Arshi: Making Khushi Mine II ~THREAD 4

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Maaneet4eve

@Maaneet4eve

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Posted: 12 years ago

#801

Hey!!! I read MKM part 1 and I loved it and when I saw that there is a part 2 I was really very happy... You really are doing a commendable job and the plot of your story is very good... Hope you continue writing more stories on ArHi... :)

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 12 years ago

#802

Oh Lord Arnav is surely going to go crazy

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Amiarisme

@Amiarisme

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Posted: 12 years ago

#803

aaawww i m waiting for rishab's entry
are we going to have lavanya di for chachu?

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#804

finally onto the latest chapter 10
so here goes then
what more new things shall happen in this one then
wait where is she going
awww buaji is going someplace and it seems as if khushi isnt ready to let go of her
well can we blame her either
but am sure he is right about her for sure
what an observation my dear man
ahh so thats why she is going because of her father in law
and what he said of these two females being more capable of things is so true
but this means right that arhi shall be alone
iss baat ka faiyada toh uthana hi padega
funny when he didnt need time alone with her then he gets it
and am sure when he will want her on her own that wont happen too easily
am i right or what
wow it has been that long since he came here huh
well hope there friendship has cemented even more
arnie hope you knwo what this means dude
it means she has just you and you have just her in the house
which means that she will be after you even more than usual mate
aint that just great right
wow am loving this already in the bveginning only
aage aage dekhein hota hai kya
baby sitting hawww arnie apne hone waali patni ko koi aise kehta hai kya
beta abhi toh mil raha hai samay aap ko inke saath aur jab inse pyaar karr bethenge naa tab you will curse the day you didnt take advantage of the same
parr ab kya karen jab tak pyaar inhe ho nahin jaata nothing can be done naa
well thats easier said than done buaji
how can she not do what you asked her not to do
but she sure will miss ya now that you away
chalo at least arnie is there for her
shame he dont seems to think the same naa
really did you actually said that to reassure her or make her more sad yaar
awww sweetie it wont be that bad dear
did i really say that about her huh
dont worry am sure you will be fine for sure i hope so
so true what you say there my dear
parr dont take that to heart khushi as he wont do that
at least one hopes he dont do that at all yaar
well now you know and can say the same too my dear man
koi nahin khushi did that for you there arnie
bhagwaan jaane ab inka kya hoga ji
but i look forward to this for sure hai naa
but did it my dear buaji only time am afraid shall tell what happens
waise at least they arent leaving her completely alone like what she said
awww dont worry dear he will get to know of this
poor khushi right haila inka ab kya hoga
she will be so bored to death and even with him being there wont really help her
parr kiya bhi toh nahin jaa sakta kuch
but then they have to get used to this hai naa
satyanash ho inka i tell ya this boy what do we do with him
gayi bhains paani mein yaar
what do we do with him
hello you are gonna leave her truly alone aint you
really did you ask her why she aint eating
man he is the least knowing person ever i tell you man
now where shall she go mate
inke bharose choda hai and this happens
he has to go away for a day or so now what is she to do
its not nice to leave her alone on the house either
wonder who she can stay with for a day or so now
well of course she is silent mate
all those with whom she used to talk to aint here
and we all know how unobservant you can be mate
man she is crying lets see how he will deal with her now
well its good practice for him for the future when this happens and he is in love with her
mate she aint a child though at moment it seems that she is
gosh this is fun for sure man
awww our poor khushi is missing her buaji
well say something dude comfort her will ya please
dont be silly mate no really
dammit i lost a lot of my comments there
stupid net connection
must find it all now
well mate she does realise this now that its difficult for ya
but then she is sad naa so of course she doesnt know or wanna know for the time being
awww mate she is getting to you aint she
well wouldnt she right when she is really this sad
really did ya really say this
that you are here hai are ya for real or what man
but its okay naa he dont knwo what else to say to her
so funny hai naa that she is alone and not really alone
but what she said is so true too
well i dont know why he is so surprised right
after all she befriended you didnt she
and woh log toh aap ke comparison are much more easier honge nahin naa to befriend
chalo koi nahin this has to be told to him
poor arnie he was just visualising what that would mean to his office if she did the same in his office
haiyye that was so worth it right
awww she sure is getting to him aint she
she sure made sure naa that she has made you feel this way for her
and only she can do this for you mate
well only she is the one who can make him feel this way naa
and this is just the start hai naa
aww he is feeling responsible for her and thats just great
so she wants to go for a fair does she
arrey lekin wahaan jaane mein bhi toh problem hai
she cant go alone and you cant let her go alone either
see no la and no buaji so what she will do now
well well well never knew that he was into photography naa
guess we get to more and more about him dont we
but thats cool too that he has some hobbies and aint just completely workaholic yaar
that would be boring
haila he sure gave her a shock though
wanting to go with her but then he gave us the same shock too
i think he knows what it will be like
and now he cant let you go alone like this naa
you are his responsibility
and this way he can be sure that you are safe too
yes he is a good friend for sure even he dont know that though
awww she hugged him and said thank you
waise she sure gave him another shock right
that hug made him feel something for her
chalo about time too mate
well yeh toh hona hi tha
haila he felt something when he hugged her well why does that not surprise me
beta yeh toh hoga hi naa when this close to her
and this shall happen more and more when you are near her so much
awww he is getting to know more and more of her moods right
and yes she is so like what you said
what else she will make you feel i font know but she will my dear man
bechara doesnt know why he feeling all this for her
and this is just the start of his confusing too
aage aage dekhiye boss hota hai kya
and what she makes him do as well
beta this is khushi we are talking about and she can make people do things that they have never done before in their life
you may be the same and so is she but the situation aint the same mate
haiyye he cancelled his trip for her and now he doesnt know why he did that
koi nahin arnie all in good time for sure
and by the way she has already driven you mad
warna i dont think that you used to talk to yourself before like this
parr hota hai hota hai
pyaar mein aisa bhi hota hai yaar
bechare wont know what hit him when he falls for her hook line and sinker
ahh finally done it havent i caught up to your story
thought wont be able to do so but did
sorry though for this lateness dear
but will try next time not to be so late
cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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RapChick101

@RapChick101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#805

Okay.
Good imagination.

Mohit Sehgal as RR.
Hadn't seen that coming.
But I like ur choice.

-Adya.

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Ayesha

@stunning.ayesha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#806

Nice images
Thanks and update soon

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#807

Lovely pictures. You really selected very good pictures - loved your idea of Raizada Mansion and the way you have envisioned all the characters.

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_disha_

@_disha_

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Posted: 12 years ago

#808

Looks like chapter 11 will be on new thread !!!

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amus5

@amus5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#809

dear anon 😃

thanx for the pics...yes it definitely creates a visual impact on us as the story proceeds...the artistes chosen for each role is perfect especially Sumer singh raizada . i was able to visualise the other artistes but could not put a appropriate face for sumer ...he fits the role to a 'T' ...buaji is just as how i visualised ...so also lavanya...while akshay dogra is a pleasant surprise 😃

aha rishabh raichand is another surprise entry...overall the artistes r well chosen... now the description of the house can be correlated

but what i find as an interesting observation is that there r numerous pics of barun and sanaya that r floating around us ...u have chosen that pic of sanaya and barun that very much shows the description of khushi and arnav - the way they look ( i mean the facial expressions and dressing sense)

thanx for the pm...pls continue soon 😃