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Posted: 12 years ago
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Khush, new OS from you and I forget I have assignments due today and I have to still start on them. Reading this and keeping the Taani you gave us via Guzarish, I would say I loved it. It's like D3 never existed, it has always been Guzarish only. And I kind of like that. You keeping the originality alive that made me fall for this story in first place.

Keep it up Sissy. You rocked it as always and you know that. Congratulations on one more brilliant piece and keep on writing. Waiting for an Guzarish update 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome,loved the carying rey.loved taani my sweety.
I haven't yet read the guzarish but soon going to read.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: *Khushii*



Shaz! Getting comments for you means...! Well, you know 😛 Yea, CVs keep on putting black spots on Taani's character which each track =/ Anyways, really glad to know you like my Taani!! I wish this was the Taani shown. Show would have been on new heights right now =/

Oh well.. Yes, it'a natural to fix things so I too feel Rey did the right thing here.

Will update in 2-3 days. Gonna type the update 😛


Ah yes...I know. For a change, your PM came when I am not coincidentally doing my PCM under the hawk eyed random checking on by mother🤣. Waiting for Guzarish

PS...I had absolutely no wariness before I started to read. I knew I could trust you & your writing. And my absolite love for it<3
Edited by ..DamonCrazy.. - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww... khushi..

must b so difficult for u to write it like this 😳

moreover .. putting notes to convince us..to read..

knowing some will not read it

but... as u have to go wid the flow of story..

the way u must've planned it... its nyce 😊

she seems furious wid kriya's return.. highly upset n disappionted..🤢

even if rey got his love back...

he just can't stop caring for her...

saving from the cruel nest of shivam...her savior 😛

hope his care does'nt go beyond dat...😆

coz i love kriyaansh.. 😉

& I knw.. u too won't do dat... coz u love kr too 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
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when i read that its gonna be a TR OS...I ws actually like... "WHAT THE F**K IS THIS... HAS SHE LOST IT..?? 😡 " ... Bt since its gonna b included in guzarish aooner or later..so i read it...and trust me it ws pretty hard for me to even start reading it...cz i have EXTREME HATRED towards Taani... No issues wid Rey..but Taani...i jst hate her like anything...
This ws different...though my hatred for her can nvr decrease...still i liked this OS... Rey's concern towards her as a frnd n all...it was nice... Lets see whn u include it in the story...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice 1 khushi. . . .
Realy a gud 1. . . .
*keeping guzarish wali taani in mind*
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this is the first and probably will be the last thing I liked about TR...really khushi u r an amazing writer
waiting for Guzarsh update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome OS...I Read It Only Because Of u & Guzarish...Plzzz Update Guzarish Soon & Thnx 4 d PM 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I personally loved it because frankly i didn't keep the Guzarish once Taani in my mind. I am really impressed with this OS and i loved it. It was great reading it!

Of course i still know it is connected to Guzarish to i will keep that in my mind too!


-Marium
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lik many others,This is my First time too n of ofcourse d last one too.. N d reason is only n only u Khushi.. Had it not been "Guzarish",I would neva eva hav read it !! Sach..

Wea to start wid??? Umm.. Oka.. I actually loved it coz its about Guzarish's tani not d insecure,confused,selfish d3's tani wid no individuality.. I hate how her character has been portrayed.. Here I c a Strong,Confident girl who understands whats goin around her n tak decisions calmly.. Not d self doubted one !!

Loved Reyaansh's concern for hr friend.. Dis Reyaansh is actually no more now But I hope It doesnt go beyond dis.. Kriya wud b left broken.. Nai nai.. Aisa kuch nhi hoga ! He is trying to rectify his mistake which he dint even do intentionally..

Shivam.. Arrrhhh.. Dat creep moron.. Ufff.. Make him learn a lifetime lesson !
Reyam.. Ahhh.. Wht to say about these two people.. They r d strength of D3 indeed n also Guzarish.. I love dis Strong Swayam n Determined Reyaansh !

Tani.. She stood for herself.. Yea she misunderstood Reyaansh buh at d end even realised dat she's wrong !!

One thing which took my notice.. "Go away.. Y do u care.. U got ur love back.."
I really hope,She's not insecure of kriya..

Whats gonna happen???? Tension all over again building up !
But as Even u mentioned.. We Trust u Khushi n also we know you ! So.. Its gonna b KR only all over around.. Its been my dream to c kriya Reyaansh's strength instead of d opposite ! I'v olways seen Reyaansh bein Kriya's strength.. Really wana c d reverse now :)

As it was a weekend,I was expecting an update n was a lil dissapointed dat Got no update.. Thank God.. U gav an OS 😃
Update "Guzaarish" soon n Please continue "Sajda":)

Last question.. Was it difficult to write???😳
Edited by Pihu.k11 - 12 years ago

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