... You described about it in a beautiful way...
The reunion scene was just awesome...I just reminded of my get together with ma old friends.
Chaitu, you are an expert in painting "gradual changes " in a perfect way..Chapter named 'Reflections' is the most suitable example of it... N I really enjoyed the way you manipulated Shyam's character... Fabulous...
At some moments of life we might needed a push to do what we have been longing for , or some instincts just help us to realize something hidden... You just pointed it out just writing the chapter ' A date that was not meant to be'...
You already knew I'm crazy about rain N your updates always make me even more... 'When it rains it pours'...I was grinning like an idiot after reading it... I'm in love with the chapter... You know what I love you Chaitu..🤗...
N I love to hum the song" It's Gonna Be Love" sung by Mandy Moore .. It so fits the picture...
Chaitu who has a masters in 'Making things favourable without any loopholes' would make any simple situation memorable n interesting... N I love to read those portions again N again , Like Arnav's dad's new car, driver's early leave, Aaradhana's mention about Guptas especially Khushi and so on... *Chuckle*...
I think I was more enthusiastic that Arshi on their first date.. I mean the way you tell us this story of "Eventually Blooming Love Between Two Different Souls" is the reason behind my eagerness... Honestly say Chaitu the pace of the storyline never held me back from reading it further...
Thread 3
"In a sheepish voice she said, Oops I forgot you Arnav I guess food especially chat does that to me.." Same here..😆...*grinning like a fool*...I always forget about your Jijaji when it comes to food.. He complains often.. But Kya Karoon,..? Mein aisi hoon...😛...
An unconventional Khushi and a reserved Arnav is mere reflection of our life Chaitu.. You know what, he says he enjoys that with me... I mean I love to explore life as it comes to me and I even drag him into it... For him I'm the one who teach him how to live each moment with full of life... I love that scene to the core...N the events of first date made me speechless... I don't have enough words,I'm just like
OMG, this Shyam is sooo scary you know... I was keeping my fingers crossed while reading some chapters about him..
Love is such a wonderful feeling ya... It feels sooo great being in LOVE with someone...
"I miss you ..she had heard and read a lot about the entire world stopping under certain circumstances but experienced it first-hand only today..." Chaitu how simply you wrote something which made me think deep... it's sooo true...
LOVE is a mxture of feeling right..? desire , care , possessiveness, jealousy all have it's role.. N the way you showed it making use of a Diwali Party was beautiful..
Thread 4
New thread N new hopes too... To realise that there is someone to stood up for us in a crisis is really a solace... For Arnav it was Khushi who smoothly handled Shyam N she even refused to hear Arnav's name from Shyam's mouth... Chaitu you succeeded in portraying that situation very well...
Motherly love N concern were oozing out like honey out of comb in chapter: Contrasts.. I loved reading it...
A new development : it was a glad news that Arnav got selected to HBS.. but causes pain too... I very well now how it would be like when our loved ones have to stay away from us.. I have experienced it.. I mean it's been two N half years since he had gone to Australia to pursue his Masters...*deep sigh*... But you are right Chaitu career is equally important...
I hope Arnav N Khushi together 'll sort it out...
I can go on and on and on... Coz you write so well... I'm eager to read next update... When 'll I get one...???
I LOVE YOU CHAITU...😳
